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Kas1m
07-05-09, 08:57 PM
ham hain raahi pyar ke...hmm i forgot the second line

sunni_ninja
07-05-09, 08:59 PM
ham hain raahi pyar ke...hmm i forgot the second line

pir milain gai chalthai chalthai..(i thwt i'd finish it off 4 ya..)

hmm bwt the word wafa.. ive heard of that.. is it to do with love or something..?

Al-hayaa
07-05-09, 09:01 PM
nice but a bit hard to translate...whats the english for wafa?

i think wafa means faith.

sunni_ninja
07-05-09, 09:03 PM
i think wafa means faith.

hmmm then wat does bai wafa mean..??

Al-hayaa
07-05-09, 09:05 PM
unfaithful...duh

sunni_ninja
07-05-09, 09:06 PM
unfaithful...duh

lol well silly wafa wud mean faithful not faith..silly billy..

Al-hayaa
07-05-09, 09:07 PM
wafadar means faithful

sunni_ninja
07-05-09, 09:10 PM
wafadar means faithful

ohh i dont know.. i giv up..lol.

Al-hayaa
07-05-09, 09:12 PM
woohoo I WON I WON

:jkk: 4 da poem to da OP.

Medievalist
07-05-09, 10:45 PM
yeh ishq naheen asaan, bas itna samajh lijye,
ik aag ka darya hai, awr doob ke jana hai.

courtesy of Kajol in K3G

Kas1m
07-05-09, 10:59 PM
yeh ishq naheen asaan, bas itna samajh lijye,
ik aag ka darya hai, awr doob ke jana hai.

courtesy of Kajol in K3G

Wah thats a brilliant share

Zebunissa
07-05-09, 10:59 PM
Jeetay jee paya na kuch ham ne, zamaaney walo
Ab janaazey ko to rukhsat ki izaajat mil jaey

ImperfectBeauty
08-05-09, 01:34 PM
Hum bewafaa, hargiz na the, Par hum wafaa kar na sake
Hum Ko mili,us ki saza. Hum jo khata kar na sake.......x

ImperfectBeauty
08-05-09, 01:37 PM
buhat shuhrat buhat izzat buhat dolat ka kya karna

khushi dil main ho thori si wahi hum ko ghanimat hai

bichharne ki na milne ki na khone ki na pane ki

tawaq'o chhor do sab ki yehi jazb-e muhabbat hai......x

ImperfectBeauty
08-05-09, 01:40 PM
tajiron ke sheher main jazbaat ki qimat kahan

zinda rahna hai to apne aap ko anmol kar

sar-e risht-e sookhe patto-n ki tarah gir jaenge

kya milega sach ki karwahat fiza main ghol kar......x

Fais
08-05-09, 05:10 PM
Kameez teri kaali, voh sona pulla waali.

:rotfl:

:outta:

Kas1m
08-05-09, 08:35 PM
this shair is brilliant if you go in deep

Barbaad chaman karne kay liye bas aik hi ulloo (owl) kaafi tha
ab ulloo hi ulloo hain, anjaam e gulistaan kiya ho ga

Al-hayaa
08-05-09, 08:45 PM
:sub: its sooo funny, it reminds me abt a gaalibs story, but since its a petry section i aint posting it here.

Kas1m
08-05-09, 08:47 PM
:sub: its sooo funny, it reminds me abt a gaalibs story, but since its a petry section i aint posting it here.

post it post it...please

Al-hayaa
08-05-09, 08:58 PM
in urdu or english?

Zebunissa
08-05-09, 08:58 PM
Idhar zindagi ka janaza uttey ga
Udhar zindagi un ki dulhan baney gi

Qayamat se pehley qayamat hain yaaro
Mere saamanay meri dunya lutey gi

Kas1m
08-05-09, 08:58 PM
in urdu or english?

any

Kas1m
08-05-09, 08:59 PM
Idhar zindagi ka janaza uttey ga
Udhar zindagi un ki dulhan baney gi

Qayamat se pehley qayamat hain yaaro
Mere saamanay meri dunya lutay gi

wah wah

Zebunissa
08-05-09, 09:02 PM
wah wah

Barai meherbani se koi rep to karo na :o

Al-hayaa
08-05-09, 09:07 PM
ok.

ek martaba mirza gaalib apne dosto ke saath ek mehfil mai bethe thai aur aam (mango) khaa rahe the, aam (mango) khatam karke uska chhilka (mango skin) unhone donkey ke paas pheka, chhilka ko smell karke donkey ne chehra pher liya (in other words donkey didnt like the mango skin). yeh nazaara dekh kar gaalib ke ek dost (jise mango pasand nahi the) ne comment kiya ke mango tau aisi cheez hai jise gadhe (donkey ) bhi nahi khaate hai. ye sun kar gaalib ne jawaab diyaa ke wo gadhe (donkey) hi hote hai jo mango nahi khaate hai. hahaha

got it?

Kas1m
08-05-09, 09:43 PM
ok.

ek martaba mirza gaalib apne dosto ke saath ek mehfil mai bethe thai aur aam (mango) khaa rahe the, aam (mango) khatam karke uska chhilka (mango skin) unhone donkey ke paas pheka, chhilka ko smell karke donkey ne chehra pher liya (in other words donkey didnt like the mango skin). yeh nazaara dekh kar gaalib ke ek dost (jise mango pasand nahi the) ne comment kiya ke mango tau aisi cheez hai jise gadhe (donkey ) bhi nahi khaate hai. ye sun kar gaalib ne jawaab diyaa ke wo gadhe (donkey) hi hote hai jo mango nahi khaate hai. hahaha

got it?

lol never got it. Well kinda

Al-hayaa
08-05-09, 09:44 PM
u wat? u didnt get it? shame on u akhi

sunni_ninja
08-05-09, 10:55 PM
u wat? u didnt get it? shame on u akhi

i got it.. haha it was pretty funny sis..

Al-hayaa
08-05-09, 10:57 PM
:salams

alhumdulillah atleast sum1 got it.

where were u sis? how was ur jummah?

sunni_ninja
08-05-09, 11:15 PM
:salams

alhumdulillah atleast sum1 got it.

where were u sis? how was ur jummah?

lol.. what u mean were was i..?? i was at uni today..:(:(.. but alhamdulillah jummah was gd.. hw bwt urz..?? btw i did hav 2 read ur post twice to get it.. :P

Kas1m
08-05-09, 11:47 PM
Shame on me lol btw i did get it

Umer Bin Khatab
11-05-09, 08:53 PM
tuk hirso havas ki chaur miyaa
mat des ba des phire maaraa

kazzaak ajal ka loote hai
din raat bajaa kar nakkaaraa

kyaa badiyaa bhesaa bhel shutar
kyaa bhuni pallaa sarbaaraa

kyaa gehu chaawal mot matar
kyaa aag dhuaa aur angaaraa

sab thaat paraa reh jaaeygaa
jab laad chalegaa banjaaraa

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tzd06c41ENQ

aboosait
12-05-09, 02:53 AM
tuk hirso havas ki chaur miyaa
mat des ba des phire maaraa

kazzaak ajal ka loote hai
din raat bajaa kar nakkaaraa

kyaa badiyaa bhesaa bhel shutar
kyaa bhuni pallaa sarbaaraa

kyaa gehu chaawal mot matar
kyaa aag dhuaa aur angaaraa

sab thaat paraa reh jaaeygaa
jab laad chalegaa banjaaraa

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tzd06c41ENQ

Thats Bhojpuri, not Urdu.

Umer Bin Khatab
12-05-09, 03:00 AM
Same difference:rolleyes::D

Bhojpuri sounds like a dish anyway.

MMS
19-05-09, 10:01 PM
Idhar zindagi ka janaza uttey ga
Udhar zindagi un ki dulhan baney gi

Qayamat se pehley qayamat hain yaaro
Mere saamanay meri dunya lutey gi

nice :up:

kaali kaali ghata cha rahi thi
aandhi meri taraf aarahi thi
kaali zulfon ka sadqa diya jo
badli rehmat ki chaney lagi hein

:alhumdull

Kas1m
26-05-09, 10:37 PM
Ham bhi madinay jaaye gain aaj nahi to kal sahi
Aaqa hamain bulain gain aaj nahi to kal sahi

Kas1m
26-05-09, 10:42 PM
Khaate hain sunni halway sarkar kay karam say
Dekho to najdiyon ko kawwon par pyar aaye

asher
03-06-09, 08:26 PM
Khaate hain sunni halway sarkar kay karam say
Dekho to najdiyon ko kawwon par pyar aaye

what does this sheir means??

Awaaz
05-06-09, 02:57 PM
hajoom-e-ghum meri fitrat badal nai sakhti
karoon mein kiya meri adaat hai muskurane ki

Zebunissa
12-06-09, 10:18 PM
Tu jo nahin hain to kuch bhi nahin hain
Ye maana ke mehfil jawaan hain haseen hain
Tu jo nahin hain to kuch bhi nahin hain

Samaj main na aaye, yeh kya maajara hain?
Tujhey paa ke dil main, yeh khaali sa kya hain?

Kyu har waqt dil main koi bekalli hain?
Kyu har waqt seenay main rehti kamee hain?

Mujhey phir tabaa kar, mujhey phir rulaa jaa
Sitam karney waley, kahin se tu aaja
Kahin se tu aaja...

Aankhon main teri hi soorat bassi hain
Teri hi tarha, tera gham bhi haseen hain

Tu jo nahin hain to kuch bhi nahin hain
Yeh maana ke mehfil jawaan hain haseen hain

:crying2:

aboosait
13-06-09, 03:14 AM
..........Aankhon main teri hi soorat bassi hain
Teri hi tarha, tera gham bhi haseen hain...........
:crying2:

:crying2: :crying2: :crying2:

Lagta nanhin hai dil mera, ujde dayar mein,

Kiski bani hai alame napaydar mein.

(I am not happy in this ruined place. Who has lived forever in this mortal world?)

:crying2: :crying2: :crying2:

Umre daraaz mang kar laye the chaar din,

Do arzoo mein kat gaye, do intenzaar mein.

(For passing life, we brought four days, but two of them passed in desire and two in the waiting (for the fulfilment of the desire)).

:crying2: :crying2: :crying2:

Awaaz
16-06-09, 10:07 AM
zabt-e-gham is qadar aasaan nahi Faraz
aag hote hain woh aansoo jo piye jaate hain

truepath
16-06-09, 10:09 AM
"zameer"

is there any english term for this word? Like in urdu we say, "insaan ka zameer ganwaara nahi karta" etc

EDIT: darn! I guess this is a wrong thread. NVM *outta*

ImperfectBeauty
16-06-09, 01:25 PM
"zameer"

is there any english term for this word? Like in urdu we say, "insaan ka zameer ganwaara nahi karta" etc

EDIT: darn! I guess this is a wrong thread. NVM *outta*

:rofl1: Newaizz, it means conscience (just incase)

aboosait
16-06-09, 01:43 PM
:rofl1: Newaizz, it means conscience (just incase)U R right. zameer = conscience

ENIGM
16-06-09, 02:24 PM
hajoom-e-ghum meri fitrat badal nai sakhti
karoon mein kiya meri adaat hai muskurane ki

:coolbro:

ENIGM
16-06-09, 02:25 PM
Tu jo nahin hain to kuch bhi nahin hain
Ye maana ke mehfil jawaan hain haseen hain
Tu jo nahin hain to kuch bhi nahin hain

Samaj main na aaye, yeh kya maajara hain?
Tujhey paa ke dil main, yeh khaali sa kya hain?

Kyu har waqt dil main koi bekalli hain?
Kyu har waqt seenay main rehti kamee hain?

Mujhey phir tabaa kar, mujhey phir rulaa jaa
Sitam karney waley, kahin se tu aaja
Kahin se tu aaja...

