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mara
17-03-06, 08:24 AM
This thread is dedicated to those who wish to express their feeling through poetry:)To achive that i invite the sisters and brothers to post poetry which can be used in several occasion, like to express your love feelings, anger, help and so on.
Also , if you can't find the right poetry you can ask here:) and we can post it.
We have lot of tallented sisters and brother which do poetry - and may be they wish to write own compositions:embar: on your theme.

mara
17-03-06, 08:37 AM
The poetry can be used to express your sorry when you hurted the other one:embar: because like the poet said only knowing what means the darkness of human behaviour you can become better. or no one is perfect.

I have not repent myself
as I have gathered so much moud in my soul
but i am thinking only about you

With clows of light
One morning will kill your dream
That my soul is not as so clean
as your thought would wish to think
How your heart in love :love:would wish to think

Would you weep a lot :crying: or forgive:there:
Would you weep a lot :crying:or smile:)
In that morning at the sunrise
In which i will tell you
Without shadow of repent::S
" Haven't you heard that water lilies grows only in muddy lakes?"

by Lucian Blaga

redsulphur
17-03-06, 06:59 PM
:wavey: ..... really nice poem mara :up: ..... and erm..I think your avatar is pretty cool too :embar:

mara
18-03-06, 07:00 AM
Thank you:embar: but would be great to join the thread and post poetry:)
If 100 times someone reproved your faults and you can't change this poetry its the right one:

I am not who i look to be
I am not
Anything from what i would like to be
..
So i remained only...Who i am:(

Tahiyah
18-03-06, 08:29 AM
Oh to write again would soothe my soul
Relief would flow as expression began to roll
Except..
Much time has passed leaving me mute
Me myself and I are having a dispute
Words wont drop in a mental block
Malfunctioning device on my head reads the stamp
Self diagnosis: brain cramp :hidban:

Te'oma
18-03-06, 08:34 AM
Oh to write again would soothe my soul
Relief would flow as expression began to roll
Except..
Much time has passed leaving me mute
Me myself and I are having a dispute
Words wont drop in a mental block
Malfunctioning device on my head reads the stamp
Self diagnosis: brain cramp :hidban:

:up: :D
it made me laugh, it made me cry...

Hayaa
18-03-06, 01:16 PM
it's always in the news........sad, sad, sad.... :l

many souls, least bothered
lives lost, all bare
much chaos, no comfort
a hell, no care...

redsulphur
18-03-06, 02:21 PM
The child looked dizzily at her mother
It whispered
‘Mummy I am hungry, my tummy aches..

..I can’t cry’


Was it's last sigh
And with that it died

And Allah was Watching and still is.




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Tahiyah
22-03-06, 03:51 AM
Running from mirrors
Forgotten years
An ocean of tears
Give her 3 cheers
BRAVO!! for
She still adheres
To all her fears



lol.... ok...i just wrote that off the top of my head, it didnt really require thought... i cant write because i am BLANK!!!!!

stuck...a schmuk stuck in muk!!! ok.. i am loopey,,tylenol pms gone to my head. night night

yasmin20
13-04-06, 10:13 PM
Salams everyone this is something i wrote when i was feeling really down
:(
but alhamdulillah im feeling much better ! :D
hope you all like.....inshaAllah

Alone
I'm feeling all alone
have no-one to call my own
i look left and i turn right
cannot see a soul in sight
I'm feeling so sad and slow
wishing someone would hold me close
during the day i hide it all away
but when im alone the tears flow and don't go away
i try to smile, show I'm happy on the outside
but it's only I who the knows the agony that goes on in the inside

I'm feeling all alone
have no-one to call my own
they say they love me, that they care
so why have they shut their ears and are never there
Am i saying anything obnoxious or bad
these are my feelings that just makes them mad
how can i make you understand
i need their support and their helping hand
I'm searching and I'm trying to find
but it seems like they've already made up their minds
I'm feeling all alone
have no-one to call my own

mara
20-04-06, 08:50 PM
Alone
I'm feeling all alone
have no-one to call my own
i look left and i turn right
cannot see a soul in sight


Express very well the loneliness :up: