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slmz :)
27-11-04, 11:25 PM
what do you see

when you look at me

do you see someone limited,

or someone free



all some people can do is look and stare

simply because they can't see my hair



others think im controlled amd uneducated

they think im limited and un-liberated



they are so thankful that they are not me

because they would like to remain free



well free isn't exactly the word i would've used

describing women who are cheated on and abused



they think that i do not have opinions or voice

they think that being hooded isn't my choice



they think that the hood makes me look caged

that my husband or dad are totally outraged



all they can do is look at me in fear

and in my eye there is a tear



not because i have been stared at or made fun of

but because people are ignoring the one up above



on the day of judgement they will be the fools

because they were too ashamed to play by their own rules



maybe the guys won't think i'm a cutie

but at least i am filled with more inner beauty



see i have declined from being a guys toy

because i won't let myself be controlled by a boy



real men are able to appreciate my mind

and aren't busy looking at my behind



hooded girls are the ones really helping the muslim cause

the role that we play definitly deserves applause



i will be recognized because i am smart and bright

and because some people are inspired by my sight



the smart ones are attracted by my tranquility

in the back of their mind they wish they were me



we have the strength to do what we think is right

even if it means putting up a life long fight



you see we are not controlled by a mini skirt and tight shirt

we are given only respect and never treated like dirt



so you see we are the ones that are free and liberated

we are not the ones that are sexually terrorized and violated



we are the ones that are free and pure

we're free of STD's that have no cure



so when people ask you how you feel about the hood

just sum it up by saying 'baby its all good' ;)

ThE aPpReNtIcE
28-11-04, 12:00 AM
WOw..i love it my queen! hehe

slmz :)
29-11-04, 06:57 AM
i like this poem...one of my faves coz i think its really powerfull!! has a strong meaning kinda thing to it!

Layla2004
29-11-04, 07:30 AM
*eyes tearing* oh mother dear! *crying* that was such a beautiful poem about Muslimahs and the hijab. i wear my scarf everywhere and i have NONE WHATSOEVER shame!!! i love my hijab! :masha: mother dear, that was the most touching poem!

lonely_me
05-12-04, 08:43 PM
Cute...

Aymeric
05-12-04, 10:40 PM
.....Je plie mais ne romps pas.....
........I bend but do not break....
Are you French, lonely you ?

Layla2004
10-12-04, 07:04 AM
Cute...well, i was a little too dramatic (a little? how can i say a little? more like overreacting), anyways....

Layla2004
10-12-04, 07:05 AM
Are you French, lonely you ?
yeah, are you??? i've been wanting to ask the same question.

Ali_Khan
10-12-04, 07:50 AM
WOw..i love it my queen! heheare you flirting?

Mary Carol
10-12-04, 10:18 AM
Queen of the Kingdom and Poet Laureate...what a delightful combination.

:love:

ThE aPpReNtIcE
10-12-04, 10:34 AM
haha...nooo...who said that lol...naa she's not french

slmz :)
11-12-04, 11:45 AM
i like the words ' je ne fais rein '
dunno if i spelt it rong....it means sumthing like i dont do nething ..........or sumthin like that, correct me if im rong

ThE aPpReNtIcE
11-12-04, 12:55 PM
yep ur right lol..

Layla2004
12-12-04, 05:27 AM
haha...nooo...who said that lol...naa she's not french
you sure u werent flirting???

slmz :)
12-12-04, 03:29 PM
lol! y duz evry1 think that?

Nikah042702
12-12-04, 04:31 PM
:masha: That was beautiful.

ThE aPpReNtIcE
12-12-04, 05:12 PM
yeah..why does everyone think that....lol :)

Tahiyah
12-12-04, 06:03 PM
nice poem, alhamdulillah

i ve read this one before, and it may help to build confidence for wearing hijaab, but to me it also seems a bit arrogant

slmz :)
17-12-04, 02:25 PM
i no what u mean by a bit arrogant tahiyah....and it does a bit