Aankhon main teri hi soorat bassi hain
Teri hi tarha, tera gham bhi haseen hain

Tu jo nahin hain to kuch bhi nahin hain
Yeh maana ke mehfil jawaan hain haseen hain

:crying2:

:):coolbro::)

spams
18-06-09, 04:36 PM
http://www1.picturepush.com/photo/a/1864439/img/del4/pwqtlo.jpg

Kas1m
27-06-09, 07:50 PM
i digged a superb shair

ye jo kuch dekhta hai tu fareb e khawab e hasti hai
takhayyul kay garash main bulandi hai na pasti hai

Kas1m
28-06-09, 12:39 PM
paigham e haqeeqat main kaha say laaoon
adaab e risalat main kaha say laaoon
Muddat se hai armaan e hazoori dil main
jibreel si qismat main kaha say laaoon

ban gayi baat un ka karam ho gaya
shaakh e naghm e tamanna hari ho gayi
mere lab par Muhammed ka naam aa gaya
bethe bethe meri haziri ho gayi

jaan say pyara wo taiba nagar ban gaya
saare aalam ka noor e nazar ban gaya

mujh ko jannat ki parwa na uqba ka dar
mera dil to Muhammed ka ghar ban gaya

Kas1m
28-06-09, 01:54 PM
This is a very nice poem. Its called Muhammed (saw) ke sheher main...sorry for any mistakes you will find...one or two maybe...

jab mera jazb e junoon auj ka zeena ho ga
phelnay aur simatnay ka qareena ho ga
ya madinay main sama jaye gi saree dunya
ya zamaanay main madina hi madina ho ga

ya nabi aap kay jalwon main wo raanaa'ii hai
dekhnay par bhi meri aankh tamannaa'ii hai
Haq Taala bhi kareem aur Muhammad bhi kareem
do kareemo main gunahgaar ki ban aayi hai

Muhammed ke sheher main
Muhammed ke sheher main

kyun aa kay ro raha hai Muhammed ke sheher main
har dard ki dawa hai Muhammed ke sheher main

Dukh dard o alam gham kat'tay hain
Hasnain kay sadqay bat'tay hain

Muhammed ke sheher main
Muhammed ke sheher main

Kuch aisi bheer lag jati hai shah e deen kay rozay par
hawa ko rastaa mushkil say milta hai

Muhammed ke sheher main
Muhammed ke sheher main

Ghamon say jab bhi tabiyyat malool hoti hai
shaad kam banam e rasool hoti hai
ho jis dua main Muhammed ka wastaa shaamil
Huzoor r haq wo yaqeenan qabool hoti hai

Muhammed ke sheher main
Muhammed ke sheher main

Hawaain bhi adab kay saath chalti hain

Muhammed ke sheher main
Muhammed ke sheher main

Haath main tasbeeh baghal main musalla
lab pay jaari Allah Allah
Kehti hui pohnchi bait ul Allah
Aur pukari ae mere Allah
Tu gadaa ko jo nawazay to shehnshah banay
aur yateemon ko jo chahay to payimbar kar day
Ae mere Allah, to awaaz aaye: pagli
Mere parday main wehdat kay siwa kiya hai
ja jo tujhe lena hai lay

Muhammed ke sheher main
Muhammed ke sheher main

Mere baaray main kuch irshaad kiya jaye ga
dil e nashad ko phir shaad kiya jaye ga
main ye umeed lagaay huye betha hoon Huzoor
aik baar aap mujhe yaad kiya jaye ga

Muhammed ke sheher main
Muhammed ke sheher main

Aao gunahgaro chalo sar kay bal chalain
Tauba ka dar khula hain Muhammed ke sheher main


Qadmon main un kay khaak ko kundan bana diya
Mitti bhi keemiyan hai Muhammed ke sheher main

Sadqa luta raha hai Khuda un ke naam ka
Sona nikal raha hai Muhammed ke sheher main

Sab to jukhay hain Khaana e Kaaba kay saamnay
Kaab jukha hua hai Muhammed ke sheher main

Saya nahi hai Gunmbad e khizra ka aaj bhi


Main tujhe aalam e ashiyan main bhi paa leta hoon
log kehta hain kay hai aalam e baala tera
aik baar aur yasrab say falisteen main aa
raasta dekhti hai Masjid e Aqsa tera
Poore qadsay main kharra hoon ye karam hai tera
mujh ko jukhnay nahi deta sahara tera
log kehte hain kay saaya tere paikar ka na tha
main to kehta hoon kay jahaan bhar pay hai saay tera
yahan tak shauq e deedar e nabi tha Haq Taala ko
Unhain bhejaa yahan wahan rakh liya saaya

saaya nahi hai Gunmbad e khizra ka aak bhi
zinda ya maujzaa hai Muhammed ke sheher main

dhoonda khuda ko dhoondnay walon nay har jaga
Laiken khuda mila hai Muhammed ke sheher main

Shehr e nabi ki had ka tayyun muhaal hai
Aalam basa hua hai Muhammed ke sheher main

Aslam wo din bhi aaye kay sab log ya kahain
Bismil bhi ja raha hai Muhammed ke sheher main

Muhammed ke sheher main
Muhammed ke sheher main


Sallalahu Alaihyi Wassallam

Kas1m
28-06-09, 02:23 PM
Tera gham rahe salamat mere dil ko kiya kami hai
yehi meri bandagi hai yehi meri zindagi hai
tera dard mera darma tera gham meri khushi hai
mujhe dard dene wale teri banda parwari hai


anybody in the poetry mood? lol i am

Kas1m
28-06-09, 02:31 PM
jo teri fikar teri yaad main kharab nahi
wo zindagi to mohabbat main kaamyaab nahi

khawarjunjoi
07-07-09, 05:43 AM
Guys....!! Hey to All...
Any body tell me biggest Urdu Poetry (http://hamariweb.com/poetryindex.aspx) web site of the world. I think poetry is now days most common in our daily life... Poetry of All Kind of All Urdu Poetry (http://allurdupoetry.wordpress.com/), Love poetry and many other poetry are where available.
Thx for yours time.....
Have Fun.....!! :)

khawarjunjoi
07-07-09, 05:48 AM
Guys....!! Hey to All...
Any body tell me biggest Urdu Poetry (http://hamariweb.com/poetryindex.aspx) web site of the world. I think poetry is now days most common in our daily life... Poetry of All Kind of All Urdu Poetry (http://allurdupoetry.wordpress.com/), Love poetry and many other poetry are where available.
Thx for yours time.....
Have Fun.....!! :)

aboosait
07-07-09, 12:43 PM
Tera gham rahe salamat mere dil ko kiya kami hai
yehi meri bandagi hai yehi meri zindagi hai
tera dard mera darma tera gham meri khushi hai
mujhe dard dene wale teri banda parwari hai


anybody in the poetry mood? lol i am

mood to acha hai, par, lekin, shaaid, ashar original nahee(n) lagte. kisi film song ki copy lagte hai(n).:)

aboosait
07-07-09, 12:57 PM
...

Kas1m
07-07-09, 05:46 PM
mood to acha hai, par, lekin, shaaid, ashar original nahee(n) lagte. kisi film song ki copy lagte hai(n).:)

nah i dont like cheap lines from cheap films...thats real poetry

you dont know how to look deeper though

rahamath
07-07-09, 06:50 PM
Tera gham rahe salamat mere dil ko kiya kami hai
yehi meri bandagi hai yehi meri zindagi hai
tera dard mera darma tera gham meri khushi hai
mujhe dard dene wale teri banda parwari hai


anybody in the poetry mood? lol i am

:start:
:salams:
maa'shaa'Allahu laa quwwata illa billah.
Do you write poems by yourself brother kasim.
Hmmm, even if one beats me up, I cant write a poem. I am so far away from that. Everyone has different talent. Alhamdulillah!
BTW, I also dont understand these peoms easily. Subhanallah!
Also, why is that when a shayar just starts his shayari by one word, when people already say wah wah wah. Why do they do so as if they understood already. If they are doing it for encouragement, arent they lying. Subhanallah!
I am sooooooo faaaaaar from poems. I hope someone will be enjoying yours. If not anyone, I hope you would be enjoying by yourself.

Kas1m
08-07-09, 12:23 AM
:start:
:salams:
maa'shaa'Allahu laa quwwata illa billah.
Do you write poems by yourself brother kasim.
Hmmm, even if one beats me up, I cant write a poem. I am so far away from that. Everyone has different talent. Alhamdulillah!
BTW, I also dont understand these peoms easily. Subhanallah!
Also, why is that when a shayar just starts his shayari by one word, when people already say wah wah wah. Why do they do so as if they understood already. If they are doing it for encouragement, arent they lying. Subhanallah!
I am sooooooo faaaaaar from poems. I hope someone will be enjoying yours. If not anyone, I hope you would be enjoying by yourself.

I sometimes write poetry but have no knowledge...its a matter of putting and arranging and picking good words...im not a pro
in a shair every word is carefully arranged and picked and the beauty is within,..just on that beauty and the beautiful selection of word they say wah wah
Cuz there are diff level of brains...aboosait never got that shair but somebody else might get to the bottom of it...you know...diff for everybody

aboosait
08-07-09, 01:01 AM
...............tera gham meri khushi hai.........

Main samajhta t-ha ki shaair 'sacha aashiq' (dil phek aashiq) hota hai.

Lekin aap ke andar ki shairree me to aashiq (shaair) maashooq ka dushman lagtahai.

main samajhta hoon ke shaairee me 'love' friendhip se bhi ooncha darja rakhta hai.

Mash-hoor shaaair Shakespeare ne kaha hai 'frienship' ke baare me(n)


He that is thy friend indeed,
He will help thee in thy need;

If thou sorrow he will weep,
If thou wake he cannot sleep.

Zebunissa
10-09-09, 05:19 PM
*Bump* One of my favourite's.....


Insaan ki khwahish ki koi inteha nahi
Insaan ki khwahish ki koi inteha nahi

Do gaz zameen chahyay

Do gaz kaffan ke leye

Kas1m
15-10-09, 06:15 PM
Mashgala khoob hai furqat main behlnay kay liye
Surhain dunannay kay liye haath masalnay kay liye
Gham ki deewar khari rehti hai dil kay andar
Mere armaan taraptay hain nikalnay kay liye
Teer say seena mera ched kay yoon kehne lage
Raah kar di tere armaan nikalnay kay liye

aboosait
16-10-09, 03:08 AM
*Bump* One of my favourite's.....


Insaan ki khwahish ki koi inteha nahi
Insaan ki khwahish ki koi inteha nahi

Do gaz zameen chahyay

Do gaz kaffan ke leye

Bahut hee tang nazar shaair lagta hai.

aboosait
16-10-09, 03:11 AM
Mashgala khoob hai furqat main behlnay kay liye
Surhain dunannay kay liye haath masalnay kay liye
Gham ki deewar khari rehti hai dil kay andar
Mere armaan taraptay hain nikalnay kay liye
Teer say seena mera ched kay yoon kehne lage
Raah kar di tere armaan nikalnay kay liye

Cant decipher the words Surhain dunannay. Please help.

Hamza Momand
16-10-09, 06:51 PM
kuch words meray samjh may b nhi aai kas1m bhai

ek sms post krta hon

ghalib vs iqbal

zahid sharab peeny dy masjid me beth kr...
ya wo jaga bata jahan pr khuda nhe.....(ghalib)

masjid khuda ka ghar hy peeny ki jaga nahe...
kafer k dil me ja waha pr khuda nhe....(iqbal)

KeeKee
16-10-09, 06:59 PM
Back in the day, this couplet was printed on all four sides of the 'dastarkhaans' of Darul Uloom Deoband (don't know if it still does):

Gamgheen Na Ho Mehmaan Sei
Khaa Rahaa hain Rozee Apni terey dastarkhaan sain.

Be not sorrowful of the guest
he eats of his own sustenance but from your table-spread.

