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    Help Me Improve My Recitation...

    :salams

    If there are brothers (or sisters) here who are skilled in recitation, I would be grateful if you could very kindly critique my tilawah in a way that may help me improve it, in shaa Allah.

    :jkk:

    Beginning of Surah Yusuf
    https://instaud.io/XOg

    From Surah Luqman
    https://instaud.io/XOv
    Last edited by ImproveMyRec; 23-05-17, 12:56 AM.

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    Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

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    Last edited by Fakhri; 24-05-17, 02:26 PM. Reason: Posted here by mistake. Unnecessary
    LAA ILAAHA ILLALLAH
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      #3
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      Wa alaikum salam

      Your recitation sounds perfect to me, I didnt hear anything wrong, tbh, I doubt that even a tajweed expert will find something wrong.

      Masha'allah very good recitation.
      “Mix with the noble people, you become one of them; and keep away from evil people so that you protect yourself from their evils.”


      Hadhrat Ali (Radiallahu anhu)

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        #4
        Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

        Constructive criticism would be great. :jkk:

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          #5
          Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

          Originally posted by ImproveMyRec View Post
          Constructive criticism would be great. :jkk:
          Really, didnt find anything wrong, dont know if anyone else can spot something..
          “Mix with the noble people, you become one of them; and keep away from evil people so that you protect yourself from their evils.”


          Hadhrat Ali (Radiallahu anhu)

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            #6
            Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

            Where do you think you are doing mistakes, like which parts?
            “Mix with the noble people, you become one of them; and keep away from evil people so that you protect yourself from their evils.”


            Hadhrat Ali (Radiallahu anhu)

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              #7
              Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

              Originally posted by Sky Lark View Post
              Where do you think you are doing mistakes, like which parts?
              :jkk: for replying on this thread.

              I can't answer that, but from my experience I've found there are usually things to improve that the one reciting isn't aware of. One thing I have been told by an ustaadh in the past is that the sound exits from the nose where ideally it shouldn't be the case.

              Although it isn't a mistake as far as I'm aware, it's still something to avoid, though I find it difficult to eradicate, being so used to it.

              There are usually things that go unnoticed that others are able to pick up on. I'm sure there are things I'm doing which need improving/correcting.

              (Baarakallah feek.)

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                #8
                Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

                Originally posted by ImproveMyRec View Post
                :salams

                If there are brothers (or sisters) here who are skilled in recitation, I would be grateful if you could very kindly critique my tilawah in a way that may help me improve it, in shaa Allah.

                :jkk:

                Beginning of Surah Yusuf
                https://instaud.io/XOg

                From Surah Luqman
                https://instaud.io/XOv
                Wa'alaikumsalam wr wb

                The recitation sounds good.
                Sorry not able to help you much on this matter.
                Maybe others can comment on this matter.
                The second audio doesn't sound too clear.

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                  #9
                  Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

                  Originally posted by ImproveMyRec View Post
                  Constructive criticism would be great. :jkk:
                  Probably just me but the way you said Alhamdullilah in the second recitation sounded a bit off in my opinion. But otherwise very well done.

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                    #10
                    Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

                    Originally posted by ImproveMyRec View Post
                    :salams

                    If there are brothers (or sisters) here who are skilled in recitation, I would be grateful if you could very kindly critique my tilawah in a way that may help me improve it, in shaa Allah.

                    :jkk:

                    Beginning of Surah Yusuf
                    https://instaud.io/XOg

                    From Surah Luqman
                    https://instaud.io/XOv
                    و عليكم السلام والرحمة الله وبركاته
                    Have you recorded Surah Luqman before you did Surah Yusuf?

                    The reason why I ask is that you sounded sort of nervous when reciting Surah Luqman, and much more confident when reading SurahYusuf. Somewhat sounded like 2 different reciters.
                    Increase your confidence In sha Allah and you will be A for away.

                    May Allah increase your desire for the Quran and make it a light for your sight and may the Quran on the Day of Judgment come as an intercessor for you. Ameen.
                    “Mu'min” is more that just a title. It is to have Imaan established in the heart and testified to by the limbs.

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                      #11
                      Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

                      Originally posted by ImproveMyRec View Post
                      Constructive criticism would be great. :jkk:
                      when pronouncing the raa, the tip of the tongue should touch the gums of the front teeth,
                      when saying 'qamara', you made every letter heavy, make sure the meem is not heavy, pay attention in not making them all the same when they are right next to each other

                      Make sure you give each letter it's time and each rule it's time, this should be consistent throughout. Some places the letters weren't given enough time and it was a bit rushed and 'uneven'
                      There are smaller details you need to work on but your teacher probably picks up on that and that's better corrected face to face with your teacher.

                      As for reciting through the nose and having a nasal sound throughout, it's quite a common mistake and it takes practice to fix. What helps is to look upwards while reciting and practice/check yourself by closing the nose with your fingers so you can only breathe through your mouth, you will see straight away if the sound was coming through the nose or through the mouth. The more you keep practising and check if your reciting through the nose or not, the easier it gets until soon, the problem disappears.
                      I just found this video on it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ztNd1sYsAc

                      overall, you're really good. May Allah increase you in knowledge of the quran
                      Last edited by Rumaysah~; 03-06-17, 02:23 PM.
                      شَكَوْتُ إلَى وَكِيعٍ سُوءَ حِفْظِي
                      فَأرْشَدَنِي إلَى تَرْكِ المعَاصي
                      وَأخْبَرَنِي بأَنَّ العِلْمَ نُورٌ
                      ونورُ الله لا يهدى لعاصي

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                        #12
                        Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

                        Originally posted by Abu Jarir View Post
                        Probably just me but the way you said Alhamdullilah in the second recitation sounded a bit off in my opinion. But otherwise very well done.
                        You're right. It was off. I repeated the aayah again because I realised the mistake there.
                        :jkk:

                        Originally posted by Miss Foxxy View Post
                        و عليكم السلام والرحمة الله وبركاته
                        Have you recorded Surah Luqman before you did Surah Yusuf?

                        The reason why I ask is that you sounded sort of nervous when reciting Surah Luqman, and much more confident when reading SurahYusuf. Somewhat sounded like 2 different reciters.
                        Increase your confidence In sha Allah and you will be A for away.

                        May Allah increase your desire for the Quran and make it a light for your sight and may the Quran on the Day of Judgment come as an intercessor for you. Ameen.
                        Yes. It was Fajr and I was trying to keep the voice a little lower. I was probably in a different mood, too.

                        Ameen wa iyyaak. :jkk:


                        Originally posted by Rumaysah~ View Post
                        when pronouncing the raa, the tip of the tongue should touch the gums of the front teeth,
                        when saying 'qamara', you made every letter heavy, make sure the meem is not heavy, pay attention in not making them all the same when they are right next to each other

                        Make sure you give each letter it's time and each rule it's time, this should be consistent throughout. Some places the letters weren't given enough time and it was a bit rushed and 'uneven'
                        There are smaller details you need to work on but your teacher probably picks up on that and that's better corrected face to face with your teacher.

                        As for reciting through the nose and having a nasal sound throughout, it's quite a common mistake and it takes practice to fix. What helps is to look upwards while reciting and practice/check yourself by closing the nose with your fingers so you can only breathe through your mouth, you will see straight away if the sound was coming through the nose or through the mouth. The more you keep practising and check if your reciting through the nose or not, the easier it gets until soon, the problem disappears.
                        I just found this video on it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ztNd1sYsAc

                        overall, you're really good. May Allah increase you in knowledge of the quran
                        :jkk: this is very helpful.
                        So the makhraj of the raa is off?

                        Also making tafkheem and tarqeeq more defined?

                        The nose-pinch method is something I have been told about before and have tried.

                        Yes. I should try to recite in a more measured way and it does feel as though I am reciting rushed in places.
                        Definitely need to work on these things.

                        :jkk: for this post and all others. Baarakallah feek.

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                          #13
                          Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

                          Originally posted by ImproveMyRec View Post

                          :jkk: this is very helpful.
                          So the makhraj of the raa is off?

                          Also making tafkheem and tarqeeq more defined?

                          The nose-pinch method is something I have been told about before and have tried.

                          Yes. I should try to recite in a more measured way and it does feel as though I am reciting rushed in places.
                          Definitely need to work on these things.

                          :jkk: for this post and all others. Baarakallah feek.
                          yes
                          شَكَوْتُ إلَى وَكِيعٍ سُوءَ حِفْظِي
                          فَأرْشَدَنِي إلَى تَرْكِ المعَاصي
                          وَأخْبَرَنِي بأَنَّ العِلْمَ نُورٌ
                          ونورُ الله لا يهدى لعاصي

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                            #14
                            Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

                            Originally posted by ImproveMyRec View Post
                            :jkk: for replying on this thread.

                            I can't answer that, but from my experience I've found there are usually things to improve that the one reciting isn't aware of. One thing I have been told by an ustaadh in the past is that the sound exits from the nose where ideally it shouldn't be the case.

                            Although it isn't a mistake as far as I'm aware, it's still something to avoid, though I find it difficult to eradicate, being so used to it.

                            There are usually things that go unnoticed that others are able to pick up on. I'm sure there are things I'm doing which need improving/correcting.

                            (Baarakallah feek.)
                            Ameen!

                            Then it may be very minor things if there are any, to improve on.

                            Just listened to it again and couldnt find any mispronunciation, alhamdulillah.
                            “Mix with the noble people, you become one of them; and keep away from evil people so that you protect yourself from their evils.”


                            Hadhrat Ali (Radiallahu anhu)

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                              #15
                              Re: Help Me Improve My Recitation...

                              Masha Allah
                              very good recitation, but pay some attention to "Ghunnah". You have to prolong it some more. Also, while pronouncing راء , Hamza is not pronounced, and is just prolonged for two Harakas, while لام is prolonged for six Harakas.
                              hope that would help.

                              Salaam

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