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thurber
15-08-08, 05:48 PM
Within the forest

the wind rustled

leaves

Words became

images

armadillos scampered

along

the dried flowers below

the scent of wild berries

drew birds from the

canopy above

Little creatures

I could see too

wandering through

Our Earth

a joy

in the hearts

that love it so...

-Charity M.

Kasim2k7
15-08-08, 05:52 PM
whats the deep message in it? it didnt even rhyme

Hiking
15-08-08, 07:45 PM
Must there be a deep message/rhyme? Just a series of beautiful images/a related sentiment.

Kasim2k7
15-08-08, 07:45 PM
Must there be a deep message/rhyme? Just a series of beautiful images/a related sentiment.

i admit it is quite beautiful

Safiya
17-08-08, 07:42 PM
Must there be a deep message/rhyme? Just a series of beautiful images/a related sentiment.

Exactly.

Which actually says more.

Thanks for sharing it Thurber.

:)