my poem

[cl@rity]

salaam. :)

Shaayari humara kaam nahin
shaayaron meinseh humaara naam nahin
muntazir na rehna eh logo
is sher ka koi anjaam nahin

wah wah wah!

meaning...
Poetry is not me thing
i am nota name from amongst the poets
dont be in waiting oh people
this poem has no conclusion! :D

and then the wah wah wah basically means wow wow wow :)

thats the one and only poem i hav composed that i luv!!

feel free to put down ur poems :)

[Omar Mukhtar]

crap :rolleyes:

[MMS]

crap :rolleyes:

ur face is crap :rolleyes:

i thought it was funny :up:

[Omar Mukhtar]

ur face is crap

u r crap, u should be scrapped.:rolleyes:

[MMS]

u r crap, u should be scrapped.:rolleyes:

eat chicken and drink milk :rolleyes:

[Abu Hurairah]

My Urdu is bad so was not able to enjoy it as other will. :up:
crap :rolleyes:
Akhy don't say that insha'allah, take others feelings into account even if you dislike the poem yourself personally. Either be constructive in your criticism, say words of encouragement, or say nothing. :)
ur face is crap :rolleyes:

i thought it was funny :up:
Thats not nice either.

[Omar Mukhtar]

I apologize, its a nice poem.

[Abu Hurairah]

I apologize, its a nice poem.
Jezak'allah my brother.

May Allah (swt) reward you- Ameen.

[MMS]

Thats not nice either.

you should go eat chicken and drink milk too :rolleyes:

[Medievalist]

salaam. :)

Shaayari humara kaam nahin
shaayaron meinseh humaara naam nahin
muntazir na rehna eh logo
is sher ka koi anjaam nahin

wah wah wah!

meaning...
Poetry is not me thing
i am nota name from amongst the poets
dont be in waiting oh people
this poem has no conclusion! :D

and then the wah wah wah basically means wow wow wow :)

thats the one and only poem i hav composed that i luv!!

feel free to put down ur poems :)

mashaALLAH.

[Abu Hurairah]

you should go eat chicken and drink milk too :rolleyes:
May Allah (swt) guide you..... to the fridge, for you appear hungry.

[MMS]

May Allah (swt) guide you..... to the fridge, for you appear hungry.

yeh just as i thought :rolleyes: all doin the goody goody act

i just wanted to expose u so people dont forget the evil that lays behind the sugar coats :coolbro:

[Abu Hurairah]

yeh just as i thought :rolleyes: all doin the goody goody act

i just wanted to expose u so people dont forget the evil that lays behind the sugar coats :coolbro:
But I made du'a for you.

I forgot to say Ameen, sorry.

[cl@rity]

well atleast Med the poem G liked it :D

jazakallah MMS :inlove: