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muslimah15
16-01-06, 04:36 PM
Your words so soft, so silently
Climbing creeping, caressing me
You utter the words, so calm so deep
I’ll leave you now, my brother to sleep

Your eyes so tired, I wish you good rest
Your hands so soft, you carried out the test
Those lips so cold, as I heard those words
I’ll leave you now, fly free like the birds.

The bullets shoot, cut through the breeze
I watch you fall, with smiles and with ease
Tears drop- so very slow
You’re leaving me now? No please don’t go.

They’ve left you there, so helpless so lame
I watch your face, as I whisper your name
You don’t respond, nor do you reply
I knew my brother; it was your time to die

I’ll miss you though, but your Lord you shall meet
You were strong, you were courageous, and you passed not through defeat
With honour and with pride, I shall say your name
My brother, my brother, when I am brave, I’ll do the same..

TinyTerror
16-01-06, 04:37 PM
Assalamualaikum

:inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

MORE!!!

Wa Alaikumassalam

Abu Hurairah?
16-01-06, 05:04 PM
Subhan'allah this was sooooo good- someone needs to start compiling all of these poems in some thread than produce a book- I'm telling you this is really good masha'allah.

Excellent stuff. :up:

Al-Irhaab
16-01-06, 05:17 PM
MASHALLAH excellent sister i think this is beecoming an epidemic now :D

abdusamad
16-01-06, 05:21 PM
you lot jus gave me an idea, i'll let yuo all know once the idea turns into something :)

elefantebianco
16-01-06, 05:42 PM
Wow MashAllah that was amazing hun. I loved it!!! you cheeky girl trying to confuse your mother with the first verse lol that was funny.

Subhan'allah this was sooooo good- someone needs to start compiling all of these poems in some thread than produce a book- I'm telling you this is really good masha'allah.

Excellent stuff. :up:


Here here!!! We need a book of young Muslim poets and their points of view.....most definitely essential.

:up:

wuv ya hun, salaams....

Az-Zalzalah
16-01-06, 05:46 PM
Allahu Akbar..

Carry on the good work

K@M
16-01-06, 08:13 PM
Aw, mashaAllah what a great poem :up:

Has many different meanings..

dksadiq
16-01-06, 08:16 PM
Nice poem there. :up: :up: :up: