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Safiya
07-08-08, 07:38 PM
She

She spoke volumes,
And yet She hadn’t uttered a word,
You tried to indoctrinate,
But She was challenging your soul;
The words that surpassed you,
Failed to her;
Failed to contain
The life innate to her thought
Socrates didn’t have a thing on She,
What makes you think
You can stand up close?

Okay, so it's unfinished, this going to be another one of those "phase" poems...

truepath
07-08-08, 07:41 PM
she?

Is that you?

Safiya
07-08-08, 07:43 PM
she?

Is that you?

Nope, it's generally referring to a "Sister".

cynosure__
07-08-08, 07:48 PM
HUMMMMM GOOD

u write poetry

Safiya
07-08-08, 08:05 PM
HUMMMMM GOOD

u write poetry

Thanks.

Yes, I wrote the poem.

scribble
07-08-08, 08:10 PM
I like it, I really do sis. Mashallah! Keep going. I'm waiting. *twiddles thumbs*

Safiya
07-08-08, 08:15 PM
I like it, I really do sis. Mashallah! Keep going. I'm waiting. *twiddles thumbs*

Shukran. :)

love00
27-09-08, 03:34 AM
Ah, I love it, nice one masha Allah

Safiya
27-09-08, 06:09 PM
Ah, I love it, nice one masha Allah

:salams

Thanks, Sister!