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TinyTerror
16-01-06, 12:11 PM
Assalamualaikum

My brother lies dead
In rivers of red
Why was i not there?
My own blood, too precious to spare?

It does not mean anything anymore the blood of my brother
For once we've seen we flick channels and watch another
For we are content to express our grief from a far
But not so willing to help fight alongside him, this murderous war

My sister lies raped
By those sons of apes
Why was i not there?
Her honour to protect, no longer a care?

But it doesn not mean anything anymore my sister's plight
For we watch and we rage but no attempt is made to get up and fight
It is too far we say, too difficult to leave for those distant lands
But what shall we say come judgement day when we see her blood on our hands

Ya Allah ordain for those that believe to fight for your cause
And when the enemy advances let us not turn our backs or even pause
In smiting their heads off as they swarm by the tonne
Surely by your power and grace, the battle shall be won

Allahuakbar

~By Me~

Wa Alaikumassalam

Al-Irhaab
16-01-06, 12:46 PM
mashallah lil sis excellent poem :D

Al-Mujaddidah
16-01-06, 02:40 PM
MashaAllaah sis...

Many great poets on this bored..

Al-ghurabah
16-01-06, 03:19 PM
amashallah nice poem. who wrote it. very good

TinyTerror
16-01-06, 03:59 PM
Assalamualaikum

Jazakallah Khair. :)

*feels a bit nervous but doesn't know why* :rolleyes:


amashallah nice poem. who wrote it. very good

Me

Wa Alaikumassalam

Al-ghurabah
16-01-06, 04:02 PM
wow nice poem sis. ur good at this poetry thing. compile a book on poems.

abdusamad
16-01-06, 04:05 PM
MashaAllaah sis...

Many great poets on this bored..



bored? :rubeyes:



:rotfl: you mean board....

abdusamad
16-01-06, 04:05 PM
excellent poem sister TInyTerror. :up:

TinyTerror
16-01-06, 04:06 PM
Assalamualaikum

wow nice poem sis. ur good at this poetry thing. compile a book on poems.

Jazakallah Khair bro. Wallahi you're too kind :rolleyes:

InshAllah maybe one day. :)

Wa Alaikumassalam

PS And you Abdusamad. too kind :rolleyes:

Abu Hurairah?
16-01-06, 05:26 PM
Assalamu Alaikum,

:crying: Subhan'allah- we have some major talent on Ummah.com no jokes with sis. UmmMusab, sis. Tiny, sis. Muslimah15, and even bro Irhaab:rubeyes: - I'm being serious here. this looks like some professional stuff!!!

All of what has been mentioned is definately true- you lot are too good- and this piece is superb, over the top stuff!!! :up:

Sis. Tiny are you sure wrote this? And by me you don't mean sis. Lonely??? :confused: Masha'allah its excellent- keep it up, write some more. :)

TinyTerror
16-01-06, 05:31 PM
Assalamualaikum


Sis. Tiny are you sure wrote this? And by me you don't mean sis. Lonely??? :confused: Masha'allah its excellent- keep it up, write some more. :)

:rotfl:

Well i'm sure sis.Lonely could have written it if she wanted to but unless she somehow had control of my poor brain this morning then no i meant me as in myself, TinyTerror, Nobody else but ME. :rolleyes:

Wa Alaikumassalam

Abu Hurairah?
16-01-06, 05:37 PM
Assalamualaikum


:rotfl:

Well i'm sure sis.Lonely could have written it if she wanted to but unless she somehow had control of my poor brain this morning then no i meant me as in myself, TinyTerror, Nobody else but ME. :rolleyes:

Wa Alaikumassalam

Assalamu Alaikum,

Well than I have got to give it to you sis.- you actually are good for something ;) - but seriously this very very good masha'allah- very inspiring indeed. :up:

But please don't stop now (it might just be a one off fluke or a passing phase :D ) try do some more and more- lets see if it comes naturally.

Masha'allah we really got some major contributers on Ummah.com whether in news, articles, media, poems, humour, etc.:)

Wa Alaikum wa Assalam