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RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:10 PM
I need sum luv poems for my homework. It's got to be gud and have sum devices,

Jzaakallahkhair.

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 03:15 PM
dya need em in englzh!?!? :nuts: :D

RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:16 PM
dya need em in englzh!?!? :nuts: :D

yeh man wud b gud, itz a englis lessn intit :(

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 03:28 PM
yeh man wud b gud, itz a englis lessn intit :(


y dnt ya juz typ l0ve p0emz in g0ogle?!?! den yal gt l0odzzz:up: :hidban: :D :hidban: :coolbro:

RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:36 PM
y dnt ya juz typ l0ve p0emz in g0ogle?!?! den yal gt l0odzzz:up: :hidban: :D :hidban: :coolbro:


i d1d and 1 g0t l04ds, dts d probl3m, i n33d gud stuff.

Neyzen
10-12-06, 03:37 PM
:D my beloved sweet angel

i love you more than any angle

I love you more than bloody american dollars and british pounds

I have dreamt of pounds and you

I can never forget you and financial papers


:D :D


as a economist, i can write so.

:hidban: :hidban:

Chained_Water
10-12-06, 03:38 PM
"When it's cold & dark at night,
And we're alone together,
I long to take you in my arms,
And cuddle you forever."

Purple Ronnie

RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:39 PM
dats gud stuff neyzen keep it going homey but i need stuff dat my teacha wont kick me out. i dont think she accepts bludy in a poem.

RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:40 PM
thanks chinwater, cud u find me a longer one?

cum on peepl, i need a long luv poem. make sure it has metafors.

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 03:40 PM
dats gud stuff neyzen keep it going homey but i need stuff dat my teacha wont kick me out. i dont think she accepts bludy in a poem.


L0OO0O00O0O0O0OO0O0L :rofl1:

Chained_Water
10-12-06, 03:41 PM
"When it's cold & dark at night,
And we're alone together,
I long to take you in my arms,
And cuddle you forever."

"When it's cold & dark at night,
And we're alone together,
I long to take you in my arms,
And cuddle you forever."

"When it's cold & dark at night,
And we're alone together,
I long to take you in my arms,
And cuddle you forever."

"When it's cold & dark at night,
And we're alone together,
I long to take you in my arms,
And cuddle you forever."

"When it's cold & dark at night,
And we're alone together,
I long to take you in my arms,
And cuddle you forever."

Purple Ronnie

There you go, it has a poetic device in it too: repitition.

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 03:42 PM
cum on peepl, i need a long luv poem. make sure it has metafors.

:eek: y dnt u get dem frm n anthlgy tngy in yr 12 v ad 1 it ad :vomit: lurv p0emz in it n ad metaf0rz in it:up:

RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:42 PM
thanz chanwater, ur sooo funnny.



oops i forgot to laff. :zzz:

RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:42 PM
:eek: y dnt u get dem frm n anthlgy tngy in yr 12 i v ad 1 it ad :vomit: lurv p0emz in it n ad metaf0rz in it:up:

tell me de names man, i dnt knw. i was supose 2 do it furday n nw it sunday!

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 03:45 PM
tell me de names man, i dnt knw. i was supose 2 do it furday n nw it sunday!

ermmmm da nmez?!?:rubeyes: v8 let me g0 fnd buk :p

RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:48 PM
ermmmm da nmez?!?:rubeyes: v8 let me g0 fnd buk :p

thnk u,

:)

leela
10-12-06, 03:48 PM
tell me de names man, i dnt knw. i was supose 2 do it furday n nw it sunday!

Looked at any of Shakespeare's sonnets?

Or Rupert Brooke's 'The Great Lover'?

RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:50 PM
Looked at any of Shakespeare's sonnets?

