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Chained_Water
12-02-08, 03:46 PM
Coagulated thoughts on a torn page,
Like the visions of a sage in a higher state,
Outside the comprehension of a hasty mind,
Units of movement wrapped in space and time.

Plumbing through boundless realms for the beloved,
Eyes flickering and darting from shard to shard,
Broken fragments of souls ethereally shattered,
Searching for a truth from a love that’s long scattered.

Departed but constant in the vicissitudes of time,
Sharp and lucid before the cornea of souls eye,
But this is running aimless through the meadows of past,
Present putrefying whilst feeding the unattainable and vast.

Falling through vaulting depths to the heights of mental abyss,
Confused by the sweet poison of intoxicating memories,
Held in weightless suspension with every vivid moment,
Throbbing heart, paralysed limbs and watering eyes.

Irfan GBH
12-02-08, 06:01 PM
Nice poem! You used lotsa long words which usually makes the poem lame but in this case you used ones I understand :D

urban_rose
12-02-08, 06:08 PM
really good, mashAllah :love:

Chained_Water
12-02-08, 06:31 PM
Nice poem! You used lotsa long words which usually makes the poem lame but in this case you used ones I understand :D

:jkk: irfan and urby :)

I'm trying to keep my brain ticking over before it turns to mush, I say "innit" too often offline :rubeyes: ..so gotta compensate :o

Irfan GBH
13-02-08, 02:36 PM
:jkk: irfan and urby :)

I'm trying to keep my brain ticking over before it turns to mush, I say "innit" too often offline :rubeyes: ..so gotta compensate :o

Imagine that, a teacher saying "innit" :wacko: I bet kids keep clear of slang at your school :p

Chained_Water
13-02-08, 02:37 PM
Imagine that, a teacher saying "innit" :wacko: I bet kids keep clear of slang at your school :p
I haven't got a school yet :eek: ..well I have temporarily, will be starting it Monday :nervous: ..make dua :o

Chained_Water
29-02-08, 03:06 PM
Hmm *sigh*

MMS
29-02-08, 03:12 PM
Hmm *sigh*

sup? why you sighing
btw i keep reading this title as 'relieving you' makes me think it has something to do with going to the toilet mwaha

Chained_Water
29-02-08, 04:44 PM
sup? why you sighing
btw i keep reading this title as 'relieving you' makes me think it has something to do with going to the toilet mwaha

I was just cogitating..

someone once said my username reminded them of a those long chained toilet flush.. grr..

.: Anna :.
29-02-08, 07:54 PM
sup? why you sighing
btw i keep reading this title as 'relieving you' makes me think it has something to do with going to the toilet mwaha
lol me too :p :o

cw i dnt understand about 20% the words in ur poem!! :smack: