Help me write a poem !!!

[Kh@led]

As-salamu alaikum everyone,

Today I'm here to ask for your expert help. I :banan: was trying to send (through sms) my wife :hidban: (married only a few months back and currently she lives in a different place) a poem. The problem is, I am NOT good in writing poems at all :( After an hour of brainstorming I only came up with these lines :embar:

The plant of love
has been sown,
...
...


That's it. I'm stuck !!!!!!!!! :eek: :mad:

For like another half-an-hour I was looking for words that sounds similar to the word 'sown' but couldn't think of any !!! :scratch:

Now, I am not asking anyone to write the poem for me as I want it to be my original no matter how crap it is !! :love:

But I was wondering perhaps you could suggest me some words similar to "sown".

Even better, if you could tell me if there is any application/website from where I can find similarly sounded words. For example, if I write red, it would suggest.....erm.....:scratch: erm.....:banghead:....you know what I mean !



P.S. And ya...stick to the point...no funny businesses here...ok... :eek2:

[*IslamicGirl*]

:start:

:salams



grown?


so back 2 the top :p


My love for you
has generously grown


:D

:p

[sajid]

pinch em from google!

type in love poems or so...thats i do...(well other things)

[Muslim Sista]

hey the guy wants to come up wid an original not coppy things i think its sweet and sad at the same time

[Naiha]

:start:

:salams



grown?


so back 2 the top :p


My love for you
has generously grown


:D

:p
flown

oh how the time we've spent has flown....
sorry it's the best i could come up with..whilst eating...

[*IslamicGirl*]

:start:


:salams


The plant of love
has been sown,
my love for you dear wife
has generously grown
The roots forever extend upwards
InshaAllah to our final destination Jannah
And i hope Allah shower his rahmah on you
cuz i wanna live with you forever


(i do hope the 'grown' part everyone takes in2 significance as it's a 'seed' geddit? :p )

btw i AM NOT repeat I'M not Mushy. But i don't mind merging with the mushy ppl @ tyms

@)

:salams

[Kh@led]

My love for you
has generously grown

hmmm...at least you came up with something ! :p


hey the guy wants to come up wid an original not coppy things
Exactly ! :cool:

[Muslim Sista]

ha sajid in yer face

[Naiha]

hmmm...at least you came up with something ! :p



Exactly ! :cool:you mean to say something straight from the heart..........it's sweet reali!

[Kh@led]

flown

oh how the time we've spent has flown....

erm...we married about five months ago and only had a three weeks with each other after the marriage..so not that much time has been "flown" :D

[Naiha]

compared to yours sis...i'm pretti sucks at this.............i'll stick to my sms
*]:start:


:salams


The plant of love
has been sown,
my love for you dear wife
has generously grown
The roots forever extend upwards
InshaAllah to our final destination Jannah
And i hope Allah shower his rahmah on you
cuz i wanna live with you forever


(i do hope the 'grown' part everyone takes in2 significance as it's a 'seed' geddit? :p )

btw i AM NOT repeat I'M not Mushy. But i don't mind merging with the mushy ppl @ tyms

@)

:salams[/QUOTE]

[Muslim Sista]

it might have done
wow five months and u still holdin' tight huh?

[ze leetle elper]

From Him you are to me a loan...:D

[sajid]

ha sajid in yer facelol..well good luck to finding one but for me id just google...why reinvent the wheel! :)

[*IslamicGirl*]

:start:


:salams

From Him you are to me a loan...:D
That is debt free
For that i am so grateful
cuz we could use the money to buy a house full of kiddies :D

:salams

[Naiha]

erm...we married about five months ago and only had a three weeks with each other after the marriage..so not that much time has been "flown" :D
oh well.......i didn't know....guess i'll leave this to the professionals

[ze leetle elper]

Well it depends what type of poem you want to write :)

You can decide on what pattern you want to follow:

AA BB AA BB

AB AB AB AB

A BB A BB A

There are so many to choose from. Try a limerick :D

AA BB A

Or a poen that doesn't even rhyme..

A B C D A C D

[Kh@led]

Well it depends what type of poem you want to write :)

You can decide on what pattern you want to follow:

AA BB AA BB

AB AB AB AB

A BB A BB A

There are so many to choose from. Try a limerick :D

AA BB A

Or a poen that doesn't even rhyme..

A B C D A C D
Huh ???? What are you talking about ???? :eek:

What on earth are those ABCDs about ????? :confused:

[Muslim Sista]

Shakespeare sonnets and all that

[seven]

the cat
sat
on the mat


thank you...

[Jam]

:salams

The plant of love
has been sown,

My wifes nagging
has grown and grown,

I duck and dive
when pots are thrown,

I wish I could
just go back home :crying:

:torture:

:wswrwb:

[Kh@led]

the cat
sat
on the mat
Then what ?


The plant of love
has been sown,

My wifes nagging
has grown and grown,

I duck and dive
when pots are thrown,

I wish I could
just go back home http://ummah.com/forum/images/smilies/crying.gif

http://ummah.com/forum/images/smilies/torture.gif


:eek2:

.

[MG]

when she calls,

i try to stall...


hey it rhymes!!!!

[Jam]

when she calls,

i try to stall...

When she beats me,
To the ground I fall..

[MG]

When she beats me,
To the ground I fall..
hhmmmm...my ones better, your one dont rhyme.

when she calls
i try to stall

she comes and beats me,

to the ground i fall


heeeyyyyy,thats cool!

(not the part about u gettin beaten up of course)

[Jam]

Instead of going home,
I just sit at the mall :D

[MG]

Instead of going home,
I just sit at the mall :D

you havent given up the day job yet, have ya bro???


i run to the mall

to make a call,

[PaGaL~LaDo0]

:salams

The plant of love
has been sown,

My wifes nagging
has grown and grown,

I duck and dive
when pots are thrown,

I wish I could
just go back home :crying:

:torture:

:wswrwb:

l0o0oo0o00o0o0o0o0o0ol :rofl1: in da bin w0o0oh0o0o0o 2 mch funnynez o0w0oh0o0o0o0o0o0oo00o0o lo0o0o0o00ol

[Jam]

:eek2:Well akhi, well there is an anti-Valentines day policy on this forum - so if you expected gushing words of love specifically for this day, I ain't gonna let that happen! :badguy: :D

[PaGaL~LaDo0]

lo00o0ol wo00oho00o :D :D :D

[MG]

lo00o0ol wo00oho00o :D :D :D
hey sis,

you wo00oho00oing alot today!!

[PaGaL~LaDo0]

wo00oh0oo00oo00o0o DUN LA!! w0o0oh0o0o0o0o00o0o im feelin mor w0oo0o0h0o0oin 2dy duno y.....omg in da bin i avnt evn ad mango rubicon yet o0wo00oh0o0o0o hld up........


*drinkz mngo rubicn* bez drnk wo0o0h00o0o0o0o

der now....i cn w0o0oh0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o propa o0w0o0o0oh0o0o0o0o0o :D :D :D

mngo rubicn propa mkez me wo00oho0o0o00oo0 mor wo0o0h0o0o0o :D :D :D

[MG]

wo00oh0oo00oo00o0o DUN LA!! w0o0oh0o0o0o0o00o0o im feelin mor w0oo0o0h0o0oin 2dy duno y.....omg in da bin i avnt evn ad mango rubicon yet o0wo00oh0o0o0o hld up........


*drinkz mngo rubicn* bez drnk wo0o0h00o0o0o0o

der now....i cn w0o0oh0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o propa o0w0o0o0oh0o0o0o0o0o :D :D :D

mngo rubicn propa mkez me wo00oho0o0o00oo0 mor wo0o0h0o0o0o :D :D :D
oh no.....

*MG runs out the room*

[PaGaL~LaDo0]

lo000oo0o00oo0o0l 0oo0w0oo00oh0o0o0o0o0o ::D:D :D :D

[Kh@led]

Wolaaaa !!! Problem solved !!!! Finally, I've done it !!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

Well akhi, well there is an anti-Valentines day policy on this forum - so if you expected gushing words of love specifically for this day, I ain't gonna let that happen! :badguy: :D
I'll be back !!! :badguy: :boom:

[ze leetle elper]

My name is Ze
I want your money

= AA

Ze is my name
I like cats
This poem is lame
Cats eat rats

=ABAB

The big green ogre of Ummah
Was looking out the window one Jumm'ah
She spied a cat
And with a rat
Lured it closer until it was dinner! :D

= AABBA

[Kh@led]

= AA



=ABAB



= AABBA
Interesting...

I guess my one is ABAB :cool:

[Mary Carol]

I find that reading what others have written is the best inspiration for my own creations:

Love Poems II:

http://www.ummah.com/forum/showthread.php?t=31771&highlight=love

Bored:

http://www.ummah.com/forum/showthread.php?t=7439

[simplicity]

i'm terrible at writing poems, making it rhyme. kept away from it until i found out that there are poems that doesn't need to rhyme. hehe. :)

[Shaolin's-Finest]

When she beats me,
To the ground I fall..
Then she sat on me, tell i could breath no more
farting on my face, tell i was a burn't like a sheesh kebab on the floor :D

[MG]

Then she sat on me, tell i could breath no more
farting on my face, tell i was a burn't like a sheesh kebab on the floor :Duuuurrrrrrrrrgggggggggghhh!

u r sick!

