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777
14-01-08, 03:30 AM
Oh Allah....Please forgive me...

Slowly streaming down my face
eyes open, brows knitted
my heart cries and yearns
guide me by your Grace
my soul is pitted
against the evil it spurns

Oh Allah.......please forgive me

My forehead on the floor
I utter some words
that come from the depth of my core
somehow it's shaken
and knows to implore
Him who created it

Oh Allah......please forgive me

stephenoskie
14-01-08, 10:27 AM
:D Nice !! Deep and emotional

Umm Haya
14-01-08, 02:38 PM
SubhanAllah that really helped!

*Starry_gal*
14-01-08, 02:42 PM
Masha'allah! :)

777
15-01-08, 03:11 AM
Jazakumallahu khair
:inlove:

LastFriday
15-01-08, 03:32 AM
Ameen! Masha'Allah well written :)

imran1976
15-01-08, 01:46 PM
Oh Allah....Please forgive me...

Slowly streaming down my face
eyes open, brows knitted
my heart cries and yearns
guide me by your Grace
my soul is pitted
against the evil it spurns

Oh Allah.......please forgive me

My forehead on the floor
I utter some words
that come from the depth of my core
somehow it's shaken
and knows to implore
Him who created it

Oh Allah......please forgive me

so u have become a poet now? :D

777
16-01-08, 01:49 AM
so u have become a poet now? :D

I've always been a poet.....duh :rolleyes:

What do you think of the poem?

What's up with the banana avatar?

Feel free to give me a rep;)

hanaa_al_muminah
16-01-08, 12:09 PM
just beautiful...absolutely beautiful............:up::inlove:

Raziel
16-01-08, 12:28 PM
Oh Allah....Please forgive me...

Slowly streaming down my face
eyes open, brows knitted
my heart cries and yearns
guide me by your Grace
my soul is pitted
against the evil it spurns

Oh Allah.......please forgive me

My forehead on the floor
I utter some words
that come from the depth of my core
somehow it's shaken
and knows to implore
Him who created it

Oh Allah......please forgive me

:jkk: akhi that was Brilliant! :D

imran1976
17-01-08, 11:36 AM
I've always been a poet.....duh :rolleyes:

What do you think of the poem?

What's up with the banana avatar?

Feel free to give me a rep;)

how come i didn't knew that :rubeyes:

the poem is beautiful, mashallah!( u'r head works fast now:D)

banana AV, this is in reaction to current political crisis in pakistan where there is no rule of law and a dictator can sack anyone he likes even the judges. this can only happen in a banana republic :rolleyes:

777
17-01-08, 12:24 PM
how come i didn't knew that :rubeyes:

the poem is beautiful, mashallah!( u'r head works fast now:D)

banana AV, this is in reaction to current political crisis in pakistan where there is no rule of law and a dictator can sack anyone he likes even the judges. this can only happen in a banana republic :rolleyes:

You didn't know cuz you are forgetful and you don't pay attention. I used to always post poems left and right.

Well, I think that if you say the poem is beautiful, it is a reflection on your heart. It means that you are beautiful..

(my head has always worked fast, perhaps you have just caught up with it @))

Well, if it's a banana republic.....make sure the monkeys don't find out about it! :banan::nono:

~Imaan~
17-01-08, 06:30 PM
MashaAllah, nice poem.
JazaakAllahu Khayr...

imran1976
17-01-08, 10:23 PM
You didn't know cuz you are forgetful and you don't pay attention. I used to always post poems left and right.

Well, I think that if you say the poem is beautiful, it is a reflection on your heart. It means that you are beautiful..

(my head has always worked fast, perhaps you have just caught up with it @))

Well, if it's a banana republic.....make sure the monkeys don't find out about it! :banan::nono:

ya ya i remember u used to post left right like 3-4 years bakkk. A poem after a gap of 3-4 years, this shows how fast u'r head works :D

Well, monkeys won't find it out....make sure they don't escape cage :up:

Jihaan
17-01-08, 11:19 PM
Oh Allah....Please forgive me...

Slowly streaming down my face
eyes open, brows knitted
my heart cries and yearns
guide me by your Grace
my soul is pitted
against the evil it spurns

Oh Allah.......please forgive me

My forehead on the floor
I utter some words
that come from the depth of my core
somehow it's shaken
and knows to implore
Him who created it

Oh Allah......please forgive me
:(
Jazak'Allah Khair for sharing

777
19-01-08, 12:45 AM
:(
Jazak'Allah Khair for sharing

wa iyyakum :) thanks for readin it.....