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    Runny nose

    The air is chilli and the lake has froze,
    Yet runny as a river is my runny nose
    And like a feather to the skin, it does but tickle,
    As I can feel a few drops, through my nostrils trickle

    They fall like tears, - though I do not cry, -
    Or like raindrops, from a cloudy sky
    Or like a faulty tap, that does drip drip,
    They race from my nose, down to my lip

    Oh no! I have not a tissue, about my person!
    Indeed, winter has come by so sudden!
    And as I stand now, before my boss,
    With my runny nose, I am at a loss!

    This is really awkward. So what I don't care. Has this ever happened to you guys fams?

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    Re: Runny nose

    Struggle life..

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    Re: Runny nose

    Quote Originally Posted by Umm Uthmaan View Post
    Struggle life..
    I'm sorry I don't understand.

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    Re: Runny nose



    It was very nice at the beginning, then became too satirical. I won't say "I don't like fun", I laughed once at "down to my lip", but it fun isn't beautiful, and a poem that is beautiful, is nice I think.

    One thing that struck me was your use of winter, now when it's spring... the poem is out of season.

    However, the beginning was nice, especially a comparison to a river.

    To answer your question I haven't tried that exact situation, but it's difficult to pray salah sometimes when your nose is running.
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    Re: Runny nose

    Quote Originally Posted by Abu-Yahya View Post


    It was very nice at the beginning, then became too satirical. I won't say "I don't like fun", I laughed once at "down to my lip", but it fun isn't beautiful, and a poem that is beautiful, is nice I think.

    One thing that struck me was your use of winter, now when it's spring... the poem is out of season.

    However, the beginning was nice, especially a comparison to a river.

    To answer your question I haven't tried that exact situation, but it's difficult to pray salah sometimes when your nose is running.
    و عليكم السلام والرحمة الله وبركاته

    Ahaha bro I really like reading your responses in this section, you're most perceptive ma sha Allah.

    Yes it is spring, indeed, but "winter has come by so sudden".
    And sorry bro, I don't write poems I only write lines, so there's bound to be some immaturity.

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    Re: Runny nose

    BarakAllahu Feek.

    Come by a sudden... Aha!
    Every line can be a poem in itself. SubhanAllah!

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    Re: Runny nose

    10/10. This poem should be in the tournament.

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    Re: Runny nose

    Quote Originally Posted by lonelyniqabi View Post
    10/10. This poem should be in the tournament.
    it would have been disqualified since it doesn't fit under any of the themes.

    But it's 10/10 lols
    Indeed we belong to Allah,
    and indeed to Him we will return.


    Quran 2:156

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    Re: Runny nose

    Quote Originally Posted by ninety1daisies View Post
    it would have been disqualified since it doesn't fit under any of the themes.

    But it's 10/10 lols
    re rep: no I wasn't. It's really good!

    I forgot about theme lol, but I would've been more interested in the competition, if the theme fits these types of poems. =]

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    Re: Runny nose

    Quote Originally Posted by Morose View Post
    what did i just read lol
    Surah Taha, Verse 69:

    وَأَلْقِ مَا فِي يَمِينِكَ تَلْقَفْ مَا صَنَعُوا إِنَّمَا صَنَعُوا كَيْدُ سَاحِرٍ وَلَا يُفْلِحُ السَّاحِرُ حَيْثُ أَتَىٰ

    "And throw that which is in your right hand! It will swallow up that which they have made. That which they have made is only a magician's trick,
    and the magician will never be successful, no matter whatever amount (of skill) he may attain."

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    Re: Runny nose

    MashAlkah tabarakAllah feek
    Really good funny and i can imagine it lol

 

 

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