Or Rupert Brooke's 'The Great Lover'?

sonnets b too complicted. i read brokkes the soldier, dat was good. any other ideas? n thnk u for rplyoing,

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 03:50 PM
thnk u,

:)

u juz g0tta v8 b0ut 5minz den i cn get upstrz :p:D

AbuIbtisaam
10-12-06, 03:55 PM
At Last

At last, when all the summer shine
That warmed life's early hours is past,
Your loving fingers seek for mine
And hold them close—at last—at last!
Not oft the robin comes to build
Its nest upon the leafless bough
By autumn robbed, by winter chilled,—
But you, dear heart, you love me now.

Though there are shadows on my brow
And furrows on my cheek, in truth,—
The marks where Time's remorseless plough
Broke up the blooming sward of Youth,—
Though fled is every girlish grace
Might win or hold a lover's vow,
Despite my sad and faded face,
And darkened heart, you love me now!

I count no more my wasted tears;
They left no echo of their fall;
I mourn no more my lonesome years;
This blessed hour atones for all.
I fear not all that Time or Fate
May bring to burden heart or brow,—
Strong in the love that came so late,
Our souls shall keep it always now!

Elizabeth Akers Allen

RotiWala
10-12-06, 03:57 PM
dat is gud abu, a bit too long, my mates mite throw me out. but jzakaz.

AbuIbtisaam
10-12-06, 03:58 PM
Damelus' Song to Diaphenia

Diaphenia, like the daffadowndilly,
White as the sun, fair as the lily,
.........Heigh ho, how I do love thee!
I do love thee as my lambs
Are belovëd of their dams—
..........How blest were I if thou wouldst prove me!

Diaphenia, like the spreading roses,
That in thy sweets all sweets incloses,
..........Fair sweet, how I do love thee!
I do love thee as each flower
Loves the sun's life-giving power,
..........For, dead, thy breath to life might move me.

Diaphenia, like to all things blessed,
When all thy praises are expressëd,
..........Dear joy, how I do love thee!
As the birds do love the spring,
Or the bees their careful king,—
..........Then in requite, sweet virgin, love me

Henry Constable

RotiWala
10-12-06, 04:00 PM
wowee abu, jzks! i thinks this mite b d one :D

jzks jzks.

is their a author?

AbuIbtisaam
10-12-06, 04:01 PM
what's your home work

To write the poem or to find a love poem

Cos If u need to write one,then that's different

You can't try and pass these poems off as yours *SMILES*cos ur teacher will see u from a mile off.These are like famous poems.
Actually these are from the collection:100 greatest love poems ever written
(I googled,to help u)

RotiWala
10-12-06, 04:02 PM
what's your home work

To write the poem or to find a love poem

Cos If u need to write one,then that's different

You can't try and pass these poems off as yours *SMILES*cos ur teacher will see u from a mile off.These are like famous poems.
Actually these are from the collection:100 greatest love poems ever written
(I googled,to help u)


i need to find 1 and show it to the class. i think i use this one. thnx agn!

AbuIbtisaam
10-12-06, 04:04 PM
That's ok...

Glad I could help...

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 04:07 PM
http://www.wjec.co.uk/elanglit-revised_anthology-06.pdf:up:

il tel ya vhch 1z r da lurv p0emz @) ma tchr tld me s0o itz rite:p:up: :hidban: :D :hidban:

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 04:08 PM
i need to find 1 and show it to the class. i think i use this one. thnx agn!


0o0o0o0o :crying: dnt u vnt ma 1z:( :rubeyes: :p

RotiWala
10-12-06, 04:10 PM
0o0o0o0o :crying: dnt u vnt ma 1z:( :rubeyes: :p

yeh i still wan wm, i cud do wiv more. tell me which 1s is gud.

Unique Muslimah
10-12-06, 04:11 PM
Errm How do i love thee(sonnet 43)..Elizabeth Barret Browning..thats got alot of linguistic devices..
also a controversial one is "who so list to hunt" which is about unrequited love(to an extent)..thats by Thomas Wyatt..
And then theres the non conventional love poem by Will(iam Shakespeare)..Sonnet CXXX,"My mistres eyes are nothing like the Sunne"..
or you've got the very conventional teenage perception first love sort of thing,Christina Rossetti.."A birthday"..
*is out of breath*

AbuIbtisaam
10-12-06, 04:13 PM
this one's famous

Sonnet 18

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimmed;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st;
Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st:
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

One guess who?

RotiWala
10-12-06, 04:14 PM
Errm How do i love thee(sonnet 43)..Elizabeth Barret Browning..thats got alot of linguistic devices..also a controversial one is "who so list to hunt" which is about unrequited love(to an extent)..thats by Thomas Wyatt..And then theres the non conventional love poem by Will(iam Shakespeare)..Sonnet CXXX,"My mistres eyes are nothing like the Sunne"..or you've got the very conventional teenage perception first love sort of thing,Christina Rossetti..
*is out of breath*


dt is a lot of stuff, thnk u. im gonna goggle it nw.
ok i read most of dem n they is difficult to understand. erm i like the brownie one, might use dt too.

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 04:16 PM
yeh i still wan wm, i cud do wiv more. tell me which 1s is gud.


w0o0oo0ho00o k il tel u da lurv p0oemz 1 :D:D:D:D:D

s0nnet CXXX
the c0llar (tiz religiouz lurv 1)
sonnet43 how d0 i l0ve thee?
my last duchess
a birthday (religi0uz/lurv)
the passionate shepherd to his love (she sed itz kinda lurvy but m0r nature)

:hidban: :D :coolbro: :D :hidban:

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 04:17 PM
Errm How do i love thee(sonnet 43)..Elizabeth Barret Browning..thats got alot of linguistic devices..
also a controversial one is "who so list to hunt" which is about unrequited love(to an extent)..thats by Thomas Wyatt..
And then theres the non conventional love poem by Will(iam Shakespeare)..Sonnet CXXX,"My mistres eyes are nothing like the Sunne"..
or you've got the very conventional teenage perception first love sort of thing,Christina Rossetti.."A birthday"..
*is out of breath*


0o0o0o0o0o derrr da sme az m99999:hidban: :D :hidban: :D :hidban: i cvo0oz 2 sl0o0o :smack: :p:D :D

Unique Muslimah
10-12-06, 04:18 PM
One guess who?

None other than Will ofcourse.LOL.Its kinda the opposite of Sonnet CXXX, (which is subject to ALOT of interpretation)..lool..
Pagal..loool..we studying same poems..

RotiWala
10-12-06, 04:21 PM
w0o0oo0ho00o k il tel u da lurv p0oemz 1 :D:D:D:D:D

s0nnet CXXX
the c0llar (tiz religiouz lurv 1)
sonnet43 how d0 i l0ve thee?
my last duchess
a birthday (religi0uz/lurv)
the passionate shepherd to his love (she sed itz kinda lurvy but m0r nature)

:hidban: :D :coolbro: :D :hidban:

w0o0o0oho0o0o thnks blud.

im using d shepherd 1 in d trash!

keep dem coming ppppl. more d bettr enit

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 04:22 PM
None other than Will ofcourse.LOL.Its kinda the opposite of Sonnet CXXX, (which is subject to ALOT of interpretation)..lool..
Pagal..loool..we studying same poems..


i did dem lzt yr der s0o0o :vomit::rubeyes: :p

Unique Muslimah
10-12-06, 04:22 PM
I think its cool that Robert Browning(My Last Dutchess) and Elizabeth Barrett Browning(Sonnet 43:How do I love thee) were hubby and wife:D

RotiWala
10-12-06, 04:23 PM
d brownies were marrid?

wt abt d kids? were they flapjaks?

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 04:26 PM
I think its cool that Robert Browning(My Last Dutchess) and Elizabeth Barrett Browning(Sonnet 43:How do I love thee) were hubby and wife:D

derz 1 funni 1 in der d@ v ver :rofl1: s0o mch @ da s0nnet CXXX :rofl1: :rofl1:

Unique Muslimah
10-12-06, 04:29 PM
LOL...(so were we pagal..it turned into a very interesting debate..:p)..

