striving4jennah
25-08-05, 05:02 PM
Assalamu Alaykum,
this afternoon i wrote this poem...i just started writing poems..so it might not be the greatest,but leave your comments and suggestions...i dont even have a title..lol..(lame i no)...! well here it goes::::
I was sitting on the floor that night,
playing with my doll
to the other girls she was not much,
but to me she was it all,
daddy made her just for me,
from old cloth and some glue,
to other girls she looked so old,
but to me she looked brand new,
i named her Amira,
after my gone mommy,
daddy said the Israelies did it,
and one day we'd get revenge,
but my only question was,
when was it going to all end?
before daddy left that night,
he told me to be strong,
to take care of Grandma,
while he was gone,
i didnt want him to leave,
i started to cry,
what would happen,if he should die?
he said nothing,
and held me tight,
he kissed my cheek,
and sat me on his thigh,
i thought i saw a tear in his eye,
he told me that he loved me,
but he has a duty to do,
he has to do what is right,
he has to go and fight,
fight daddy? i asked him,for what?
he told me for our country,
and for Allah,
he looked at me and made duaa,
he wanted the best for me,
he wanted me to grow up safely,
and have my own family,
he made duaa,
that this war would end,
and that both countries
could be friends!
i watched him put his hat on,
and kiss Grandma goodbye,
i saw him make his last prayer,
i saw Grandma started to cry,
i saw him smile down at me,
i saw him open the door,
but then after that,
i saw Daddy no more!
By: Me
this afternoon i wrote this poem...i just started writing poems..so it might not be the greatest,but leave your comments and suggestions...i dont even have a title..lol..(lame i no)...! well here it goes::::
I was sitting on the floor that night,
playing with my doll
to the other girls she was not much,
but to me she was it all,
daddy made her just for me,
from old cloth and some glue,
to other girls she looked so old,
but to me she looked brand new,
i named her Amira,
after my gone mommy,
daddy said the Israelies did it,
and one day we'd get revenge,
but my only question was,
when was it going to all end?
before daddy left that night,
he told me to be strong,
to take care of Grandma,
while he was gone,
i didnt want him to leave,
i started to cry,
what would happen,if he should die?
he said nothing,
and held me tight,
he kissed my cheek,
and sat me on his thigh,
i thought i saw a tear in his eye,
he told me that he loved me,
but he has a duty to do,
he has to do what is right,
he has to go and fight,
fight daddy? i asked him,for what?
he told me for our country,
and for Allah,
he looked at me and made duaa,
he wanted the best for me,
he wanted me to grow up safely,
and have my own family,
he made duaa,
that this war would end,
and that both countries
could be friends!
i watched him put his hat on,
and kiss Grandma goodbye,
i saw him make his last prayer,
i saw Grandma started to cry,
i saw him smile down at me,
i saw him open the door,
but then after that,
i saw Daddy no more!
By: Me