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Ur sis in Islam
12-09-08, 12:14 AM
If only you see what I see.
The beauty and beyond which is surrounding me,
The daunting buzz of that humble bumble bee,
A creation so exquisite, yet with a sting so sly,
Validating our senses and bringing us to reality,
Knowing that each creation holds this trait,
Which we surely cannot deny,
Leading us to question, why?

If only you see what I see,
My eyes wide open, trying to accept every token,
The silent whisper of the sun,
Sunrise, Sunset its duty is done,
The water which comes from the skies above, with tenderness and love.
The blessings in disguise, we moan and groan,
Not knowing without this water, how will we survive?

If only you see what I see,
The star at night glistening so bright, blurring my sight,
I went out for a walk last night, too see these beautiful stars and of course to see mars.
All I could think about was Allah swt beautiful creations, there truly countless,
We can’t even begin to imagine, we truly turn soundless,
It seems like were living a dream which seems to be real,
Living life with such an appeal,
Living life with such an appeal, wanting each lavish meal, day after day,
Not contemplating about what we will say to our one and only,
Were living this life, thinking were all holy,

If only you see what I see,
This person looking back at me,
Staring so profoundly,
Who is this person?
Someone I don’t want to be,
Someone who wants to be free,
Free from sin, Free from sorrow, Free from pain,
Knowing from this that there is surely no gain,
Feeling so empty,
Not knowing her blessings are plenty,
Her heart aches, a tear rolls down her cheek,
Wondering why has she become so weak.

She has a disease which came upon her with ease,
Through whispers she became deaf, dumb and blind,
Finding it hard to comprehend in her mind,
How did she get to this stage?
After she knew it would be written down on her page,
It’s written, the pages are dry, but she begins to try,
Tries to plea to her Lord,
Asking to cut this pain with a sword,
The pain of remorse, the pain of guilt,
Knowing on that day everything will be spilt.

So do you see what I see?
With ease or difficulty?
Or do you see right through my simplicity?

Chalenger
12-09-08, 12:44 AM
Mashaa' Allah sis

so wonderful ....I LOVE IT ^_^

Ur sis in Islam
12-09-08, 02:22 AM
I'm glad you love it sis!:D

muslimma
12-09-08, 01:50 PM
tabarak'Alah ukhti gr8 poem! ;)

Ur bro in islam
23-10-08, 01:48 AM
the other half of the poem!:)

I can see what you see
Is this how the world was supposed to be
You always stumble if you try to be free
And you always fail no matter how hard you try
The troubles are caused because of our mentality
Somethings we can't change because its written in our fate
Which will never change until the day we die
Sometimes I do wish that I could cry!

I can see what you see
Promises are always spoken, but are made to be broken
All that people do is have a bit of fun
Not realizing what they have done
Islam is what we need to think of, all it teaches is love
So look through my eyes, instead of alone
without this blessing from Allah (saw) we would not be alive!

I can see what you see
Million miles away with tremendous height, providing us with light
You obviously have courage and might, don't think that you are going to be amongst the superstars
Yea you are right these beautiful creation are beyond our guess
But staring at the stars helps me to destress
Even in our dreams we can truly feel
But we need to sleep to mentally heal
Every sin we commit has a very big price to pay
Without the company of Allah (saw) we would be lonely
Some of us not realizing our Imaan is getting holey!

I can see what you see
At least we both know its a she
she is effected psychologically
Your vision could only worsen
You are better than thee
Is there something you are trying to tell me?
Seems as though this person is in your mind like a stain
You just need to keep yourself in the right lane
Help her to reach sanity
By bringing her to a path of humility
Humiliation is what it takes to realize you are a freak
After all everyone feels bleak!

The cure to many diseases can be found in the honey of bees
I wonder how you felt when you discovered this difficult find
All she can do is be more like you as in kind
If she doesn't find it in her heart to change
She will be trapped for eternity in a burning cage
You are right the pens have been lifted high and the ink dry
She took this life as a game board
The only one we can ask for forgiveness is our lord
We cant take nothing that we have built
Only our deeds that will make the scales tilt!

I can see what you see
We both know Islam is the key
Its the only way we can truly be free!

Ur sis in Islam
23-10-08, 01:42 PM
^^^^:rubeyes::eek: woahh you wrote a response to my poem! MashAllah.

But still ahki, I dont think you see what I see! :(

Ur bro in islam
23-10-08, 11:25 PM
mayb i do mayb i dont! u neva did tel me. n i neva told u. lol
by the way afta all nothing has changed! :(:rubeyes:

chique
24-10-08, 04:30 AM
Awww how sweet like it sis.