Kas1m
16-10-09, 07:04 PM
kuch words meray samjh may b nhi aai kas1m bhai

ek sms post krta hon

ghalib vs iqbal

zahid sharab peeny dy masjid me beth kr...
ya wo jaga bata jahan pr khuda nhe.....(ghalib)

masjid khuda ka ghar hy peeny ki jaga nahe...
kafer k dil me ja waha pr khuda nhe....(iqbal)

Aboosait. Surhain dunhain means gunganana
Hamza : kiya ye waqee iqbal aur ghalib ne likha hai ya logon ne apni taraf se banaya.
Keekee nice shair there

Hamza Momand
16-10-09, 07:13 PM
Aboosait. Surhain dunhain means gunganana
Hamza : kiya ye waqee iqbal aur ghalib ne likha hai ya logon ne apni taraf se banaya.
Keekee nice shair there

meray khayal say ghalib wala sher ghalib ka he hay or iqbal ka kuch nhi keh sakta.

meray khayal say ghalib k sher say ghalat matlab nhi banta

simple matlab hay. ALLAH har jagha pay hay koi aisi jagha batao jaha pay banda gunah kray or khuda os ko na daikh sakay.

Kas1m
16-10-09, 07:22 PM
meray khayal say ghalib wala sher ghalib ka he hay or iqbal ka kuch nhi keh sakta.

meray khayal say ghalib k sher say ghalat matlab nhi banta

simple matlab hay. ALLAH har jagha pay hay koi aisi jagha batao jaha pay banda gunah kray or khuda os ko na daikh sakay.

Theek farmaya...sharab se yaad aaya aik shair ke

Ye ghalt hai sharab ki taareef iss ka zehno pe raaj hota hai
Sirf hiddat sharab deti hai baaqi apna mazaaj hota hai

Hamza Momand
16-10-09, 07:25 PM
Theek farmaya...sharab se yaad aaya aik shair ke

Ye ghalt hai sharab ki taareef iss ka zehno pe raaj hota hai
Sirf hiddat sharab deti hai baaqi apna mazaaj hota hai

wonderful sher

pashto ka ek sher hay

da zeh che nan gaday gam da zma khpala masti da
keh sharabo k masti bottle ba gaday do

urdu : yeh jo may naach rha hon yeh meri apni masti hay
agar sharab may masti hoti to bottle naach rha hota

Kas1m
16-10-09, 07:29 PM
wonderful sher

pashto ka ek sher hay

da zeh che nan gaday gam da zma khpala masti da
keh sharabo k masti bottle ba gaday do

urdu : yeh jo may naach rha hon yeh meri apni masti hay
agar sharab may masti hoti to bottle naach rha hota

Wah wah
Bilkul theek hai...sharab se jitna bacho utna hi acha hai...mera aik dost hota tha...waise mujh se islam ki baatain karta tha par aik din sharab peeta pakar liya...wo din aur aj ka din...bilkul dosti chor di

Hamza Momand
16-10-09, 08:01 PM
Wah wah
Bilkul theek hai...sharab se jitna bacho utna hi acha hai...mera aik dost hota tha...waise mujh se islam ki baatain karta tha par aik din sharab peeta pakar liya...wo din aur aj ka din...bilkul dosti chor di

may jab school may tha to os dor may apnay ek school teacher ko sharab peetay daikha tha ek public park may. or wo hamay urdu parhata tha.
or os k baad may nay osay salam krna he chor diya tha.

ek or sher jo meray dost nay ek khaas moqay pr mujhay dedicate kiya tha lol

iradain jin ki pukhta ho nazar jin ki khuda pr ho
talatum khaiz maujo say ghabraya wo nhi krtay

Kas1m
17-10-09, 03:29 PM
Acha shair hai..

Shaair log sabhi sharab peetay the...ghalib ho ya iqbal...ye sab sharabi the...pata nahi kiya milta tha inn ko botal kay ander...

Hamza Momand
17-10-09, 08:07 PM
khair ghalib k baray may kuch nhi keh sakta magar iqbal ek sahi musalman or mujahid shair tha
os k falsafay or shairi ko banda parhay to islam say khud ba khud muhabat paida hojati hay or insan may amal ka jazba paida hota hay.

aboosait
19-10-09, 06:39 PM
Shaair log sabhi sharab peetay the...ghalib ho ya iqbal...ye sab sharabi the....

Proof please!

I had (and still have) a high regard for Iqbal which you are trying to disturb by calling hism that. What is your intention behind this? Kisee ke baare me suni sunaayee batonke bal bote par aisa serious charge lagane ki himmat kaise huwee aapko? Kya Allah ka khawf naheen hai?

Mere Ustad Prof. Bashiruddin farmaya karte the ki Iqbal apna mushaf akthar dhoop me sukhaya karte the. Raat me padhte waqt itne aansoo nikalte the inki aankhonse ki mushaf bheeg jata tha. Yeh tha Iqbal jiski aap is tarah tawheen karne ki koshish kar rahe ho. Aap ko kya mila is se?

Kas1m
19-10-09, 06:59 PM
Proof please!

I had (and still have) a high regard for Iqbal which you are trying to disturb by calling hism that. What is your intention behind this? Kisee ke baare me suni sunaayee batonke bal bote par aisa serious charge lagane ki himmat kaise huwee aapko? Kya Allah ka khawf naheen hai?

Mere Ustad Prof. Bashiruddin farmaya karte the ki Iqbal apna mushaf akthar dhoop me sukhaya karte the. Raat me padhte waqt itne aansoo nikalte the inki aankhonse ki mushaf bheeg jata tha. Yeh tha Iqbal jiski aap is tarah tawheen karne ki koshish kar rahe ho. Aap ko kya mila is se?


ye main ne suni sunayii baat aage ki hai...proof nahi hai mere paas...iqbal ko main khud bhi aisa nahi manta...iqbal to aik aarif Allah wale the mere khayal se...Main apne alfaaz waapis leta hoon maazarat se.

Hamza Momand
19-10-09, 07:40 PM
Proof please!

I had (and still have) a high regard for Iqbal which you are trying to disturb by calling hism that. What is your intention behind this? Kisee ke baare me suni sunaayee batonke bal bote par aisa serious charge lagane ki himmat kaise huwee aapko? Kya Allah ka khawf naheen hai?

Mere Ustad Prof. Bashiruddin farmaya karte the ki Iqbal apna mushaf akthar dhoop me sukhaya karte the. Raat me padhte waqt itne aansoo nikalte the inki aankhonse ki mushaf bheeg jata tha. Yeh tha Iqbal jiski aap is tarah tawheen karne ki koshish kar rahe ho. Aap ko kya mila is se?


uncle
es may kasim bhai ka qasoor nhi kyo k aisi baatain log phailatay hain.
magar kasim bhai aap ko chaheye k kisi baat ko qabool krnay say pehlay tehqeeq krain.
mujhay wo aayat to abhi sahi yaad nhi ghaliban surah hujarat may hay k jab koi b tumharay pass koi khabar lae to pehlay os ki tehqeeq krain.

ek shakhs jo k ek mazhabi groh say os ka taluq tha meray sath iqbal pr bahas kr rha tha or jab koi baat na bani to es baat pr aagaya k iqbal ki darhi nhi thi or phir mujhay osay khoob sunani parhi or khoob bay izat kiya.

agar muslims oro ki andhi taqleed chor kr thori c apnay zehan pr zor dalain to shayad bahut say masail hal hojae.

aboosait
19-10-09, 07:40 PM
ye main ne suni sunayii baat aage ki hai...proof nahi hai mere paas...iqbal ko main khud bhi aisa nahi manta...iqbal to aik aarif Allah wale the mere khayal se...Main apne alfaaz waapis leta hoon maazarat se.

:jkk:

Hamza Momand
20-10-09, 03:55 PM
qoowat e ishq say har passt ko bala krday
dehr may isam e MUHAMMAD say ujala krday

iqbal


ek website iqbal k baray may
http://www.yespakistan.com/iqbal/works.asp

Kas1m
20-10-09, 04:12 PM
Zabardast...iqbal ke shairo se un kay aqeede kay baare mein pata chalta hai

Hamza Momand
20-10-09, 04:38 PM
sitaaro.n se aage jahaa.N aur bhii hai.n
abhii ishq ke imtihaa.N aur bhii hai.n


taahii zindagii se nahii.n ye fazaaye.n
yahaa.N saika.Do.n kaaravaa.N aur bhii hai.n


kanaa'at na kar aalam-e-rang-o-bu par
chaman aur bhii, aashiyaa.N aur bhii hai.n


agar kho gayaa ek nasheman to kyaa Gam
maqaamaat-e-aah-o-fugaa.N aur bhii hai.n


tuu shahii.n hai parwaaz hai kaam teraa
tere saamane aasmaa.N aur bhii hai.n


isii roz-o-shab me.n ulajh kar na rah jaa
ke tere zamiin-o-makaa.N aur bhii hai.n


gae din kii tanhaa thaa mai.n a.njuman me.n
yahaa.N ab mere raazadaa.N aur bhii hai.n

aboosait
20-10-09, 05:42 PM
sitaaro.n se aage jahaa.N aur bhii hai.n
abhii ishq ke imtihaa.N aur bhii hai.n


taahii zindagii se nahii.n ye fazaaye.n
yahaa.N saika.Do.n kaaravaa.N aur bhii hai.n


kanaa'at na kar aalam-e-rang-o-bu par
chaman aur bhii, aashiyaa.N aur bhii hai.n


agar kho gayaa ek nasheman to kyaa Gam
maqaamaat-e-aah-o-fugaa.N aur bhii hai.n


tuu shahii.n hai parwaaz hai kaam teraa
tere saamane aasmaa.N aur bhii hai.n


isii roz-o-shab me.n ulajh kar na rah jaa
ke tere zamiin-o-makaa.N aur bhii hai.n


gae din kii tanhaa thaa mai.n a.njuman me.n
yahaa.N ab mere raazadaa.N aur bhii hai.n




1)
sitaaro;N se aage jahaa;N aur bhii hai;N
abhii ((ishq ke imtihaa;N aur bhii hai;N

1) beyond the stars are even more worlds
2) there are still even more tests of passion

= Thus a world seems to be chiefly notable as a place for tests of passion.


2)
tihii zindagii ke nahii;N yih fa.zaa))e;N
yahaa;N sai;Nka;Ro;N kaaravaa;N aur bhii hai;N

1) these expanses are not devoid of life
2) here there are hundreds of other caravans too

= tihii means 'devoid, empty, vacant' (Platts p.349)
= Where are 'these expanses'? On earth? In space? Where the speaker is? The poet cleverly doesn't tell us.
= The word sai;Nka;Ro;N is sometimes written without the first nasal. It looks as though the word in the Urdu text was first written with the nasal (since a chair for it is clearly visible), but then the dot was either omitted or removed. It's worth paying attention to such details because Iqbal himself approved this version of his poetry before publication. So perhaps in his spelling it shouldn't have the nasal.


3)
qanaa((at nah kar ((aalam-e rang-o-buu par
chaman aur bhii , aashiyaa;N aur bhii hai;N !

1) don't be contented with the world of color and scent
2) there are other gardens, other nests, too

= The 'world of color and scent' is a standard expression for the physical world of the senses



4)
agar kho gayaa ik nasheman to kyaa ;Gam
muqaamaat-e aah-o-fu;Gaa;N aur bhii hai;N !

1) if one nest was lost, what's the [cause of] grief?
2) there are other places for sighing and lamenting

= Like the 'world' which is a place for 'tests of passion' in verse (1), a nest is here chiefly notable as a place not for shelter, but for sighing and lamenting


5)
tuu shaahii;N hai , parvaaz hai kaam teraa
tire saamne aasmaa;N aur bhii hai;N

1) you are a falcon, flight is your task
2) before you there are other skies as well



6)
isii roz-o-shab me;N ulajh kar nah rah jaa
kih tere zamaan-o-makaa;N aur bhii hai;N

1) don't become entangled, and remain [so?], in this day-and-night
2) for you have other times-and-places too
= Presumably 'this day-and-night' refers to our present, physical world. The grammar can permit two readings: 'don't become, and remain, entangled in this day-and-night' or 'don't become entangled, and remain in this day-and-night'. It's clever that we're left 'entangled' in a twofold reading about an entanglement in a twofold (day-and-night) world. (Two strands make for a much better entanglement, anyway.)
= Both roz-o-shab and zamaan-o-manaa;N are common phrases, with a nice idiomatic flavor


7)
ga))e din kih tanhaa thaa mai;N anjuman me;N
yahaa;N ab mire raaz-daa;N aur bhii hai;N !

1) the days are gone when I was alone in the gathering
2) here, now, I have other secret-sharers too
= A 'secret-sharer' is a confidant or intimate friend

Hamza Momand
20-10-09, 07:23 PM
:jkk:

kya aap iqbal ka ghazal post kr saktay hain mujhay pehla misra yaad hay

kabhi a haqiqate muntazir nazar aa libas e majaz main.......

aboosait
21-10-09, 12:00 PM
:jkk:

kya aap iqbal ka ghazal post kr saktay hain mujhay pehla misra yaad hay

kabhi a haqiqate muntazir nazar aa libas e majaz main.......