[PaGaL~LaDo0]

Then she sat on me, tell i could breath no more
farting on my face, tell i was a burn't like a sheesh kebab on the floor :D


l0o0oo00ol lo00oo0l:rofl1: lo00o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0ol wo0o0h0ooo00o0o0o0o


mmmm sheesh kebabz :D wo0o0h0o0oo0o0

[Kh@led]

mmmm sheesh kebabz :D wo0o0h0o0oo0o0
ya...mmmm...:nuts: :wacko:
That was with a mixture of fart on your face :vomit:

[Kh@led]

ok...I see its been moved here from the general forum.


lol...I never thought that I would ever post on the 'poets corner' ! :D

[Mr_Jailer]

What do you see

when you look at me

Do you see someone limited,

or someone free

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All some people can do is just look and stare

Simply because they can't see my hair

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Others think I am controlled and uneducated

They think that I am limited and un-liberated

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They are so thankful that they are not me

Because they would like to remain 'free'

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Well free isn't exactly the word I would've used

Describing women who are cheated on and abused

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They think that I do not have opinions or voice

They think that being hooded isn't my choice

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They think that the hood makes me look caged

That my husband or dad are totally outraged

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All they can do is look at me in fear

And in my eye there is a tear

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Not because I have been stared at or made fun of

But because people are ignoring the one up above

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On the day of judgment they will be the fools

Because they were too ashamed to play by their own rules

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Maybe the guys won't think I am a cutie

But at least I am filled with more inner beauty

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See I have declined from being a guy's toy

Because I won't let myself be controlled by a boy

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Real men are able to appreciate my mind

And aren't busy looking at my behind

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Hooded girls are the ones really helping the muslim cause

The role that we play definitely deserves applause

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I will be recognized because I am smart and bright

And because some people are inspired by my sight

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The smart ones are attracted by my tranquility

In the back of their mind they wish they were me

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We have the strength to do what we think is right

Even if it means putting up a life long fight

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You see we are not controlled by a mini skirt and tight shirt

We are given only respect, and never treated like dirt

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So you see, we are the ones that are free and liberated

We are not the ones that are sexually terrorized and violated

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We are the ones that are free and pure

We're free of STD's that have no cure

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So when people ask you how you feel about the hood

Just sum it up by saying 'baby its all good' ;)

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By Maria Humera Khan

[Shaolin's-Finest]

uuuurrrrrrrrrgggggggggghhh!

u r sick!
loL!...women these days :rolleyes:

[MG]

loL!...women these days :rolleyes:
so men like a women to fart on their face till they turn into a sheesh kebab??


u know,i dont even wanna know the answer to that!!!!!

[Shaolin's-Finest]

so men like a women to fart on their face till they turn into a sheesh kebab??


u know,i dont even wanna know the answer to that!!!!!
it was a mini poem, and it rhymed :p

[MG]

it was a mini poem, and it rhymed :p
LOL!

i take that as a no shall i...............?

[Shaolin's-Finest]

LOL!

i take that as a no shall i...............?
well, i wouldnt exactly enjoy having 3rd degree burns on my face caused by a women breaking wind!:p

[MG]

well, i wouldnt exactly enjoy having 3rd degree burns on my face caused by a women breaking wind!:p
so i was CORRECT in sayin:

URRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!

wasnt i?????

[Shaolin's-Finest]

so i was CORRECT in sayin:

URRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!

wasnt i?????
yes mumsy :(

[MG]

yes mumsy :(
mumsy?

listen fishface, all i want is an apology (make it a double cos of the above insult)

[Shaolin's-Finest]

mumsy?

listen fishface, all i want is an apology (make it a double cos of the above insult)
fishface? :crying:

[MG]

fishface? :crying:
LOL!!!

ok,ok cut the tears.

Men, why do they always switch on da waterworks!!

[Shaolin's-Finest]

LOL!!!

ok,ok cut the tears.

Men, why do they always switch on da waterworks!!
lol

[~Stanley~]

As-salamu alaikum everyone,

Today I'm here to ask for your expert help. :embar:

The plant of love
has been sown,
...
...


That's it. I'm stuck !!!!!!!!! :eek: :mad:

If I may give you a starting point from which to work with, I would begin "telling the story"
with the time when the seed of love was first planted.
Then progress to your hearts desire of today in concluding the poem.

Poetry doesn't need to rhyme, all the time, in due time, you'll begin to rhyme but,
until such time, simply express your thought's with pleasing words of love and comfort.
Believe me, she'll get the poetry from your message of love. :inlove:

Good Luck !

[~Stanley~]

so men like a women to fart on their face till they turn into a sheesh kebab??

u know,i dont even wanna know the answer to that!!!!!
And to think, I got rep'ed for expressions of love ! :inlove:

[Kh@led]

Thanks Stanely but the problem was solved later that day. Its my original and it wasn't too bad I guess :embar:

I sent the following poem to my dear wifey :inlove:


The plant of love
Has been sown,
Hope it grows up
With a strong backbone.
I feel lonely
Without you,
But you’re always
In my view.



