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[Chained_Water]

I long to see your face in my dreams,
I close my eyes and my heart pleads,
To be blessed with a vision of truth,
A perfect mirror in which to see,
My own imperfect reality.

A droplet of knowledge heightens thirst.
Like the glimpse of a jewel catching my eye,
Making me want to stop and stare,
Touch, hold, take for my own that diamond.
Precious and pure; untarnished,
And reflecting light, so was your essence,
The beauty of your life.

A perfect form,
A scent pure perfume,
A smile of gleaming gems,
A face that lit up darkened rooms,
A character that made each companion,
Feel as though he was loved best.

Mercy embodied in a man,
With warmth that never left,
And a legacy that extends beyond worlds,
In hearts it resides yet.

Each word you spoke rings through time,
Calling us like a clear bell.
I long to hear the sound myself,
In wakefulness or sleep,
I wait at night for a vision to come,
To have an image that I can keep.

Your words are comfort and guidance,
Yet still I wish for us to meet,
In this lifetime as well as the next,
Oh Lord give me a true vision,
Of your beloved as I sleep.

[Abu Hurairah]

Subhan'allah this poem is really nice masha'allah. :up:

Is it meant to be untitled with the poets name removed?

[Ibn Khattab]

How come the poem doesnt rhyme?

but good mashallah *thumbs up*

[.: Anna :.]

:up: really liked this :)

ibn khattab it doesnt hav 2 rhyme :p

[Ibn Khattab]

:up: really liked this :)

ibn khattab it doesnt hav 2 rhyme :p

lol yeah but rhyming ones are way better
just like my black and blue sweater.

if the peoms dont rhyme
then i think its a waste of time

:D

[Chained_Water]

lol yeah but rhyming ones are way better
just like my black and blue sweater.

if the peoms dont rhyme
then i think its a waste of time

:D

Lol, rhyming is good, but it is not the only way there is to give a poem rhythm and flow. :)

[Niqaabi]

Very nice poem. :up:

Ibn Khattab an analysis of Poem:
Octave meters, irregular rhyming scheme.
Themes of compassion, obedience, 'religious'ness, time.
Alliteration, metaphors, similie, enjambament (although there was a , it doesnt look like it :p)

It doesnt have to rhyme to be a good poem.

[Chained_Water]

Very nice poem. :up:

Ibn Khattab an analysis of Poem:
Octave meters, irregular rhyming scheme.
Themes of compassion, obedience, 'religious'ness, time.
Alliteration, metaphors, similie, enjambament (although there was a , it doesnt look like it :p)

It doesnt have to rhyme to be a good poem.
LOL, you studying English Lit at college sis?

[S@Z]

it really is a beautiful poem :)

and even tho i concur with ibn k. - i've seen some really powerful un-rhyming poems too :up:

after all > poetry is an un-restricted form of expression :hidban:

[S@Z]

Very nice poem. :up:

Ibn Khattab an analysis of Poem:
Octave meters, irregular rhyming scheme.
Themes of compassion, obedience, 'religious'ness, time.
Alliteration, metaphors, similie, enjambament (although there was a , it doesnt look like it :p)

It doesnt have to rhyme to be a good poem.LOL

reminds me of my lit lectures :p

and i kinda forgot most of it.. :scratch:

[Niqaabi]

LOL, you studying English Lit at college sis?
Yeh :D i would so like to do your poem in college then boring kubla khan :vomit:
im just glad you have no phallic/yonik symbolism :o

[Chained_Water]

Yeh :D i would so like to do your poem in college then boring kubla khan :vomit:
im just glad you have no phallic/yonik symbolism :o
:vomit: Erm.. I wouldn't dream of putting such filth into it.

[Ibn Khattab]

dont get me wrong poetry can be zoomin
but rhyming is just tik tik boomin.

man rhyming poems jus rock so much
whether its english, urdu arabic or dutch :p

[Al Qiyamah]

:salams

Masha-Allah I agree this is a beautiful poem :love: :)

Yeh :D i would so like to do your poem in college then boring kubla khan :vomit:
im just glad you have no phallic/yonik symbolism :o

:salams

kubla woah?? :rubeyes: what examination board are you doing it with sis?

We're doing William Blake's Poetry ...he raises important issues in his poems, but in a psychotic way :wacko:

[.: Anna :.]

Very nice poem. :up:

Ibn Khattab an analysis of Poem:
Octave meters, irregular rhyming scheme.
Themes of compassion, obedience, 'religious'ness, time.
Alliteration, metaphors, similie, enjambament (although there was a , it doesnt look like it :p)

It doesnt have to rhyme to be a good poem.

lol :D

[Myzara]

Very nice poem. :up:

Ibn Khattab an analysis of Poem:
Octave meters, irregular rhyming scheme.
Themes of compassion, obedience, 'religious'ness, time.
Alliteration, metaphors, similie, enjambament (although there was a , it doesnt look like it :p)

It doesnt have to rhyme to be a good poem.

You forgot to say the scale. :rolleyes: (how many syllables per line? do they alternate? Is it different each stanza?) If I was your teacher, I'd give you an I for incomplete :p

[Myzara]

it really is a beautiful poem :)

and even tho i concur with ibn k. - i've seen some really powerful un-rhyming poems too :up:

after all > poetry is an un-restricted form of expression :hidban:

Hiku poetry is a good example.

[Al-Irhaab]

theres no soul to the poem man its just prose broken up :smack:

[Chained_Water]

theres no soul to the poem man its just prose broken up :smack:
Brav, you wouldn't know what poetry was if it smacked you in the face with a tuna sandwich so quit polluting my thread :(

[Niqaabi]

You forgot to say the scale. :rolleyes: (how many syllables per line? do they alternate? Is it different each stanza?) If I was your teacher, I'd give you an I for incomplete :p
:eek3: someone is obviously taking this thread a bit too seriously. Are you al-irhaab sister?

[Abu Hurairah]

theres no soul to the poem man its just prose broken up :smack:
Everyone's a critic- it was good man. :(
:eek3: someone is obviously taking this thread a bit too seriously. Are you al-irhaab sister?
He's a brother from America, quote the Raven: "Never More!"

[Chained_Water]

An expression of love for the beloved rasool,
Isn't here to be analysed or follow anyones rules,
If one doesn't see the soul in the words,
They haven't connected to it or truly heard.

[Chained_Water]

He's a brother from America, quote the Raven: "Never More!"
Yay, the Raven :inlove:

[Abu Hurairah]

Yay, the Raven :inlove:
Don't tell me you know the Raven? :eek: *In total shock*

[Chained_Water]

Don't tell me you know the Raven? :eek: *In total shock*
Duh, Poe rocks :up:

..so does the Simpsons episode it was in :D

[Abu Hurairah]

Duh, Poe rocks :up:

..so does the Simpsons episode it was in :D
Why did you have to mention The Simpsons? :(, I was just about to give you a rep. too. :crying:

*Sigh*

[Niqaabi]

Edgar Allen Poe

[Chained_Water]

More :love: for the prophet(saw) :)

[Medievalist]

mashaALLAH