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r6XfWzbHt1A

aboosait
22-10-09, 02:58 PM
~~~~~~~~~

Kas1m
23-10-09, 06:36 PM
Mashgala khoob hai furqat main behlnay kay liye
Surhain dunannay kay liye haath masalnay kay liye
Gham ki deewar khari rehti hai dil kay andar
Mere armaan taraptay hain nikalnay kay liye
Teer say seena mera ched kay yoon kehne lage
Raah kar di tere armaan nikalnay kay liye

A very good hobby to ease off in the free time
To mumble a song and rub hands
A wall of sorrow is standing in the heart
My desires wanting to come out desperately
piercing my chest with an arrow they said to me
Made a way to let your desires out

Rough translation but its best to read the original text...cant beat that

aboosait
25-10-09, 03:21 PM
A very good hobby to ease off in the free time
To mumble a song and rub hands
A wall of sorrow is standing in the heart
My desires wanting to come out desperately
piercing my chest with an arrow they said to me
Made a way to let your desires out

Rough translation but its best to read the original text...cant beat that

yeh kiskee nazam hai?

Kas1m
25-10-09, 05:24 PM
yeh kiskee nazam hai?

I dont know...i had an audio of that in the old cassetes...so i just write the poetry down lol

Hamza Momand
02-11-09, 12:12 PM
http://www.urdumaza.com/images/poetry/poetry/756.gif

Kas1m
02-11-09, 01:28 PM
^wah zabardaat,,
Iqbal zindabad...kya kehne
Acha hai dil ke saath rahe paasbaan e aqal
Laiken kabhi kabhi issay tanha bhi chor de
Says so much about iqbals aqeedah and belief

aboosait
02-11-09, 01:48 PM
.............Says so much about iqbals aqeedah and belief...........

We will not be answerable for Iqbal's aqidah and belief. Let us keep checking our aqidah and the aqidah of those around us (living) and make corrections where necessary.

Kas1m
02-11-09, 02:30 PM
We will not be answerable for Iqbal's aqidah and belief. Let us keep checking our aqidah and the aqidah of those around us (living) and make corrections where necessary.

Inshallah

Hamza Momand
02-11-09, 05:26 PM
i love this poet "inayat ali khan"
amazing poet

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tuT1VQrWJKs

aboosait
05-11-09, 09:36 AM
Inshallah

Ameen.

Kas1m
15-11-09, 12:31 PM
Ae Allah meri fariyaad mein itna to asar ho jaye
dil jo tarrpe to Muhammed :saw: ko khabar ho jaye
aur main ye samjhoo ga mujhe dolat konain mili
zindagi gar dar e ahmed pe basar ho jaye

Bazm konain sajaane kay liye aap aaye
shama tawheed jalaanay kay liye aap aaye
aik paighaam jo har dil mein ujala kar day
saari dunya ko sunaanay kay liye aap aape
aik muddat say bataktay hue insaano ko
aik markaz pay bulanaay kay liye aap aaye

Hoslaa haare na insaan pareshaani mein
har bana kaam bigarr jata hai naadaani mein
Sabar har haal mein haasil hai pareshaani mein
doob sakti nahi toofaan ki tughiyaani mein
jis ki kashti ho Muhammed :saw: ki nagahbaani mein


Dubo de mauj toofaa aisa hargiz ho nahi sakta
Main betha kis safeenay mein Muhammed :saw: ka safeena hai

Muhammed :saw: jab say hai mere dil mein
Hamara dil Madina hai

Kas1m
15-11-09, 12:57 PM
This is quite a difficult one...one or two words im not sure yet
Jazbon mein josh dil mein tamanna dhanak mein rang
Barg e gulaab, noor e chiragh, sharaar o shang
Mojain, hawa, parind, bhanwar, machlian, nahang
Alfaaz, soz, guftagoo, mizmaar, jaltarang
Bina nazar se tha wo hawaida kiya hua
Sab kuch inhii kay waaste paida kiya gaya

imported_MMS
15-11-09, 10:26 PM
tere bina besuadi besuadi ratiyan oh sajna
rukhi re oh rukhi re kato re kaate kate na
:fairy:

Kas1m
15-11-09, 11:54 PM
How about translating the one i posted in this thread on page 5: http://www.ummah.com/forum/showthread.php?t=235389

Post it here and ill have a look...i cant figure out which one in that thread

Hamza Momand
16-11-09, 09:37 AM
tere bina besuadi besuadi ratiyan oh sajna
rukhi re oh rukhi re kato re kaate kate na
:fairy:

is that urdu?

aboosait
16-11-09, 11:04 AM
is that urdu?

Urdu is no doubbt a mixture of several languages, but not Punjabi I suppose.

Kas1m
16-11-09, 03:20 PM
is that urdu?

It looks likes its hindi gujraati mix

Hamza Momand
16-11-09, 05:06 PM
oneummahone bhai
aap nay jo sher kaha urdu langugae thread may

to aap nay jo likha wo sahi hay ya yeh

masjid to bana di shab bhar may eeman ki hararat walo nay
mann apna purana papi hay barso may namazi bun na saka

Hamza Momand
16-11-09, 05:07 PM
It looks likes its hindi gujraati mix
ajeeb sa sher tha. kuch samajh may nhi aaya.

Kas1m
16-11-09, 05:10 PM
ajeeb sa sher tha. kuch samajh may nhi aaya.

Mms apne hi shair banati rehti hai..uss ka kiya hai

oneummahone
16-11-09, 05:13 PM
Tamam Jihadi (Qattal karnay walay) bhaion/behno ki nazar pyar se, mohabbat se, khulooos se, insha ALLAH.

Zahiri Jeet par hai khush, Tu ne ghaib ki maar kahan dekhi hai


Tail k sirf kunwain dekhen hain, Tail ki dhaar kahan dekhi hai...

Hamza Momand
16-11-09, 05:16 PM
Tamam Jihadi (Qattal karnay walay) bhaion/behno ki nazar pyar se, mohabbat se, khulooos se, insha ALLAH.

Zahiri Jeet par hai khush, Tu ne ghaib ki maar kahan dekhi hai


Tail k sirf kunwain dekhen hain, Tail ki dhaar kahan dekhi hai...


wah mukarar mukarar

Kas1m
16-11-09, 05:29 PM
hamza aik farsi shair post karo

oneummahone
16-11-09, 05:58 PM
Apnay Musalmaan bhaion se shikwa; jo Nafrat phela rahay hein;

Ab darindoun se na haiwano se dar lagta hai,
kia zamana hai k insano se dar lagta hai

Izzat e nafs kisi shaks ki mehfooz nahi,
Ab tu apne hi nighebano se dar lagta hai

Khoon raizi ka yeh alam hai khuda khair karay,
Ab musalmano ko musalmo se dar lagta hai

Kas1m
16-11-09, 06:07 PM
Shehar Ke Dukandaro Karobaar-E-Ulfat Mein Sood Kia Zian Kia Hai, Tum Na Jaan Pao Gay
Dil Ke Daam Kitne Hein Khuwab Kitne Mehnge Hein Aur Naqd-E-Jaan Kia Hai Tum Na Jaan Pao Gay
Sheher Ke Dukandaron, Sheher Ke Dukandaron

Koi Kaisay Milta Hai Phool Kaisay Khilta Hai Aankh Kaisay Jhukti Hai Saans Kaisay Rukti Hai
Kaisay Reh Nikalti Hai Kaisay Baatein Chalti Hai Shouq Ki Zabaan Kya Hai, Tum Na Jaan Pao Gay
Sheher Ke Dukandaron, Sheher Ke Dukandaron

Wasl Ka Sukoon Kya Hai, Hijr Ka Junoon Kya Hai, Husn Ka Fusoon Kya Hai, Ishq Ke Daroon Kya Hai
Tum Mareez-E-Danai Maslihat Ke Shaydai Raah-E-Gumrahan Kya Hai, Tum Na Jaan Pao Gay
Sheher Ke Dukandaron, Sheher Ke Dukandaron

Zakhm Kaisay Phaltay Hein Daagh Kaisay Jaltay Hein Dard Kaisay Hota Hai Koi Kaisay Rota Hai
Ashq Kia Hai Nalay Kia Dasht Kia Hai Chalay Kia Aah Kia Fughaan Kya Hai, Tum Na Jaan Pao Gay
Sheher Ke Dukandaron, Sheher Ke Dukandaron

Namuraad Dil Kaisay Subah Shaam Kartay Hein Kaisay Zinda Rehtay Hein Aur Kaisay Martay Hein
Tum Ko Kab Nazar Aayi Ghamzadoon Ki Tanhai Zeest Be-Umaan Kia Hai, Tum Na Jaan Pao Gay
Sheher Ke Dukandaron, Sheher Ke Dukandaron

Janta Hoon Mein Tum Ko Zouq-E-Shaiyri Bhi Hai Shaksiyat Sayjanay Mein Ik Yeh Mahiri Bhi Hai
Phir Bhi Harf Chuntay Ho Sirf Lafz Suntay Ho In Ke Darmiyaan Kya Hai, Tum Na Jaan Pao Gay
Sheher Ke Dukandaron, Sheher Ke Dukandaron

oneummahone
16-11-09, 06:10 PM
...
Sheher Ke Dukandaron, Sheher Ke Dukandaron



Oye howey howey hoi.

Oye Sunni Puttar tum ne Shehar mein Dukaan kyun kholi? :P

Kas1m
16-11-09, 06:18 PM
Oye howey howey hoi.

Oye Sunni Puttar tum ne Shehar mein Dukaan kyun kholi? :P

lol bas waise hi achi nazm lagi mujhe

Kas1m
16-11-09, 06:20 PM
oneummahone bhai
aap nay jo sher kaha urdu langugae thread may

to aap nay jo likha wo sahi hay ya yeh

masjid to bana di shab bhar may eeman ki hararat walo nay
mann apna purana papi hay barso may namazi bun na saka




Pal bhar mein masjid bana di Emaan ki hararat waloo ne,
mann apna barsoo ka pappii, namazi na ban ssakaa


here you can compare now

oneummahone
16-11-09, 07:12 PM
here you can compare now
:embar: paa g, mein aksar shairoo ki tang torr deta hoon :D

oneummahone
16-11-09, 07:44 PM
Samajh, Samajh kar Samajh ko SamjhO,
Kyunke Samajh, Samajh kar Samajhna bhi aik Samajh hay,
Jo na samjhe meri samajh ko, meri samajh mein wo Na-samajh hay.

:scratch: kuchi mein aya bhai/behan logo ;)

Kas1m
16-11-09, 07:47 PM
Samajh, Samajh kar Samajh ko SamjhO,
Kyunke Samajh, Samajh kar Samajhna bhi aik Samajh hay,
Jo na samjhe meri samajh ko, meri samajh mein wo Na-samajh hay.

:scratch: kuchi mein aya bhai/behan logo ;)

Aziz mian sings that in hai kambakht tu ne pii hi nahi

imported_MMS
16-11-09, 07:53 PM
hamza aik farsi shair post karo

chuman pur jhar me isiyanam tui ghaffar ya Allah
chuman ba aib isiyanam tui sattar ya Allah

:o

Hamza Momand
16-11-09, 08:42 PM
hamza aik farsi shair post karo

sorry bhai kuch late parha aap ka post

farsi k sher yaad nhi
school may kuch yaad keye thay. bus ab sirf ek he yaad hay.

paye ilm choo shama bayad gudakht
k bay ilm na tawa khuda ra shanakht

farsi sher bahut mushkil hotay hain.

sister mms aap farsi aati hay?
yeh sher meri samajh may nhi aaya.

oneummahone
17-11-09, 03:36 AM
Raat Youn Dil Main Teri Khoi Hui Yaad Aayi
Jaise Veerane Main Chupke Se Bahar A Jaye
Jaise Sehraon Main Hole Se Chale Baad-e-Naseem
Jaise Beemar Ko Be Wajah Qarar A Jaye

oneummahone
17-11-09, 03:24 PM
pakistan mein artificial sugar crisis chal raha hay, is hi mouzoo per aik shair arz kia hay kisi ne;

Mera Us Shehar-e-adawat se Talluq hay Faraz,
Jahan charas (weed kind of) tu milti hay magar cheeni nahi

Hamza Momand
17-11-09, 09:45 PM
pakistan mein artificial sugar crisis chal raha hay, is hi mouzoo per aik shair arz kia hay kisi ne;

Mera Us Shehar-e-adawat se Talluq hay Faraz,
Jahan charas (weed kind of) tu milti hay magar cheeni nahi

faraz sahab to death k baad kafi chamkay hain.
death k baad he nae nae kalam aae hain lol

ajeeb qism k sms miltay hain.

Hamza Momand
17-11-09, 09:53 PM
Allama Iqbal ka "baal e jibreel" say ek nazam

yeh onho nay london may qayam k doran likha tha


tu abhi reh guzar hay qaid e muqam say guzar!
misar o hijaz say guzar, paris or shaam say guzar!
jis ka amal hay bay gharz os ki jaza kuch or hay
hoor o khayam say guzar, baada o jaam say guzar!
garcha hay dilkasha bahut husan e farang ki bahar
tair k buland baal, dana o daam say guzar!
koh shagaf teri zarb tujh say kushade sharq o gharb
teegh halal ki tarha aish e nayam say guzar!
tera imam bay hazoor, teri namaz bay suroor
aisi namaz say guzar, aisay imam say guzar!



(kitab say likhna bahut mushkil kaam hay)

oneummahone
17-11-09, 10:44 PM
faraz sahab to death k baad kafi chamkay hain.
Sahih farmaya aap ne buzurgooo :)


...(kitab say likhna bahut mushkil kaam hay)
Yaara ... God-Mother-One-Hair (Allah-Ma-Aik-Baal:Allama Iqbal) ki baat kuch aur hi hay, in k har shair mein khulooos hay ... Allah S.w.T. in ko jaza-e-khair Ata farmai.

Aik shair arz karnay ki badmashi (darkhwast buzdil log kartay hein;)) karoonga ...

Un ka jo kaam hay, woh ehl-e-siasat janay,
Apna tu pegham-e-Muhabbat hay, jahan tak pohanchay

imported_MMS
19-11-09, 11:11 PM
tum mujhe yun bhula na pao ge
jab kabhi bhi suno ge geet mere
sang sang tum bhi gungunao ge

Jihaan
19-11-09, 11:13 PM
tum mujhe yun bhula na pao ge
jab kabhi bhi suno ge geet mere
sang sang tum bhi gungunao ge

uh oh is it dard-e-disco time? :there:

imported_MMS
19-11-09, 11:16 PM
uh oh is it dard-e-disco time? :there:

