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zammy
23-08-07, 04:21 PM
When the sun is wrapped in darkness beyond understanding
and when stars fall one after the other
So tremendous will be the day
When brother flees from brother

When mountains will crumble away to dust
and seas will be set aflame
when every soul will be fully recompensed
and the sinful brought to shame

On the day when the horn will be blasted
and hearts will tremble with fear
each one of us drowing in our own worries
as our whole lives, infront of us, appear

On the day when the infant girl will question
for what sin was she buried alive?
When each soul will silently wonder
in dunya, for what purpose did I strive?

Years passed, and I grew old
feeble-boned, my house and car sold
and now, on this Day
I’m sitting down, I’m thinking hard
all shriveled up, my mind is starved
my lips are chapped, my throat is parched
my guilty conscious overly starched

My spirits blue, my senses are fogged
my brain clamped shut, my heart all clogged
my fingertips tingly, my atmosphere static
the last morsel of sanity just turned frantic

My ears are plugged, my mouth is closed
I should have made sure, but I supposed
it’s too late now, the fear is upon me
I want to go back in time so badly

Now so full of regret for my wasted time
I can hear the bells clanging their deadly chime
it is judgment day, and I’m not prepared
when I was alive, I never cared



And yet I know, I will be paid back in full
it won’t be long before I feel the pull
the angels of hell dragging me away
completely ignoring what I have to say

I’m saying sorry, I’m quite ashamed
this exhibit of torture has got me tamed
if only, if only I could go back again
to try to regain what I ignored then

My sense of dignity and modesty
dealing with everything in all honesty
how clear it is now, all that I used to deny
If only I could have another try

But now I’m nothing but a dejected soul
waiting to be thrown into a burning hole
whose flames and vastness make me feel small
when back in the world I felt so tall

Why did I ignore my religion that spoke truth in all matters?
I should have remembered that Allah is the best of planners
Wa yamkuruna wa makrullah
Wallahu kheyrul maakireen






don't be too harsh with the critique :o

zammy
26-08-07, 11:06 PM
how come nobady likin/hatin mah poemmm :torture:

Aquarious
24-09-07, 12:53 PM
Asalaualikum my dear sister. :75:
Jazzakallahu khair for the poem :up:
May the Day of judgement be the BEST day of our life.
May Allah give our book of deeds in our right hand
May Allah grant us Jannatul Firduase out of his infinite Mercy.
Ameen!

Zesty
24-09-07, 01:24 PM
Excellent! :) i really enjoyed it! MashaAllah you write very well!

elji
24-09-07, 02:09 PM
you are goooooood. I loved your "guilt struck" one and this is great too.

zammy
24-09-07, 08:59 PM
Asalaualikum my dear sister. :75:
Jazzakallahu khair for the poem :up:
May the Day of judgement be the BEST day of our life.
May Allah give our book of deeds in our right hand
May Allah grant us Jannatul Firduase out of his infinite Mercy.
Ameen!

Ameen!


:jkk: everyone :)

Chained_Water
18-10-07, 11:35 AM
Very nice zammy, mashaAllah.. I like the fast pace of it, it adds to the urgency of the subject matter and the feeling of fear being described.