Help newbie translate

[Chanan]

If you are in doubt about your translation, you can contact a native speaker or a translation service. I always turned to this service www.translate.com so I can recommend them with confidence. because I see that there are few who want to help you. But I'm not sure that you still need it.

[Mamelohan]

Are there any people here who would check my translation from Arabic to English? This is an excerpt from the book and I'm not sure if the translation is correct.