agar hum na honge to eh dil ruba
kisse dekh kar hai sharmao gi
na dekho gi tum phir kabhi aayna (congrats to the aayna)
humare bina roz ghabrao gi :hidban:

Masumah
19-11-09, 11:35 PM
ae baadeh sabah
zarah jhoom ke chal
tummeh aetkilya sooji hai
hum bezaar beteh hai

imported_MMS
22-11-09, 12:38 AM
mein jo chahun baras jaein baadal
khoon mein dooba nazar aaey maqtal
jang karne mey aaya nahi hu
jang karne mey aaya nahi hu
kya nabi :saw: ka nawasa nahi hu
mujh pe kyun band karteho pani
kya Muhammad :saw: ka pyara nahi hu

:( :outta:

Kas1m
22-11-09, 12:45 AM
Raat Youn Dil Main Teri Khoi Hui Yaad Aayi
Jaise Veerane Main Chupke Se Bahar A Jaye
Jaise Sehraon Main Hole Se Chale Baad-e-Naseem
Jaise Beemar Ko Be Wajah Qarar A Jaye

That is some shair..the best

aboosait
22-11-09, 04:33 PM
That is some shair..the best

And how do you like this:

Apne Aagaaz Se Aaaj Tak Zindagi ..!!
Teri Hi Yaad MaiN Gum Rahi ....!!

Phir Bhi Jaane KyOn Yeh Ihsaas Hai ..!!
Jaise Chaahat Meri Kam Rahi ....!!


Kal Mila Waqt To ZulfeiN Teri Suljha Doonga ..!!
Aaaj Uljha hOOn Zara Waqt Ke Sulajhne MaiN ..!!

yOOn To Sulajh Jatee hain Uljhee ZulfeiN ..!!
Umar Kat Jati Hai Waqt Ke Sulajhne MaiN ....!!
Dil Ko Manana Agar Hota AaasaaaN ....!!
Na Karta Kisi Ko yOOn Ye PareshaaN ..!!

Tanha Na Rahta Bhari Mehfil MaiN ..!!
Na Hoti Woh Halat Jo Ho Na BayaaN ....!!

Kas1m
22-11-09, 04:36 PM
And how do you like this:

Apne Aagaaz Se Aaaj Tak Zindagi ..!!
Teri Hi Yaad MaiN Gum Rahi ....!!

Phir Bhi Jaane KyOn Yeh Ihsaas Hai ..!!
Jaise Chaahat Meri Kam Rahi ....!!


Kal Mila Waqt To ZufeiN Teri Suljha Doonga ..!!
Aaaj Uljha hOOn Zara Waqt Ke Sulajhne MaiN ..!!

yOOn To Sulajh Jatee hain Uljhee ZulfeiN ..!!
Umar Kat Jati Hai Waqt Ke Sulajhne MaiN ....!!
Dil Ko Manana Agar Hota AaasaaaN ....!!
Na Karta Kisi Ko yOOn Ye PareshaaN ..!!

Tanha Na Rahta Bhari Mehfil MaiN ..!!
Na Hoti Woh Halat Jo Ho Na BayaaN ....!!

Aboosait thats not ur type of ashaar lol with zulf i remembered

Kaali kaali zulfon kay phanday na dalo
Hamain zinda rehne do ae husn waalo

aboosait
22-11-09, 04:44 PM
Aboosait thats not ur type of ashaar lol with zulf i remembered

Kaali kaali zulfon kay phanday na dalo
Hamain zinda rehne do ae husn waalo

Waah! record tod diya hafizjee aap ne shaaironka.

And in the sher I posted though zulf is mentioned the emphasis is on suljhaana.

Kas1m
22-11-09, 04:54 PM
Waah! record tod diya hafizjee aap ne shaaironka.

And in the sher I posted though zulf is mentioned the emphasis is on suljhaana.

Yes...good poetry though

aboosait
22-11-09, 04:55 PM
Yes...good poetry though

Not my own but careful Copy-Paste. :inlove:

~TwinklingStar~
22-11-09, 05:02 PM
Yeh shaayris hai ? :shock:

Aye dost ! Tu aise hi likhaakar shaayri
Ek din tera bhi naam ho jaayega
Log phenkenge ande tamaatar
Toh raat ki sabzi ka intezaam ho jaayega :up:

Kas1m
22-11-09, 05:08 PM
Nice lol funny

aboosait
22-11-09, 05:10 PM
Yeh shaayris hai ?

:up: Kon kehta hai ki naheen?

imported_MMS
25-11-09, 08:32 PM
aai re, aai re, le mein aai hu tere liye
tora re, tora re har bandhan ko pyar ke liye
jaan re, jaan re aaj tujh mein sama jaon mein
dil re, dil re, teri sanson mein bas jaon mein

sau baar bulai mein sau baar aaon, aik bar jo dil diya
aik ankh roi to do ji bholo soeinge kese bhala
in pyar ki rahon mein pathar hai kitne
un sab ko bhi par kiya
aik nadi hu mein chahat bari aaj milney
sagar ko aai yahan
sajna, sajna, aaj aasun bhi meethe lagey

:fairy:

Zebunissa
28-11-09, 10:13 PM
Darkhwaast karti hoon, sab apney apney dukkhiya sher eedar lay ke aou :(

imported_MMS
28-11-09, 10:14 PM
kya hua?

aboosait
29-11-09, 09:45 AM
Darkhwaast karti hoon, sab apney apney dukkhiya sher eedar lay ke aou :(

Dukhiya kya hota hai?

Kya aap ka matlab dukh bhare ash'aar hai?

Zebunissa
29-11-09, 02:45 PM
Dukhiya kya hota hai?

Kya aap ka matlab dukh bhare ash'aar hai?

Jee, mera yehi matlab tha
Maaf karna lekin kabhi main galti se Punjabi ke alfaaz keh dehti hoon :smack:

Medievalist
29-11-09, 02:49 PM
mein shaair to naheeeen,
mein shaair to naheen,
magarrrr, ei haseen!
jabse dekha mene tumko, mujhko shaaairrryyy aagay **outta**

aboosait
29-11-09, 03:43 PM
Jee, mera yehi matlab tha
Maaf karna lekin kabhi main galti se Punjabi ke alfaaz keh dehti hoon :smack:
To t-heek hai humeen Punjabi seekhne ka moqa mil raha hai. Shukriya. :)

aboosait
29-11-09, 03:46 PM
.........magarrrr, ei haseen!..........

Haseen to mard hota hai. Feminine gender (muannas) Haseena hoti hai.

Aap mard hokar aap ki nazar Haseen par padi to aapko shaa'eree aa gayee? Kya matlab?

Medievalist
29-11-09, 08:27 PM
matlab hamari nazar Hadrat Khwaja Jaani Aboo Sait par padgay awr wahan hum batak gay **winks**

tujhe bhool jaana jaana,
mumkin naheeeeen!
tu yaad na aay aysa koi din naheen.

Khwaja moray khwaja!

imported_MMS
29-11-09, 09:30 PM
tu mera milna samaj lena ek sapna tha
tujh ko ab mil hi gaya jo tera apna tha
hum ko dunya mein samajna na sanam
aaj ke baad....

Debater
29-11-09, 11:24 PM
Haseen to mard hota hai. Feminine gender (muannas) Haseena hoti hai.

Aap mard hokar aap ki nazar Haseen par padi to aapko shaa'eree aa gayee? Kya matlab?
Asl mein medievalist pathan hai, larki ko larka or larkay ko larki :inlove:

Kas1m
29-11-09, 11:29 PM
Asl mein medievalist pathan hai, larki ko larka or larkay ko larki :inlove:

lol med aur pathan??? Ho hi nahi sakta

Debater
29-11-09, 11:36 PM
Haseen to mard hota hai. Feminine gender (muannas) Haseena hoti hai.
Mard haseen nahi, husain hota hai, jameel bhi ho sakta hai. Aur jo haseena hoti hai wo asl mein haseen larki ka laqab-e-khusoosi hai, matlab larki hi haseena hoti hai aur wohi haseen. Mard bay chara aboosait ya debater hota hai. Baqi rahay kasim aur medievalist, ye bachay hain, munnay :D

Kas1m
30-11-09, 05:19 PM
Mard haseen nahi, husain hota hai, jameel bhi ho sakta hai. Aur jo haseena hoti hai wo asl mein haseen larki ka laqab-e-khusoosi hai, matlab larki hi haseena hoti hai aur wohi haseen. Mard bay chara aboosait ya debater hota hai. Baqi rahay kasim aur medievalist, ye bachay hain, munnay :D

Aur aap hamare baap dada ho lol

aboosait
30-11-09, 05:34 PM
........Baqi rahay kasim aur medievalist, ye bachay hain, munnay :D

Kasim to hamaare pyare pyare Haafizji hain. Lekin Medievalism (implying conservatism and outdated attitudes) apnaane waale ke muta'alliq hum zyada kuch naheen jaante.

imported_MMS
30-11-09, 09:27 PM
surmai akhiyon mein
nanna munna ek sapna deja re
nindhiya ke udhte paakhi re
akhiyon mein aja saathi re

raat ke rath per jaane waley
neendh ka rass barsane waley
bas itna kar de
ke meri aankhein bhar de
aankhon mein basta rahe
sapna yeh hasta rahe

aboosait
01-12-09, 11:21 AM
Kusra :|

Kusra kya cheez hai?

Kas1m
01-12-09, 01:21 PM
Khusra means teesri nasal

Al-hayaa
01-12-09, 01:40 PM
paneer

Kas1m
01-12-09, 01:45 PM
third nasal passage? :scratch:

nasal = generation

aboosait
01-12-09, 01:48 PM
nasal = generation

You mean that bollywood song? I think it is of the early 1970's.

Al-hayaa
01-12-09, 01:51 PM
:lahawla:

aboosait
01-12-09, 01:51 PM
third nasal passage? :scratch:

aap bhee :smack:

Urdu aur angrezee ko istareh mat milaayiye.

Kas1m
01-12-09, 01:57 PM
You mean that bollywood song? I think it is of the early 1970's.

which one?

aboosait
01-12-09, 04:19 PM
which one?

http://www.ummah.com/forum/showpost.php?p=3556802&postcount=1186

Kas1m
01-12-09, 05:50 PM
http://www.ummah.com/forum/showpost.php?p=3556802&postcount=1186

Oh right..heres another one..its a song but originally its a poets poem

Main pal do pal ka shaair hoon
Pal do pal meri kahani hai
Pal do pal meri jawani hai

I forgot the rest

Al-hayaa
01-12-09, 08:34 PM
سبق پھر پڑھ صداقت کا ، عدالت کا ، شجاعت کا
ليا جائے گا تجھ سے کام دنيا کي امامت کا

Read and learn again, those lessons of Truthfulness, Justice and Courage
And you will be taken as the Leaders of the World.

:ahb:

ps: from iqbal's collection

Masumah
01-12-09, 09:22 PM
Kissi ke dard ko un ke aansu se math samjo
ansu tho hai bas dho boond paani
Dard ko un ki aankhon se samjo
Kyon ke aankhon mein dekhta hai jisme roohaani

Masumah :coolsis:

Masumah
01-12-09, 09:28 PM
i was hoping for a wah wah wah *sigh*

Kas1m
01-12-09, 10:10 PM
Kissi ke dard ko un ke aansu se math samjo
ansu tho hai bas dho boond paani
Dard ko un ki aankhon se samjo
Kyon ke aankhon mein dekhta hai jisme roohaani

Masumah :coolsis:

That is good

~TwinklingStar~
02-12-09, 09:22 AM
A nazm on Urdu by Lata Haya - an Indian poetess

Subah ka pahla payaam urdu
dhalti huyi si jaise shaam urdu
utare jahan taare wahi baam urdu
badi kamsin gulfaam urdu
jaise naye saal ka koi din ho naya
aur beetey saal ki ho akhri dua

naya saal nayi ram-ram urdu
tujhe nayi sadi ka salaam urdu

mujhe to yeh ammi ke dulaar si lagey
aur mere abbu ji ke pyar si lagey
badey bhai ki yeh fatkaar si lagey
choti bahna ke yeh pukaar si lagey
mere liye doston ki dosti se yeh
dushmanon ki pyari-pyari dushmani se yeh

jaise rishton ka eik jaam urdu
tujhe nayi sadi ka salaam urdu

kabhi mehbooba yeh adab ki lagey
baat kare apni jo sab ki lagey
kaum ki lage na mazhab ki lagey
mujhe yeh zubaan jaise rab ki lagey
jo yeh kahte hain yeh zubaan ghair hai
unke dilon mein to faqat bair hai

jahil dein tujhe ilzaam urdu
tujhe nayi sadi ka salaam urdu

bin tumhare mehfilon mein noor nahi hai
shayari ki maang mein sindoor nahi hai
sher to hai jaise mashoor nahi hai
hoke ba-adab bhee shaoor nahi hai
tujhe naghmaat aur rubaii ki kasam
rakhna mijaaz mein yahi tu dam-kham

meri 'haya' teri hai ghulaam urdu
tujhe nayi sadi ka salaam urdu

kya bataoon yeh zubaan hai mere liye kyaa
sar pe rakha ho jaise dast-e-khuda
jaise mil jaaye mujhe aapki dua
shohraton ne jaise mujhe hauley se chuha
meri khandaan pehchaan hai yahi
meri aan-baan aur shaan hai yahi

aayi har gaam mere kaam urdu
tujhe nayi sadi ka salaam urdu

Listen here :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1BhwdvM_RaI&feature=related

Ignore the shirki lyrics at the end .

Al-hayaa
02-12-09, 09:33 AM
^^at the end the poetess uses gujji word in the urdu poem. people just cant help it.

amaankhan
02-12-09, 01:27 PM
bhaiy yeh kaisay mumkin??? Laiken phir bhi acchi nazam likhi hai!!


duniya mein kitni hai nafratein
phir bhi dilon mein hai chahatein
mar bhi jaaein pyaar wale
mit bhi jaaein yaar wale
zinda rehti hai unki mohabbatein

:o

Foolish meaning, copying from Hindi film's song :torture:, should be punished :D

aboosait
02-12-09, 03:36 PM
Oh right..heres another one..its a song but originally its a poets poem...........

I forgot the rest

I think you have left out Pal do pal meri hastee hai.

hastee rhymes with jawanee.

imported_MMS
02-12-09, 08:14 PM
Foolish meaning, copying from Hindi film's song :torture:, should be punished :D

Sare Jahan se acha Hindustan humara.

eeeewww yucky hindustanis in the urdu thread :torture:

Kas1m
02-12-09, 11:47 PM
I think you have left out Pal do pal meri hastee hai.

hastee rhymes with jawanee.


Yes thanks for correcting me

Zebunissa
05-12-09, 12:11 AM
Jeetay-ji paaya na kuch ham ne
Zamaanay waalo
Ab janazay ko to
Rukhsat ki ijaazat mil jaaye :(

Al-Mujaahidah