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 04:29 PM
LOL...(so were we pagal..it turned into a very interesting debate..:p)..

lo00oo00o0ool i meba v spnt lak 2/3 lez0nz 0n it c0z al 0f uz lurvd s0o mch v vudnt let tchr m0v 0n :rofl1: :p

RaNdOm
10-12-06, 04:49 PM
:salams

i love u
u love me
together we're a happy family
with a nick nack paddy whack
give a dog a bone
this old man came rollin home

anon

PaGaL~LaDo0
10-12-06, 04:50 PM
:salams

i love u
u love me
together we're a happy family
with a nick nack paddy whack
give a dog a bone
this old man came rollin home

anon


y u nikin abu jeez sng 4 :p:rubeyes: vhch 1 d0o dey alvyz sng v r faaamlllyyy :rofl1: :rofl1: :rofl1:

RotiWala
10-12-06, 04:55 PM
:salams

i love u
u love me
together we're a happy family
with a nick nack paddy whack
give a dog a bone
this old man came rollin home

anon

ermm ok.. :rubeyes:

Unique Muslimah
10-12-06, 04:57 PM
:salams

i love u
u love me
together we're a happy family
with a nick nack paddy whack
give a dog a bone
this old man came rollin home

anon

that's just the classiest love poem of all time..:up:

RaNdOm
10-12-06, 04:57 PM
:salams

looool shurrup i fink really u just want this poem for ur wife or sumt... the old homework excuse :rolleyes:

RotiWala
10-12-06, 04:58 PM
:salams

looool shurrup i fink really u just want this poem for ur wife or sumt... the old homework excuse :rolleyes:

:wswrwb:

u m34n wives :D

Te'oma
12-12-06, 07:23 AM
Some of my poems that you can use, but give credit

Untie This

The anxiety is overwhelming at times
Afraid to say what is on my mind
Afraid to put everything out on the table
Just in case I cross the line
And I could loose all that
We have made
So I step very carefully
Sometimes I am just so panicked
That I could make a terrible choice
With you
I’m walking on eggshells around you at times
And I give you simple answers and smile my lies
Afraid, so I betray the truth to you
Just in case the gamble was too much
Trying to stay on the
Straight path I’m walking
I have to stop myself from doing simple things
Like holding your hand
Sometimes I’m just so panicked
Because it might be crossing
The line

Te'oma
12-12-06, 07:25 AM
This Must Be Salvation

Rising in sway as a mist off a lake
She piles her wonder upon feet
And takes
How I have waited so very long
Hypnotically moved, I eat this sound
Ears conduct Soul
Address Earthen ground
This must be salvation
You lock me with those snakes that I love
I smile in red, rushes the blood
To my cheeks
How freeing is this?
How feeding is this?
How needing is this feeling?
The feeling of wonderful submergence
Submergence to sink into
L
O
W
E
R
The air holds us
Oh how very thick it is
And my breathing is so very loud
In my fingertips
Touch…brush…sweet super awareness
Supergrip your golden palm’s ripe, lovely lips
We race here frozen within bright super stillness
I have waited so long
Every pore is perfection, Love
Every trial would pick and part away
Your thin, thin fears
Now how do you feel?
HOW DO YOU FEEL?
Reality is here but all is surreal
You drive from the song when you feel the tide
But I know these drums, they hum from inside.
I know
I know them well
How I have waited. How I have waited.
My beating heart speaks
And you caress these hot cheeks
There are a thousand messages
I can receive them all at last
Timeless unity
We melt into at last

Te'oma
12-12-06, 07:28 AM
Her

She works into my eyes
As I hold her face in my hand
So distant yet always here
Crying for her is not something chosen...
Here I am in tears suddenly
A beacon from afar,
I am reminded of her presence.
I need her, I know, but I need for
Her to be whole and happy more...
I need for her to have what is missing
Or I cannot be happy and her picture
will never be satisfyingor comforting
In a way she had wished it would be.
I need no picture for my scrapbook...
Scrapbooks are only my losses and recordings
Of failures in every human existance I've found.
Without her success
This photo becomes the final memory of tragedy...