Would you, my love?

[Bubblegoose]

If I fell into the well of your heart, would you come down and rescue me?
Or would you let me drown?
If they revoked my crown, and my kingdom fell down.
Would you stand by my side?
Or would pride give you the urge to runaway and hide?
If the tide came in and all that I possessed became swept away.
Would I still have your love unconditionally night and day?
Or would you drift away into oblivion and leave me stranded?
If I handed you the key to the room within my heart?
Would you use it against me, burn it all down and then swiftly depart?
Or would you warm it up with the light of your love?
If a test came down upon me from up above, and I became afflicted.
Lost all hope and to a white ghost I became addicted.
Would you be prepared to become my means of rehabilitation?
Or would a train ride to a destination called separation become your means of emancipation?
When the sea becomes stormy, would you be there for me?
Would you dry my eyes, when pain caused them to fill with tears?
Would you comfort me with your love and ease my fears?
Or would you see this as a sign of weakness, and find strength in the arms of another?
Would you cut me to pieces with scenes from another lover?
Or would your sense of devotion run deeper than the ocean?
If the sky became angry and it began to cry razor blades.
Would you let my body be your umbrella until the storm faded?
Or would you become jaded and walk away?
And paint my mood with five different shades of grey.
Would you really steal the colours from my rainbow?
By walking out of the front door only to never return.
Set my soul on fire and leave me to burn.
Or would you let me take a part of you and in return let me give you a part of me.
So that nine months later we'd be blessed with a gift that would forever set us free?
If I filled you with my love and your womb became swollen.
Would you blame me for innocence stolen?
Or would you thank me and rank me worthy enough to be a father to our child?
Would you harm me or calm me when I got a little buckwild?
Would you be there for me through all the highs and low?
To ensure that what we had together never lost its glow?
Would you? Would you? Would you, my love?

[Redmist]

If I fell into the well of your heart, would you come down and rescue me?
Or would you let me drown?
If they revoked my crown, and my kingdom fell down.
Would you stand by my side?
Or would pride give you the urge to runaway and hide?
If the tide came in and all that I possessed became swept away.
Would I still have your love unconditionally night and day?
Or would you drift away into oblivion and leave me stranded?
If I handed you the key to the room within my heart?
Would you use it against me, burn it all down and then swiftly depart?
Or would you warm it up with the light of your love?
If a test came down upon me from up above, and I became afflicted.
Lost all hope and to a white ghost I became addicted.
Would you be prepared to become my means of rehabilitation?
Or would a train ride to a destination called separation become your means of emancipation?
When the sea becomes stormy, would you be there for me?
Would you dry my eyes, when pain caused them to fill with tears?
Would you comfort me with your love and ease my fears?
Or would you see this as a sign of weakness, and find strength in the arms of another?
Would you cut me to pieces with scenes from another lover?
Or would your sense of devotion run deeper than the ocean?
If the sky became angry and it began to cry razor blades.
Would you let my body be your umbrella until the storm faded?
Or would you become jaded and walk away?
And paint my mood with five different shades of grey.
Would you really steal the colours from my rainbow?
By walking out of the front door only to never return.
Set my soul on fire and leave me to burn.
Or would you let me take a part of you and in return let me give you a part of me.
So that nine months later we'd be blessed with a gift that would forever set us free?
If I filled you with my love and your womb became swollen.
Would you blame me for innocence stolen?
Or would you thank me and rank me worthy enough to be a father to our child?
Would you harm me or calm me when I got a little buckwild?
Would you be there for me through all the highs and low?
To ensure that what we had together never lost its glow?
Would you? Would you? Would you, my love?


Nice :up:

the first half seemed to rhyme and question and answer, question and answer but it lost its way a bit near the second half which is understandable. Good ideas very profound. Good on you Bro.

[Tahiyah]

your poetry reminds me of the type of poets on HBO's def poetry jamm, something like that its called. every heard of it? its a little show they have from time to time.

maybe you should apply?

[Bubblegoose]

your poetry reminds me of the type of poets on HBO's def poetry jamm, something like that its called. every heard of it? its a little show they have from time to time.

maybe you should apply?

Yeah I know Def Poetry Jam, that one poet Black Ice, he totally rocks!:up:

If you have never seen him do his thing just you tube it, that guy is good indeed.

Thanks for the positive words, maybe one day, I can geton a platform like that.:)

[Rosalie-Beauty]

The poem was good, but it reminds me of the terrible Valentines celebration there having at school soon.:(

Sorry I just killed the mood.

[forever_shadow]

That was good. :up: