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jaihoon
13-03-05, 07:12 PM
Distance in Love

http://www.jaihoon.com/egoptics/distanceinlove.htm

The days of Sun and Mon pass by,
But the kite of your memories still flies high

O coolness of my eyes!
O the warmth of my heart!

Even as I hide my pain absorbed
In the world of zeroes and ones
My heart aches all the more
To see of your compassionate smile

The heart translates its pain into tears,
Why? So that I realize all the more its pain

Wise ones say that distance in love is a fortune,
(And that) love grows more and more in such state

O the sweet warrior who cut the pride of my intellect
The sun of my victory shone as I lost to your love

The blood of His Mercy in me flowed
As you wounded me with your tender sword (of love)

Jaihoon has no more selfish claims to raise,
For all those he received to Him belongs praise

O love-filled pearl.
Give this empty shell a melodious rhyme
That which he can sing until you shall one day come

The days of Sun and Mon pass by,
But the kite of your memories still flies high

- JAIHOON


Notes

This poem describes our love for our loved ones as they go far from us, leaving behind a stock of memories. Even as the days in the week pass, our longing for them only rises higher. We may try to keep ourselves busy with various engagements, but their thought still haunt us. It is as if the heart is making use of the eyes bringing tears to explain its pain to us.
There is a poetic saying among common people that distance is beneficial for love. However, the ones suffering in such a state cannot submit to such a 'common sense'. The beloved conquers the heart of the lover, not by stern words or use of force, but by sincere love and sacrifices. And such defeats are in fact the victory for the lover who is constantly reminded about the Mercy of Allah.

Days of Sun and Mon : Sundays and Mondays or the days of week.

world of zeroes and ones: World of Technology

Pride of Intellect: Reason when left unchecked becomes arrogant and unmindful of the emotional aspect of man disregarding his sentiments like love.

Guardian Hijab
13-03-05, 09:49 PM
Asalamualaikum

Thanks bud:up:

Wa'alaikumasalam

mastan
24-03-05, 07:35 AM
subhanallah .. nice poem ...lucid and clear as if reflection of thoughts and feelings....this poem sounds so enchanting ...


Distance in Love

http://www.jaihoon.com/egoptics/distanceinlove.htm

The days of Sun and Mon pass by,
But the kite of your memories still flies high

O coolness of my eyes!
O the warmth of my heart!

Even as I hide my pain absorbed
In the world of zeroes and ones
My heart aches all the more
To see of your compassionate smile

The heart translates its pain into tears,
Why? So that I realize all the more its pain

Wise ones say that distance in love is a fortune,
(And that) love grows more and more in such state

O the sweet warrior who cut the pride of my intellect
The sun of my victory shone as I lost to your love

The blood of His Mercy in me flowed
As you wounded me with your tender sword (of love)

Jaihoon has no more selfish claims to raise,
For all those he received to Him belongs praise

O love-filled pearl.
Give this empty shell a melodious rhyme
That which he can sing until you shall one day come

The days of Sun and Mon pass by,
But the kite of your memories still flies high

- JAIHOON


Notes

This poem describes our love for our loved ones as they go far from us, leaving behind a stock of memories. Even as the days in the week pass, our longing for them only rises higher. We may try to keep ourselves busy with various engagements, but their thought still haunt us. It is as if the heart is making use of the eyes bringing tears to explain its pain to us.
There is a poetic saying among common people that distance is beneficial for love. However, the ones suffering in such a state cannot submit to such a 'common sense'. The beloved conquers the heart of the lover, not by stern words or use of force, but by sincere love and sacrifices. And such defeats are in fact the victory for the lover who is constantly reminded about the Mercy of Allah.

Days of Sun and Mon : Sundays and Mondays or the days of week.

world of zeroes and ones: World of Technology

Pride of Intellect: Reason when left unchecked becomes arrogant and unmindful of the emotional aspect of man disregarding his sentiments like love.

mastan
24-03-05, 07:41 AM
got this from the website u mentioned below
http://www.jaihoon.com/egoptics/distanceinlove.htm

subhanallah ...this one too is superb....later i'a ill browse thru the other poems as well on the site.....
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My heart beats with a noble message
Filled with love,
'Tis meant for this 'love-less age'

I care not if lovers refuse my gift
Many a times did the world with me rift

I speak the truth open
That which in my heart does deepen

O lovers!
These are not a roaming poet's lines
To tease you with the tale of cups and wines

All I want is to share a little virtue
Let the same in your life ensue

'As you lie in the lap of the beloved
As your speech flows word after word

As you count the stars in the sky
As you wave at the birds flying high

As you both merge: eye to eye
As you both unite: soul to soul

Forget not your Merciful Him
Who created the feeling of 'rahm'

Remember His favors in your talk
Think not that love cannot be taken back

A mention of Him to your loved dear
And He shall make your name on heavens hear

O lovers!
These are not a roaming poet's lines
To tease you with the tale of cups and wines

All I want is to share a little virtue
Let the same in your life ensue