05-12-09, 12:14 AM
One of my favourites:
nice poem

aG123
05-12-09, 12:30 AM
I was gona type this all out but then i cudnt be bothered.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8f70L4ZKd4&feature=related

Copy and paste job:havtn checked them

Duniya Ke Ay Musafir Manzil Tere Qabar Hai
Tay Kar Raha Hai Jo tu Do Din ka ya Safar hai
Duniya Ke Ayyyy Musafir
Jab Sa Bani Hai Dunya Lakhon Karoron AYe
Baqi Raha na koi Matti main sab samai
Is Baat ko na bhulo sab ka yahi hashar hai
Duniya Ke Ay Musafir
Duniya Ke Ay Musafir Manzil Tere Qabar Hai
Tay Kar Raha Hai Jo tu Do Din ka ya Safar hai
Duniya Ke Ayyyy Musafir
Ye aali shan Banglay wahan kaam ka nahin hain
Makhmal main sonay walay maati main so rahay hain
Do Gaz zamin ka tukra mitti ka tara ghar hai
Duniya Ke Ayyyy Musafir
Duniya Ke Ay Musafir Manzil Tere Qabar Hai
Tay Kar Raha Hai Jo tu Do Din ka ya Safar hai
Duniya Ke Ayyyy Musafir
Ankhon sa tunay apni dekhay hain kitnay janazay ?
Hathon sa tunay kitnay dafnay tunay murday ?
Anjam sa tu apnay itna tu kyun ba khabar hai
Duniya Ke Ayyyy Musafir
Duniya Ke Ay Musafir Manzil Tere Qabar Hai
Tay Kar Raha Hai Jo tu Do Din ka ya Safar hai
Duniya Ke Ayyyy Musafir

imported_MMS
05-12-09, 12:51 AM
can we have a translation now?

aG123
05-12-09, 12:59 AM
can we have a translation now?

its translated in the vid, and the poem is there. You understand it, why u want it translated for :smack: its the urdu thread. Its got way more meaning in urdu anyway..like the way its translated in the vid doesnt do it justice either.

imported_MMS
05-12-09, 01:02 AM
testing your urdu skills

aG123
05-12-09, 01:08 AM
testing your urdu skills

Your telling me at 1.06am you have nothing better to do in your life then test Ag123's Urdu skills :smack:

If i knew how to type urdu in english I'd write lot more in urdu but its too much hassle for me.

Zebunissa
06-12-09, 01:05 AM
Ya Rabb hain baksh dena

Ya Rabb hain baksh dena
Bandey ko kaam tera
Mehroom reh na jaaye
Kal yeh ghulaam tera

Ya Rabb hain baksh dena
Bandey ko kaam Tera

Hain Tu hee denay wala
Masti se dey balandi
Asfal maqaam mera
Aalaa maqaam Tera

Mehroom kew rahoon main?
Jee barr ke kew na loon main?
Deta hain rizq sab ko
Hain faiz aam Tera

Imaan ki kahengey?
Imaan hain hamaara
Ahmad-Rasool Tera
Mus-hab kalaam Tera

Shams-ud-duha Muhammad :saw:
Badr-ud-duja Muhammad :saw:
Hain noor-e-paak roshan
Harr sub-ho-shaam Tera

Yeh daag bhi na ho ga
Tere siwa kisi ka
Quran main hain jo kuch
Wo hain tamaam Tera

Ya Rabb hain baksh dena
Bandey ko kaam Tera
Mehroom reh na jaaye
Kal yeh ghulaam Tera

Ya Rabb hain baksh dena
Bandey ko kaam Tera

Hamza Momand
07-12-09, 10:45 AM
u dad-e-sukhan mujh ko daytay hain iraq o paris
yeh kafir-e-hindi hay bay taigh o sana khoonraiz

Hamza Momand
08-12-09, 02:37 PM
parindo ki dunya ka darwaish hon may
k shaheen banata nhi aashiyana!

iqbal

aboosait
08-12-09, 03:31 PM
Your telling me at 1.06am you have nothing better to do in your life then test Ag123's Urdu skills :smack:

If i knew how to type urdu in english I'd write lot more in urdu but its too much hassle for me.

In support of imported MMS:

Bay-rukhee ke teer khaanaa bhee mera ik showkh thaa,

Dostonko aazmaana bhee mera ik showkh thaa,

Dard un ka apnay seenay se lagaaya is liyay,

ki choat khaa kar muskrana bhee mera ik showkh thaa.

aboosait
08-12-09, 03:37 PM
“Hoti nahi dosti kabhi chehre se”

“Dosti to dil se ki jati hay”


“Soorat unki khud hi pyari lagti hay”

“Kadar jinki dil se ki jati hai.

aboosait
10-12-09, 03:40 PM
Khud Bhi Badnaam Ho Gaya Koi??
Mujh Pay Tuhmat Uchalnay Kay Leye

aboosait
10-12-09, 03:46 PM
Jeetay-ji paaya na kuch ham ne
Zamaanay waalo
Ab janazay ko to
Rukhsat ki ijaazat mil jaaye :(

Such hai, umr bhar kis ka koun sath deta hai,

Gum bhi ho gaya rukhsat dil ko chhod kay tanha.

Hamza Momand
10-12-09, 04:12 PM
Khud Bhi Badnaam Ho Gaya Koi??
Mujh Pay Tuhmat Uchalnay Kay Leye

wah yeh zabardast sher hay.

Zebunissa
10-12-09, 04:43 PM
Khud Bhi Badnaam Ho Gaya Koi??
Mujh Pay Tuhmat Uchalnay Kay Leye
:masha: Zabardast. Kya baat hain!

aboosait
11-12-09, 01:09 PM
wah yeh zabardast sher hay.


:masha: Zabardast. Kya baat hain!

Shukriya,Hamza Momand aur Zebunissa, Himmat afzayee ke liye.

Lekin, dar asl, yeh kisee auar ka sher tha jo maine moqe ke lihaz se mawzoon samjha. Waise main is forum me copy-paste ke naam se badnaam hoon hee. :)

Hamza Momand
11-12-09, 02:27 PM
Shukriya,Hamza Momand aur Zebunissa, Himmat afzayee ke liye.

Lekin, dar asl, yeh kisee auar ka sher tha jo maine moqe ke lihaz se mawzoon samjha. Waise main is forum me copy-paste ke naam se badnaam hoon hee. :)

copy paste may kya kharabi hay. yeh b to seekhnay sikhanay may he aata hay. aap nay kahi say jana to aap humay os k baray may bata daytay hain.
may to aap k posts shoq say parhta hon.

Kas1m
11-12-09, 07:21 PM
I have a very sensitive shair here..tell me wat u think...


Kue janaa se khaak laate hain
apna kaaba alag banate hain
Kufar mein bhi ham rahe qismat se imaa ki taraf
Shukr hai kaaba bhi nikla kue janaa ki taraf

aboosait
12-12-09, 03:30 PM
copy paste may kya kharabi hay..........

:jkk:


haq vafaa kaa jo ham jataane lage
Altaf Husain Hali


haq vafaa kaa jo ham jataane lage
aap kuchh kahake muskuraane lage

ham ko jiinaa pa.Degaa furqat me.n
vo agar himmat aazamaane lage

[furqat=separation]

Dar hai merii zubaa.N na khul jaaye
ab vo baate.n bahut banaane lage

jaan bachatii nazar nahii.n aatii
Gair ulfat bahut jataane lage

tum ko karanaa pa.Degaa uzr-e-jafaa
ham agar dard-e-dil sunaane lage

[uzr-e-jafaa=reason for being unfaithful]

bahut mushkil hai shevaa-e-tasliim
ham bhii aaKhir ko jii churaane lage

[shevaa-e-tasliim=style of greeting]

vaqt-e-ruKhsat thaa saKht "Hali" par
ham bhii baiThe the jab vo jaane lage

[vaqt-e-ruKhsat=time of separation; saKht=difficult]

Source: http://urdupoetry.com/hali.html

aboosait
12-12-09, 05:23 PM
Darkhwaast karti hoon, sab apney apney dukkhiya sher eedar lay ke aou :(


Tanha chhor ke chal diye jaane kyun
Dil ke tukre hazaar kiye jaane kyun

Najane kya khata huyi humse
Diya pyaar ka ye sila jaane kyun


Tukre tukre huye sapne mere saare
Ashq na baha paaye jaane kyun

Ab bhi hai intezaar Aboo ko unke laut aane ka
jaana hai mujhko, dil bhool gaya jaane kyun

imported_MMS
12-12-09, 07:02 PM
chaman chaman ki dilkashi
gulon ki hai woh taazgi
hai chand jin se shabnami
woh kehkashan ki roshni
hawaon ki woh raagni
fazaon ki woh naghmagi
hai kitna pyara naam bhi
nabi nabi nabi nabi :saw:

Hamza Momand
13-12-09, 10:48 AM
Tanha chhor ke chal diye jaane kyun
Dil ke tukre hazaar kiye jaane kyun

Najane kya khata huyi humse
Diya pyaar ka ye sila jaane kyun


Tukre tukre huye sapne mere saare
Ashq na baha paaye jaane kyun

Ab bhi hai intezaar Aboo ko unke laut aane ka
jaana hai mujhko, dil bhool gaya jaane kyun

wah! wah! uncle
zabardast
bahut touching tha

i can understand its meaning. best poem.

:jkk:

Hamza Momand
13-12-09, 06:10 PM
Khud Bhi Badnaam Ho Gaya Koi??
Mujh Pay Tuhmat Uchalnay Kay Leye

ek or sher hay

hum aah b krtay hain to ho jate hain badnaam
wo qatal b krtay hain to charcha nhi hota

Kas1m
13-12-09, 06:14 PM
ek or sher hay

hum aah b krtay hain to ho jate hain badnaam
wo qatal b krtay hain to charcha nhi hota

Wah wah wah...kya kehne..zabardast...phir se irshaad farmaain...

Hamza Momand
13-12-09, 07:36 PM
Wah wah wah...kya kehne..zabardast...phir se irshaad farmaain...
sorry dobara irshad nhi kr sakta. es k badlay ek or shair arz hay:

ab ki bar eendhan k leye cut k gira hay jo darakht
chiryo ko bara pyaar tha es bodhay shajar say

Kas1m
13-12-09, 10:24 PM
sorry dobara irshad nhi kr sakta. es k badlay ek or shair arz hay:

ab ki bar eendhan k leye cut k gira hay jo darakht
chiryo ko bara pyaar tha es bodhay shajar say

Wah...kanjoos hamza...dobara nahi keh sakte lol
Ye acha shair tha..

aboosait
14-12-09, 10:39 AM
ek or sher hay

hum aah b krtay hain to ho jate hain badnaam
wo qatal b krtay hain to charcha nhi hota

Bilkul bajaa farmaaya. wah wah. Bahut khoob. Masha Allah.

aboosait
14-12-09, 10:47 AM
Jab kabhi hamara dil udas hota hai,
Mere khayalon mein tera chehra paas hota hai.

Bolta to kuch bhi nahi woh,
Lekin uski khamoshi mein bhi kuch ehsaas hota hai.

Gham akelepan ka mita to nahi,
Par aane wali khushi ka ehsaas to hota hai.

Hamza Momand
14-12-09, 01:57 PM
Bilkul bajaa farmaaya. wah wah. Bahut khoob. Masha Allah.
bahut shukriya
uncle aap k bahut zabardast sher mil rahain hain. aap kafi udaas lagtay hain.



Wah...kanjoos hamza...dobara nahi keh sakte lol
Ye acha shair tha..
kanjoosi kaha ki. bhala itnay achay sher koi muft may kisi ko sunnata hay.

ek or sher hay meray khayal say parveen shakir ka hay. wo bahut zabardast shaira thi. ALLAH on ko jannah day.

ab to ha'laat jaisay ho saaray logo
khud ko taqseem na krna pyaray logo

Kas1m
14-12-09, 02:16 PM
Aik shair hai barra zabardast...i think iqbal ka

Baat kiya thi he na Room o Iraan se dabay
Chand bay tarteeb oonton kay churaanay wale

aboosait
14-12-09, 04:49 PM
.............. aap kafi udaas lagtay hain...............

Udaasi ke aalam me likhe huwe (compile kiye huwe) ash'aar hain. Zebunissa ki mindarje zel darkwast ne mujhe flashback me le gayee awr phir se kuch der ke liye udaasi chaa gayee. Aansoo jo chaar saal pehile (aapki auntie ke inteqaal par) khushk ho gaye t-hey awr aankhonka ilaaj karana pada tha, phirse lawt aaye. Ek - aadh naye misre bhi bun diye. Maafee chaahta hoon agar aapko bhi gamgeen kiya hoon to.


Darkhwaast karti hoon, sab apney apney dukkhiya sher eedar lay ke aou :(

Ashkonki barsaat degayee woh jaate jaate,

Aahonki saughaat degayee woh jaate jaate.

Hamza Momand
14-12-09, 05:09 PM
je uncle aap k sher bahut achay or ghamgeen krdaynay walay hain. ALLAH auntie ko jannah may jaga or aap ko sabar ata farmae. ameen

aboosait
14-12-09, 05:37 PM
je uncle aap k sher bahut achay or ghamgeen krdaynay walay hain. ALLAH auntie ko jannah may jaga or aap ko sabar ata farmae. ameenAmeen.

To chaliye flashback se nikalte hain aur haal par laut aate hain.


Yaadon Ke Sahare Dunia Nahi Chalti,

Bina Mile Kabhi Mehfil Nahi Banti,

Kaise kahen kaise hein hum

Bas Ap khush hein to bahut khush hein hum..

imported_MMS
16-12-09, 11:09 PM
woh husn-e-lazawal hai
woh ishq-e-bemisaal hai
woh charkh ka hilal hai
nabi ka woh bilal hai

badan sulagte rayt per
ke thar thara uthe hajar
zuban pe tha magar yahi
nabi nabi nabi nabi

:saw:

Medievalist
16-12-09, 11:12 PM
salloo 'alal Habeeb.
:saw:

Hamza Momand
17-12-09, 07:39 AM
lahoo

agar lahoo hay badan may to khaof hay, na hiras
agar lahoo hay badan may to dil hay bay wswas
jisay mila yeh mata e giran baha os ko
na seem o zr say muhabbat hay, nay gham e aflaas!

(allama iqbal)

aboosait
17-12-09, 03:48 PM
woh husn-e-lazawal hai
woh ishq-e-bemisaal hai
woh charkh ka hilal hai
nabi ka woh bilal hai

badan sulagte rayt per
ke thar thara uthe hajar
zuban pe tha magar yahi
nabi nabi nabi nabi

:saw:

Taarekh ko badal ke likh raha hai shaair.

Tareekh me likha hai ki Bilal (RA) ki zuban par tha "Ahad - Ahad" Waise bhi koi sahabee Rasoolullah :saws2: ko nabi nabi nabi nabi keh ke naheen pukaara tha.

