Poem

[Twix]

When we die on earth
it is not the end
From Allah we come
to him we shall return
The mystries of life and death
are in his hands
No one knows what lies ahead
except him
Alone we stand on that day
Look around you now and recognise your own dignity
Life has gone and eternity is here.

[lonely_me]

Lovely...

[slmz :)]

mashallah! gets straight to point... kinda mkes u think doesnt it?

[Twix]

yes

[goliwog]

From Allah we come
to him we shall return Did you truely come from allah
as you say we do?
man is born from women
is not this saying true

Give not credit to adopted fathers
for giving birth to you
for they alone hold second births
and they alone are true.

we cant return to a man unknown
we cant reject a man unmet
so now be wear in each mans town
To find the father who first you met

[Twix]

Allah gives us life and he takes life and to him we will all return.

Don't try and be clever also cut the riddle talk.

[goliwog]

lol i suppose I'm used to other forums were we have entire arguements in poetic form but if you wish ill cut it ...

Allah gives us life and he takes life and to him we will all return.you call allah the giver and taker of life but life starts with a man and women for allah to be the giver of life he must be able to see each person at the womb before birth and before conseption he must no you and so far there is only one God I know of that knew me before conseption

before I formed the in the belly i new thee, and before thou camest I sacntified thee, and i ordained thee prophet unto the nations. jer 1v5

I said in my poem give not credit to adopted fathers. This means worship the God who made you and sacntified you from birth not The God that you learnt about as you got older. You say to him we will all return but how can a man return to someone they have never turned to? Thats like excepting someone you dont no....

I dont wish to downplay your poem though it was a very good piece but my poem was just the way I felt...