But i'm still sleeping..

[zammy]

Thunder and storms are shaking the sky

But I'm still sleeping

An orphan is sitting on the streets trying not to cry

but i'm still sleeping

two countries have decided to spark war

but i'm still sleeping

my health is deteriorating and my heart is sore

but i'm still sleeping

my family has left me and i'm all alone

but i'm still sleeping

opportunities fly by and ring goes the phone

but i'm still sleeping

the world is in chaos and there is no escape

but i'm still sleeping

my life keeps on playing the same deathly tape

but i'm still sleeping

I hear the door being knocked, I feel a tug at my soul

but i'm still sleeping

I know what is coming as the clock ticks it's toll

but i'm still sleeping

My breathing comes hard and my soul starts to squirm inside

now i'm awake

the the angel of death is right by my side

I'm wide awake

But I see that it's now too late to be awake

I've already finished leading a life so totally fake

my books have been closed, the pen's been lifted, the ink has dried

that's the end of the story of how I sadly died...

[Tic~Tac-Toe]

Thunders and storms are shaking the sky

But I'm still sleeping

An orphan is sitting on the streets trying not to cry

but i'm still sleeping

two countries have decided to spark war

but i'm still sleeping

my health is deteriorating and my heart is sore

but i'm still sleeping

my family has left me and i'm all alone

but i'm still sleeping

opportunities fly by and ring goes the phone

but i'm still sleeping

the world is in chaos and there is no escape

but i'm still sleeping

my life keeps on playing the same deathly tape

but i'm still sleeping

I hear the door being knocked, I feel a tug at my soul

but i'm still sleeping

I know what is coming as the clock ticks it's toll

but i'm still sleeping

My breathing comes hard and my soul starts to squirm inside

now i'm awake

the the angel of death is right by my side

I'm wide awake

But I see that it's now too late to be awake

I've already finished leading a life so totally fake

my books have been closed, the pen's been lifted, the ink has dried

that's the end of the story of how I sadly died...

u gt skillz :up:

[Safeera89]

nice poem...

[zammy]

:jkk:

[imperfect]

great piece, motivating.

[*Al-Qadr*]

:)

[Nasibah]

Thunder and storms are shaking the sky

But I'm still sleeping

An orphan is sitting on the streets trying not to cry

but i'm still sleeping

two countries have decided to spark war

but i'm still sleeping

my health is deteriorating and my heart is sore

but i'm still sleeping

my family has left me and i'm all alone

but i'm still sleeping

opportunities fly by and ring goes the phone

but i'm still sleeping

the world is in chaos and there is no escape

but i'm still sleeping

my life keeps on playing the same deathly tape

but i'm still sleeping

I hear the door being knocked, I feel a tug at my soul

but i'm still sleeping

I know what is coming as the clock ticks it's toll

but i'm still sleeping

My breathing comes hard and my soul starts to squirm inside

now i'm awake

the the angel of death is right by my side

I'm wide awake

But I see that it's now too late to be awake

I've already finished leading a life so totally fake

my books have been closed, the pen's been lifted, the ink has dried

that's the end of the story of how I sadly died...

Well written, well presented. Overall excelllent. May ALLAH reward you immensely.

[Z-Blade]

Well written, well presented. Overall excelllent. May ALLAH reward you immensely.

AMEEN!

Just remember ukhti Zammy, to follow what you preach inshaAllah :up:, :jkk:

Wassalam.

[zammy]

Just remember ukhti Zammy, to follow what you preach inshaAllah :up:, :jkk:


Wa iyaak brother. Insha'Allah I shall :up:

:jkk: for the input everyone :)

[Urr]

That is deep.

mashallah u got talent.

you dont mind if i post this on another forum do ya?

[zammy]

as long as you give credit and let me know which forum it is then I don't mind :) u can pm me if you want.