aboosait
17-12-09, 03:49 PM
lahoo

agar lahoo hay badan may to khaof hay, na hiras
agar lahoo hay badan may to dil hay bay wswas
jisay mila yeh mata e giran baha os ko
na seem o zr say muhabbat hay, nay gham e aflaas!

(allama iqbal)

Bahut tough alfaaz hain. Anagrezi tarjuma kar sako to ain nawazish hogi.

aboosait
17-12-09, 03:52 PM
salloo 'alal Habeeb.
:saw:

Urdu Poetry?

Hamza Momand
17-12-09, 04:02 PM
lahoo

agar lahoo hay badan may to khaof hay, na hiras
agar lahoo hay badan may to dil hay bay wswas
jisay mila yeh mata e giran baha os ko
na seem o zr say muhabbat hay, nay gham e aflaas!

(allama iqbal)

english may esay translate krna mushkil hay magar may koshish krta hon inshaALLAH. aisa krta hon sirf kuch words ka matlab batata hon.

lahoo = blood
badan= body
khaof= fear
hiras= greed

wswas= wswasa ki jama hay
mata e giran baha= bahut qeemti samaan
seem o zr= zr ka matlab gold so i think k puray harf ka matlab hay maal o daolat

aflas= ghurbat i think, muflisi say liya gaya hay.

bus itna he kr sakta tha.

aboosait
17-12-09, 04:06 PM
english may esay translate krna mushkil hay magar may koshish krta hon inshaALLAH. aisa krta hon sirf kuch words ka matlab batata hon.

lahoo = blood
badan= body
khaof= fear
hiras= greed

wswas= wswasa ki jama hay
mata e giran baha= bahut qeemti samaan
seem o zr= zr ka matlab gold so i think k puray harf ka matlab hay maal o daolat

aflas= ghurbat i think, muflisi say liya gaya hay.

bus itna he kr sakta tha.

Thanks for the meanings of the words. But the poem itself needs a translation. It is so difficult to understand what the poet intends to convey.

Kas1m
17-12-09, 04:13 PM
lahoo

agar lahoo hay badan may to khaof hay, na hiras
agar lahoo hay badan may to dil hay bay wswas
jisay mila yeh mata e giran baha os ko
na seem o zr say muhabbat hay, nay gham e aflaas!

(allama iqbal)

The poet meant that a person who has a true blood in him, he is blessed by Allah..true blood can mean he is well obidient of Allah and follows the right path...
Maybe im wrong

aboosait
17-12-09, 04:27 PM
The poet meant that a person who has a true blood in him, he is blessed by Allah..true blood can mean he is well obidient of Allah and follows the right path...
Maybe im wrong

I think there is some mistake in the transliteration itself. Hamza please check.

Hamza Momand
17-12-09, 07:30 PM
I think there is some mistake in the transliteration itself. Hamza please check.

i have written it from baal e jibreel.
and i thought i will get some answers here. im stuck with the word lahoo.

Hamza Momand
18-12-09, 12:35 PM
shair k sher ka to kai matlab nikalay ja saktay hain. to kya hum apni samjh say ek sher ki mani nikaal saktay hain?

Kas1m
18-12-09, 12:59 PM
shair k sher ka to kai matlab nikalay ja saktay hain. to kya hum apni samjh say ek sher ki mani nikaal saktay hain?

Lahoo= blood
Didnt you know that already?

Hamza Momand
18-12-09, 01:01 PM
Lahoo= blood
Didnt you know that already?

yeah i know. laikin yaha pay es ka matlab kuch or hosakta hay. shair nay kuch or matlab liya ho shayad.

Kas1m
18-12-09, 01:09 PM
yeah i know. laikin yaha pay es ka matlab kuch or hosakta hay. shair nay kuch or matlab liya ho shayad.

Thats what im saying...
Lahoo = true blood
True blood = honest man
Honest man = aik acha musalmaan...aur iss tarah baaqi shair bhi context mein aata hai

Hamza Momand
18-12-09, 08:27 PM
naseehat

bachae shaheen say kehta tha oqaab e saal khurd
a teray shehpar pay aasan rifate charkh bari!
hay shabab apnay lahu ki aaj may jalnay ka naam
sakht koshi say hay talkh e zindagani angbeen!
jo kabutar par jhapatnay may maza hay a pisar
wo maza shayad kabutar k lahu may b nhi

allama iqbal

Hamza Momand
18-12-09, 08:28 PM
samajhna thora sa mushkil hay magar aakhri sher mujhay bahut acha laga.

advghori
19-12-09, 09:32 AM
:start:
Sambhala hai maine bahut apne dil ko, zubaa par tera phir bhi naam aa raha hai,
Jaha raaz ko bhi chhipaya na jaaye, Muhabbat mai esa maqaam aa raha hai. :o

Mujahid12
19-12-09, 11:26 AM
kabhi is kAY dar kabhi us kay dar kabhi dar badar
gham e aashiqi tera shukria me kahan kahan se gaya guzar

Hamza Momand
20-12-09, 10:03 AM
kashmiri mujahideen k leye

yarane wafa kehtay hain kashmir hay jannat
jannat na kisi kafir ko mili hay na milay gi

Hamza Momand
20-12-09, 10:09 AM
jab ishq sikhata hay aadab e khud aagahe
khultay hain ghulamo pr israr e shehenshahi
ataar ho, rumi ho, razi ho, ghazali ho
kuch haath nhi aata bay aahe sehar gahi!!
nomeed na ho is say a rahbar e farzana
km kosh to hain laikin bay zoq nhi rahi
a tair e lahoti os rizq say maot achi
jis rizq say aati ho parwaz may kotahi!
dara o sikandar say wo mard e faqeer oola!
ho jis ki faqeeri may boe asad(r.a) ilahi!
aaene jawan mardan haq goi wa baybaki
ALLAH k shairo ko aati nhi robahi


ALLAMA IQBAL

rahamath
20-12-09, 10:11 AM
kashmiri mujahideen k leye

yarane wafa kehtay hain kashmir hay jannat
jannat na kisi kafir ko mili hay na milay gi

:start:
:masha: thats really nice. What a point! Allahu Akbar

Mujahid12
20-12-09, 11:19 AM
:start:
:masha: thats really nice. What a point! Allahu Akbar

ap thora sa makhan yahan bhej dain mehenga ho gaya hai, pepsi bhi ab to mehengi ho gayi, poora aadha riyal barha dia zalimon ne :(

Kas1m
20-12-09, 11:34 AM
Aasi hoon bakhsh dene ko us ne kaha to hai
Jannat mujhe mile na mile aasra to hai

Mujahid12
20-12-09, 11:55 AM
Aasi hoon bakhsh dene ko us ne kaha to hai
Jannat mujhe mile na mile aasra to hai

pehlay pora nar sher dekha hai me ne ab tak :up:

wese kehte hain:



koi mujh se pochay me kia mangta hoon
me apne khuda se khuda maangta hoon

Kas1m
20-12-09, 12:01 PM
pehlay pora nar sher dekha hai me ne ab tak :up:

wese kehte hain:



koi mujh se pochay me kia mangta hoon
me apne khuda se khuda maangta hoon


Aap mere saath game khaailain gain...aakhri haraf se aik shair shuroo karna hai
Mujhe umeed hai kay main poora nahi to kam az kam aap kay muqablay par aaoon ga

Mujahid12
20-12-09, 12:08 PM
Aap mere saath game khaailain gain...aakhri haraf se aik shair shuroo karna hai
Mujhe umeed hai kay main poora nahi to kam az kam aap kay muqablay par aaoon ga

theek hai magr aik nayi thread banain aur me namaz parh kar aata hoon asr time!

aray sir aap jeet jao hume khushi hogi, magr sher honay chahiye hain geedar aur lomrian nahi

Kas1m
20-12-09, 12:10 PM
theek hai magr aik nayi thread banain aur me namaz parh kar aata hoon asr time!

aray sir aap jeet jao hume khushi hogi, magr sher honay chahiye hain geedar aur lomrian nahi

Theek hai...aap namaz parh kar aao..main thread banata hoon

rahamath
20-12-09, 12:19 PM
ap thora sa makhan yahan bhej dain mehenga ho gaya hai, pepsi bhi ab to mehengi ho gayi, poora aadha riyal barha dia zalimon ne :(

:start:
Aapka comment irrelevant hai.
Mehnath karein aur Allah :Swt: se maange makhan

Kas1m
20-12-09, 12:24 PM
:start:
Aapka comment irrelevant hai.
Mehnath karein aur Allah :Swt: se maange makhan

aap ko samajh nahi aaya..
He was trying to say u were buttering him up for a shair like that and mujahid said pass the butter here and ill sell it lol

Mujahid12
20-12-09, 12:29 PM
aap ko samajh nahi aaya..
He was trying to say u were buttering him up for a shair like that and mujahid said pass the butter here and ill sell it lol

mere pyare bhai, ap kafi samajhdar ho, mgr sirf on ko nahi, yeh hazrat sab ko makhan laga rahay hain.

acha khair woh kehte hani na Qais jungle me bethay hoay Allah Allah kar rahay thay... us kay dost ko pata chala to bechain ho gaya, kaha


qais jungle me akela hai mujhe janay do
khoob jamay gi mil bathain k jab dewanay do

ap thread banao khub jamay gi jab mil bethain ge deewanay do:hidban:

Hamza Momand
20-12-09, 12:31 PM
ap thora sa makhan yahan bhej dain mehenga ho gaya hai, pepsi bhi ab to mehengi ho gayi, poora aadha riyal barha dia zalimon ne :(

je biradar e azizam es may makhan ki kya baat thi? sher may koi masla tha?

Mujahid12
20-12-09, 12:35 PM
je biradar e azizam es may makhan ki kya baat thi? sher may koi masla tha?

na afandam, bus makhan khana bhi zaroori hai, demagh kamzoor ho gaya hai, aur pese bhi nahi hain. yahan aaya to dekha makhan to muft me bat raha hai... :rubeyes:

Kas1m
20-12-09, 12:35 PM
je biradar e azizam es may makhan ki kya baat thi? sher may koi masla tha?

Apne pyare mujahid ko keerre nikalnay ki aadat hai

rahamath
20-12-09, 12:37 PM
aap ko samajh nahi aaya..
He was trying to say u were buttering him up for a shair like that and mujahid said pass the butter here and ill sell it lol

:start:
I understood that and that's why i replied like that. I don't butter anyone and quite hate that term. The thing why I liked that is because I think that's the only poetic lines I understood as you know I don't understand many urdu words lest I understand the poetry and I liked the way it was said linking jannah and kuffar and I made my mom too to hear that.

Kas1m
20-12-09, 12:39 PM
:start:
I understood that and that's why i replied like that. I don't butter anyone and quite hate that term. The thing why I liked that is because I think that's the only poetic lines I understood as you know I don't understand many urdu words lest I understand the poetry and I liked the way it was said linking jannah and kuffar and I made my mom too to hear that.

Yes i agree...it was a great shair...bhai mujahid doesnt know how to do someones tareef so ignore him...was a great shair indeed...no doubt

Hamza Momand
20-12-09, 12:40 PM
aap ko samajh nahi aaya..
He was trying to say u were buttering him up for a shair like that and mujahid said pass the butter here and ill sell it lol

aap ko b wo sher acha nhi laga?

bahut pehlay ki baat hay may jamat islami k ek jalsay may shareek tha or yeh jalsa kashmir k baray may tha to yeh sher waha sunna or posters pay b parha.

Kas1m
20-12-09, 12:42 PM
aap ko b wo sher acha nhi laga?

bahut pehlay ki baat hay may jamat islami k ek jalsay may shareek tha or yeh jalsa kashmir k baray may tha to yeh sher waha sunna or posters pay b parha.

See above post

Mujahid12
20-12-09, 12:43 PM
Yes i agree...it was a great shair...bhai mujahid doesnt know how to do someones tareef so ignore him...was a great shair indeed...no doubt

sir jee, sab tareef karain ge to ghalti kon bataye ga?

Kas1m
20-12-09, 12:48 PM
sir jee, sab tareef karain ge to ghalti kon bataye ga?

Aray kon si galti? The shair was perfect

Mujahid12
20-12-09, 12:59 PM
Aray kon si galti? The shair was perfect

me generally baat kar raha hoon, me ne shair ko to kuch bhi nahi kaha..? shair aacha tha, me ne to makhan ki baat ki thi

rahamath
20-12-09, 01:04 PM
me generally baat kar raha hoon, me ne shair ko to kuch bhi nahi kaha..? shair aacha tha, me ne to makhan ki baat ki thi

:start:
You should seriously stop slandering and fear Allah :Swt:. Thats all I would say. I told already I hate the term buttering as that's selling one's soul and I do take that seriously.

Kas1m
20-12-09, 01:06 PM
me generally baat kar raha hoon, me ne shair ko to kuch bhi nahi kaha..? shair aacha tha, me ne to makhan ki baat ki thi

lol lagta hai aap makhan kay barre saudagar hain
Makhan ki kaafi pehchan hai aap ko