(Its a bit short because I had to send it through sms )

Thanks everyone :)

[moshyman]

Glad the love poem is done, 'coz this thread was getting messy....

[MG]

Thanks Stanely but the problem was solved later that day. Its my original and it wasn't too bad I guess :embar:

I sent the following poem to my dear wifey :inlove:


The plant of love
Has been sown,
Hope it grows up
With a strong backbone.
I feel lonely
Without you,
But you’re always
In my view.



(Its a bit short because I had to send it through sms )

Thanks everyone :)
Awwwwww!!!

that is sooooooo sweeeeet!!

[Kh@led]

Awwwwww!!!

that is sooooooo sweeeeet!!
erm...thanks :embar:

I think she liked it too (and surprised ! :rolleyes: )

I am so into writing more poems now and send her but I think that won't be a good idea as it will loose its charm ! :inlove:

So, won't be seeing you in this section for a while. :D

[MG]

erm...thanks :embar:

I think she liked it too (and surprised ! :rolleyes: )

I am so into writing more poems now and send her but I think that won't be a good idea as it will loose its charm ! :inlove:

So, won't be seeing you in this section for a while. :D

aww!! that is soooo romantic,she mus be lovin it!!

yeh,your right, dont be righting one everyday,u know??

do it like once a month or something.

[mara]

once/week , the poetry is lovely :love:

[Abdul-Curim]

dil dhoondta hai fir wohi fursat kay raat din

baithay rahay tasawwuray jaanaa kiya huay

jaadoon ke narm dhoop aur aangan main layt kar

aankhon par kheench kar teray anchal kay sayae ko

aondhay paray huay karwat liye huay

dil dhoondta hai fir wahi fursat kay raat din

ya garmiyon ki raat jo purwaeyaan chalay

thandi safayd chaadaron pay jaagay dayr tak

taaron ko dekhtay rahey cjat par paray huaaay

dil dhoondta hai fir wahi fursat kay raat din

barfeeli sardiyon mein kisibhi pahaad par

wadi main goonjthi hui khamoshiyan sunay

aankhon mein bheegay beehgay say lamhay liye huay

dil dhoondta hai fir wahi fursat kay raat din

baithay rahay tasawwuray jaan kiye huay

[MG]

dil dhoondta hai fir wohi fursat kay raat din

baithay rahay tasawwuray jaanaa kiya huay

jaadoon ke narm dhoop aur aangan main layt kar

aankhon par kheench kar teray anchal kay sayae ko

aondhay paray huay karwat liye huay

dil dhoondta hai fir wahi fursat kay raat din

ya garmiyon ki raat jo purwaeyaan chalay

thandi safayd chaadaron pay jaagay dayr tak

taaron ko dekhtay rahey cjat par paray huaaay

dil dhoondta hai fir wahi fursat kay raat din

barfeeli sardiyon mein kisibhi pahaad par

wadi main goonjthi hui khamoshiyan sunay

aankhon mein bheegay beehgay say lamhay liye huay

dil dhoondta hai fir wahi fursat kay raat din

baithay rahay tasawwuray jaan kiye huay

wow,that is sooooo beautiful..........!

[Salman Al-Farsi]

dil dhoondta hai fir wohi fursat kay raat din

baithay rahay tasawwuray jaanaa kiya huay

jaadoon ke narm dhoop aur aangan main layt kar

aankhon par kheench kar teray anchal kay sayae ko

aondhay paray huay karwat liye huay

dil dhoondta hai fir wahi fursat kay raat din

ya garmiyon ki raat jo purwaeyaan chalay

thandi safayd chaadaron pay jaagay dayr tak

taaron ko dekhtay rahey cjat par paray huaaay

dil dhoondta hai fir wahi fursat kay raat din

barfeeli sardiyon mein kisibhi pahaad par

wadi main goonjthi hui khamoshiyan sunay

aankhon mein bheegay beehgay say lamhay liye huay

dil dhoondta hai fir wahi fursat kay raat din

baithay rahay tasawwuray jaan kiye huay

I didnt get that :(

but if I ever get a forced marriage from back home, I ll paste this one :p

[Abdul-Curim]

lol , that was not original anyway .

[MG]

I didnt get that :(

but if I ever get a forced marriage from back home, I ll paste this one :p


lol

back home?

forget back home,

if my "husband" gave me a poem like this id be dead chuffed!!!!!

:D

[mara]

Who will be kind to translate for us the poetry :D :embar:

[MG]

Who will be kind to translate for us the poetry :D :embar:

the poet himself?.....................