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Suliman
03-09-07, 12:05 PM
This is my first draft of an email campaign for Orphan Aid (http://orphan-aid.org)

Comments and crits are welcome :D

Saeed Al-Muslim
03-09-07, 12:31 PM
As Salaamu Alaikum,

Masha'Allaah looking nice, you've got a clean and simplistic design. If I could suggest anything to add to it I would suggest adding some curves and little gradients here and there, currently everything looks a little too boxed and flat. Also do something with the contact information at the bottom right, to help make it stand-out a little more from the rest of the design. To make the donation button really hit home maybe change the colour to red. You’ve got two shades of blues along with a green, maybe try adding another colour such as purple, this could be a gentle gradient from top-to-bottom.

I’m carrying on a little to much now. All in all, it’s a nice and pleasant design thus far.

Ma'aSalaama

Suliman
03-09-07, 12:49 PM
It's just a HTML email remember :P

But thank you

LostInThought
03-09-07, 02:46 PM
definitely good for a first draft :up:

Saeed Al-Muslim
03-09-07, 04:54 PM
It's just a HTML email remember :P

But thank you

[lol] Sorry, then it's great. I thought it would be JPEG or something.

Ma'aSalaama