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  • Simply_Logical You really are getting in the groove aren't you mashaAllah. Shedding a light on the ills of our society..keep it up bro.

    I really appreciated the contrasting nature of your poems, so looking forward to a few positive ones very soon!
    وَإِذَا قِيلَ لَهُمۡ ءَامِنُواْ كَمَآ ءَامَنَ ٱلنَّاسُ قَالُوٓاْ أَنُؤۡمِنُ كَمَآ ءَامَنَ ٱلسُّفَهَآءُ*ۗ أَلَآ إِنَّهُمۡ هُمُ ٱلسُّفَهَآءُ وَلَـٰكِن لَّا يَعۡلَمُونَ


    And when it is said unto them: believe as the people believe, they say: Shall we believe as the foolish believe? Beware! They indeed are the foolish? But they know not.
    Al Baqarah : Verse 13

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    • Originally posted by sahib View Post

      Really? I knew the two raps shared dna. What a loss 2pac was to music. Todays raps dont compare.
      yea....true say

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      • Originally posted by i.badat View Post
        Simply_Logical You really are getting in the groove aren't you mashaAllah. Shedding a light on the ills of our society..keep it up bro.

        I really appreciated the contrasting nature of your poems, so looking forward to a few positive ones very soon!
        thanks bro JazakAllah Khayran

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        • Mintchocchip aelmo Kiro Fakhri-bin-Ali Flawed iRepIslam Indefinable Nabihah.C Magic. Creamcake LaylaAb Layla_ LailaTheMuslim i.badat sajid Ya'sin notEVOLVED reached Hiking eesa the kiwi Abisali NJ.2020 Umm Uthmaan AX1300 Green786 detached soul cuezed neelu Pippin1376


          full time abuser....

          hes just a loser,
          full time abuser,
          hes got this sick attitude,
          always raw n rude,
          always ruff n crude,
          always in a mood,
          complains about the food,
          always lookin for a feud,
          always lookin for an excuse,
          to try n abuse,
          always shoutin out threats,
          hittin without any regrets,
          authority he wants to stamp,
          makes her stomach turn n cramp,
          he doesnt care about how she feels,
          as long as she listens n kneels,
          when he abuses he gets a thrill,
          he thinks abusing is a skill,
          getting abused she puts it down to GODs will,

          shes only twenty,
          married but feels so empty,
          only been married for a couple of years,
          already shed so many tears,
          everday shes livin in fear,
          the physical pain is so severe,
          shes tryin ta stay strong n persevere,
          tryin with patience n persistence,
          to seek out some assistance,
          help shes trying to seek,
          to get away from this control freak,
          hearts broken its started to leak,
          she got no one to speak,
          her rights he denies,
          cuttin her off from family ties,

          he aint a ruler,
          hes a full time abuser,
          he just wants power,
          he just wants to devour,
          shes the prisoner,
          n hes the commissioner,
          like a prisoner shes locked up,
          shes fed up of being locked up,
          shes fed up of gettin slapped up,
          for herself shes tryin to stick up,
          its not the type of relationship,
          that youd call companionship,
          its the type of relationship,
          that youd call dictatorship,
          shes the slave n hes the master,
          shes stuck in a disaster,
          it couldnt have happened any faster,

          now its suppose to his responsibility,
          to provide her with security,
          to provide her with stability,
          but he only provides her with brutality,
          cuz he sees her as a liability,
          he doesnt have an ounce of humanity,
          hes always tryin to correct her,
          so much for being her protector,
          so much for protect n serve,
          someone like him she shudda swerved...

          this is dedicated to all the sisters who are suffering and have suffered from domestic violence...

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          • sahib sorry forgot to add you bro

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            • Originally posted by Simply_Logical View Post
              sahib sorry forgot to add you bro
              Not bad but I take issue with saying "protect and serve" because that's a police slogan that has nothing to do with Islam. The Islamic concept is "men are the protectors and maintainers of women" so a husband is supposed to be protective but generally speaking he doesn't have a duty to "serve". Other than that, it's pretty good, but sad at the same time knowing that this stuff goes on.

              One of my family friends was in a horribly abusive marriage for years and for about a year, her husband cut her off from her friends (her family aren't in this country and aren't helpful people anyway). Alhamdullilah by coincidence about 15 years ago the police arrested him and he was locked up for six months and that separation gave her the time and space to wake up and leave the marriage. I'd advised her for years to leave him because he was into black magic as well so I said that probably invalidates their nikah as she's still Muslim. The sad thing is though that her children have grown up now and are quite irreligious even though their mum is religious and tried her best to try and guide them.
              The Lyme Disease pandemic: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5u73ME4sVU

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              • Originally posted by Simply_Logical View Post
                Mintchocchip aelmo Kiro Fakhri-bin-Ali Flawed iRepIslam Indefinable Nabihah.C Magic. Creamcake LaylaAb Layla_ LailaTheMuslim i.badat sajid Ya'sin notEVOLVED reached Hiking eesa the kiwi Abisali NJ.2020 Umm Uthmaan AX1300 Green786 detached soul cuezed neelu Pippin1376


                full time abuser....

