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  • Poetry Rhymes Raps Lyrics by Simply Logical #Take2

    salaams peeps, i got a fire in my belly to write again, so ill post stuff ive already wrote and stuff that i will write in the future in sha Allah, please do give me feedback

    'i dont wanna be a loner,
    so read my poems in poets corner'
    Last edited by Simply_Logical; 15-06-20, 11:55 PM.

  • #2
    i was thinking i might write something about george floyd, just an idea that came to my mind, anyone would be interested in that?

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    • #3
      struggles of the ummah...

      all i see is atrocities,
      across the muslim cities,
      brothers left without mothers,
      sisters left with blisters,
      they torture, mutilate n rape,
      theres no where to escape.
      using military force,
      killing without remorse,
      so many gettin battered,
      bones gettin shatterred,
      bodies gettin scattered,
      livin a life full of violence,
      the world is full of silence,
      the believers put it down to decree n fate,
      theyre callin for the caliphate,
      theyre in need of a saviour,
      from this bad behaviour,
      which is evil n unjust,
      in Allah they trust,
      so they dont worry,
      they know they'll get jannah in a hurry..

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Simply_Logical View Post
        i was thinking i might write something about george floyd, just an idea that came to my mind, anyone would be interested in that?
        George Floyd or anything else, I'll be keeping an eye on this thread, inshaaAllah... Just not too many bags of chips, please, though... You know, considering we're on the anti-junk bandwagon atm. :p
        ​​NOTE: Please kindly avoid 'liking' my posts. Thank you! (Jazaa'akumullah khair)

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        • #5
          Nice. Very relevant to today's issues and catchy.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by Fakhri-bin-Ali View Post

            George Floyd or anything else, I'll be keeping an eye on this thread, inshaaAllah... Just not too many bags of chips, please, though... You know, considering we're on the anti-junk bandwagon atm. :p
            lol okay cool

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Flawed View Post
              Nice. Very relevant to today's issues and catchy.
              thanks

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              • #8
                Salaam bro. great rhymes keep it up!

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by R1rider View Post
                  Salaam bro. great rhymes keep it up!
                  walaykum salaam thanks bro

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                  • #10
                    George Floyd...

                    i cant breathe he was shoutin,
                    on top of him like a mountain,
                    knee over neck,
                    ya know what happens next,
                    his name was george floyd,
                    spread the news through ya iphone or android,
                    he was killed in broad daylight,
                    his crime was that he werent white,
                    jus another male whos black,
                    victim to da feds who go around n wack,
                    this aint summat new,
                    its daily on the news,
                    when will this ever stop?
                    too many dirty cops,
                    i dont care if i hit a nerve,
                    they suppose to protect n serve,
                    not mess with the law n swerve...


                    Fakhri-bin-Ali neelu Flawed sajid R1rider Mintchocchip Indefinable aelmo Pure Seeker Abisali Layla_ LailaTheMuslim iRepIslam Creamcake Ya'sin i wrote this lil rhyme about george floyd last night, let me know what you think be honest please
                    Last edited by Simply_Logical; 16-06-20, 03:04 PM.

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by Simply_Logical View Post
                      struggles of the ummah...

                      all i see is atrocities,
                      across the muslim cities,
                      brothers left without mothers,
                      sisters left with blisters,
                      they torture, mutilate n rape,
                      theres no where to escape.
                      using military force,
                      killing without remorse,
                      so many gettin battered,
                      bones gettin shatterred,
                      bodies gettin scattered,
                      livin a life full of violence,
                      the world is full of silence,
                      the believers put it down to decree n fate,
                      theyre callin for the caliphate,
                      theyre in need of a saviour,
                      from this bad behaviour,
                      which is evil n unjust,
                      in Allah they trust,
                      so they dont worry,
                      they know they'll get jannah in a hurry..
                      That's really good. I like the rhythm to it

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Simply_Logical View Post
                        George Floyd...

                        i cant breathe he was shoutin,
                        on top of him like a mountain,
                        knee over neck,
                        ya know what happens next,
                        his name was george floyd,
                        spread the news through ya iphone or android,
                        he was killed in broad daylight,
                        his crime was that he werent white,
                        jus another male whos black,
                        victim to da feds who go around n wack,
                        this aint summat new,
                        its daily on the news,
                        when will this ever stop?
                        too many dirty cops,
                        i dont care if i hit a nerve,
                        they suppose to protect n serve,
                        not mess with the law n swerve...


                        Fakhri-bin-Ali neelu Flawed sajid R1rider Mintchocchip Indefinable aelmo Pure Seeker Abisali Layla_ LailaTheMuslim iRepIslam Creamcake Ya'sin i wrote this lil rhyme about george floyd last night, let me know what you think be honest please
                        Poignant poem, you have a talent brother.

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by Pure Seeker View Post

                          That's really good. I like the rhythm to it
                          thank bro

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by Pure Seeker View Post

                            Poignant poem, you have a talent brother.
                            thanks or the feedback bro :)

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by Simply_Logical View Post

                              thanks or the feedback bro :)


                              There's power in your word,
                              it touches all who heard.

                              Your lyrics are full of power,
                              as tall and firm as a tower.

                              Give more time,
                              to your rhyme.

                              Practice makes perfect,
                              your lyrics are worth it.

                              Never forget, this life is a test,
                              to have brother like you we are blessed.

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