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Safiya
18-08-08, 04:25 PM
Last Minute
By Safiya

I use to think of you as a rose amongst the weed,
How daft I was to assume your rainbow
Would form without a decree.
I thought you perfect;
Thought you a blessing especially for me,
I was seeing miracles
Where never did a rain fall upon me

I had succumbed to your allure,
And it wasn’t hard convincing others either;
I fell for you
Thinking this was a clichéd match made in Heaven,
Despite my lack of belief,
Without realising that I actually deserved someone better

Why is it that we compromise?
It is my life that I am entrusting to you.
This isn’t a small matter,
My soul;
My eternity, is yours after this,
Oh you, who are to be my beloved.



Don't assume, thanks. It's just a hypothetical situation; which you would understand, if you understood the poem.

love00
27-09-08, 03:36 AM
Wow, you have some talent, masha Allah
I like this one too! Nice work

Redmist
27-09-08, 04:05 PM
^ Nice writing safiya :up:

Safiya
27-09-08, 05:59 PM
:salams

Shukran... :)