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lonely_me
03-12-04, 09:44 PM
Are you happy that you mocked me?
Do you think that I care?
Are you happy that you scorned me?
Do think that it's fair?
You stab talk behind my back
Think you're helping but you're going off track!
Pointing your fingers awaiting an attack...
My friend you did leave in me a deep ugly impact...
Don't rush! take it ease!
Well please people please
just think before you act..
Be Mericful in all you do...
and always search for facts!! ...

Shaolin's-Finest
03-12-04, 10:36 PM
Are you happy that you mocked me?
Do you think that I care?
Are you happy that you scorned me?
Do think that it's fair?
You stab talk behind my back
Think you're helping but you're going off track!
Pointing your fingers awaiting an attack...
My friend you did leave in me a deep ugly impact...
Don't rush! take it ease!
Well please people please
just think before you act..
Be Mericful in all you do...
and always search for facts!! ...

Woah. Sounds good man! Ive read quite afew of your other poems and their really good.

Al-Nasser
03-12-04, 10:40 PM
Woah. Sounds good man!
you know that you are making her feel worst this way?

lonely_me
04-12-04, 05:00 AM
Thank you.

Shaolin's-Finest
06-12-04, 03:24 PM
I am?

Its a compliment....

akhtar
06-12-04, 05:39 PM
Salaam



Problems associate themselves to me like a rat to squalor
In the world of the spirutual, degradation like an anchor holds me down

Heavy is life thou rewards they tell me are unimaginable

lonely_me
07-12-04, 07:58 PM
Salaam



Problems associate themselves to me like a rat to squalor
In the world of the spirutual, degradation like an anchor holds me down

Heavy is life thou rewards they tell me are unimaginable



so profound!

slmz :)
24-12-04, 11:35 AM
deep poem... touches the heart.. mashaallah!