                hes just a loser,
                full time abuser,
                hes got this sick attitude,
                always raw n rude,
                always ruff n crude,
                always in a mood,
                complains about the food,
                always lookin for a feud,
                always lookin for an excuse,
                to try n abuse,
                always shoutin out threats,
                hittin without any regrets,
                authority he wants to stamp,
                makes her stomach turn n cramp,
                he doesnt care about how she feels,
                as long as she listens n kneels,
                when he abuses he gets a thrill,
                he thinks abusing is a skill,
                getting abused she puts it down to GODs will,

                shes only twenty,
                married but feels so empty,
                only been married for a couple of years,
                already shed so many tears,
                everday shes livin in fear,
                the physical pain is so severe,
                shes tryin ta stay strong n persevere,
                tryin with patience n persistence,
                to seek out some assistance,
                help shes trying to seek,
                to get away from this control freak,
                hearts broken its started to leak,
                she got no one to speak,
                her rights he denies,
                cuttin her off from family ties,

                he aint a ruler,
                hes a full time abuser,
                he just wants power,
                he just wants to devour,
                shes the prisoner,
                n hes the commissioner,
                like a prisoner shes locked up,
                shes fed up of being locked up,
                shes fed up of gettin slapped up,
                for herself shes tryin to stick up,
                its not the type of relationship,
                that youd call companionship,
                its the type of relationship,
                that youd call dictatorship,
                shes the slave n hes the master,
                shes stuck in a disaster,
                it couldnt have happened any faster,

                now its suppose to his responsibility,
                to provide her with security,
                to provide her with stability,
                but he only provides her with brutality,
                cuz he sees her as a liability,
                he doesnt have an ounce of humanity,
                hes always tryin to correct her,
                so much for being her protector,
                so much for protect n serve,
                someone like him she shudda swerved...

                this is dedicated to all the sisters who are suffering and have suffered from domestic violence...
                Anther great piece from you. I'm starting to look forward to these.

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                • Originally posted by Simply_Logical View Post
                  sahib sorry forgot to add you bro
                  That's fine bro, thanks for the tag. This one really made me think. I was watching a news report the other day about how so many women and children are stuck at home in lockdown with abusive husbands and fathers/mothers. Made me feel so sad for them.

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                  • Originally posted by neelu View Post

                    Not bad but I take issue with saying "protect and serve" because that's a police slogan that has nothing to do with Islam. The Islamic concept is "men are the protectors and maintainers of women" so a husband is supposed to be protective but generally speaking he doesn't have a duty to "serve". Other than that, it's pretty good, but sad at the same time knowing that this stuff goes on.

                    One of my family friends was in a horribly abusive marriage for years and for about a year, her husband cut her off from her friends (her family aren't in this country and aren't helpful people anyway). Alhamdullilah by coincidence about 15 years ago the police arrested him and he was locked up for six months and that separation gave her the time and space to wake up and leave the marriage. I'd advised her for years to leave him because he was into black magic as well so I said that probably invalidates their nikah as she's still Muslim. The sad thing is though that her children have grown up now and are quite irreligious even though their mum is religious and tried her best to try and guide them.
                    yea i hear what your saying, you like poetry neelu?

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                    • Originally posted by Nabihah.C View Post

                      Anther great piece from you. I'm starting to look forward to these.
                      thanks, not sure when to post the next one lol

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                      • Originally posted by sahib View Post

                        That's fine bro, thanks for the tag. This one really made me think. I was watching a news report the other day about how so many women and children are stuck at home in lockdown with abusive husbands and fathers/mothers. Made me feel so sad for them.
                        yea its a sad reality and youre right since lockdown theres been an increase in domestic violence

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                        • Originally posted by Simply_Logical View Post

                          yea its a sad reality and youre right since lockdown theres been an increase in domestic violence
                          I hope this madness is over soon, especially for the sakes of those suffering from that situation. Great rap highlighting the problem from you.

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                          • Originally posted by Simply_Logical View Post

                            yea i hear what your saying, you like poetry neelu?
                            I'm not really into it tbh. Sometimes I come across something that really stands out to me and I think it's great, like Suhaymah Manzoor Khan's "this is not a humanising poem"- but it's rare for any poetry to get my attention that much.
                            The Lyme Disease pandemic: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5u73ME4sVU

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                            • Originally posted by sahib View Post

                              I hope this madness is over soon, especially for the sakes of those suffering from that situation. Great rap highlighting the problem from you.
                              thanks bro JazakAllah Khayran

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                              • Originally posted by neelu View Post

                                I'm not really into it tbh. Sometimes I come across something that really stands out to me and I think it's great, like Suhaymah Manzoor Khan's "this is not a humanising poem"- but it's rare for any poetry to get my attention that much.
                                so its got to be special lol

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